AbhiRa OS: Summer Chills and Winter Rains - Page 4

Before I get to my comment, how many times did Abhi say "F**k" in this OS Mush? 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Honestly, when i started reading the OS, i didn't know what to expect. because the previous one was so good I just didn't think this one would beat that. but it did and HOW!

Never in my life did I think I would like a story where the guy gives the girl such cold shoulder. Honestly the way abhi was reacting even I got scared. cause he had always been such a sweet person to akshu. but holy shit when he said "It's dr abhimanyu birla, miss goenka", you said akshu got chills? scratch that and put my name, I GOT THAT FREAKING CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE. and omg when he said "You are 3 months too late", shit I felt like someone actually beat my heart up. i felt the pain reading that.

and thennnnn comes the aag wala scene uff. What a development to that scene. The way Abhi's anger changed into concern. actually not even concern, he was scared out of his wits AND his anger remained but this time not because what akshara did to him but for jumping into the fire to save a kid. oh the joy i felt

I feel like a sadist but ugh i have beeen wanting an accident scene for so long and you just fulfilled it.

and when abhi says "I will kill her with my bare hands if she doen't come out of the ER in one piece"

ufff what a dialogue Mush, what a bomb dialogue!!!!!!! just imagine me saluting you or this.

Honestly, abhi's sentiments were so well justified in this OS. and the transition was so freaking smooth: absolute angry man to concerned to all lovedovey uffff

the scene when he finally walks into the ER and sees akshu in the bed, eyes closed and all those monitors and tubes and IV and the way he was blinking back his tears: man WHAT A SCENE! i always love to see the soft side of the lead after he does all the outbursts. it just makes the scene a lot more worthy to read.

next is Akshu wiping his tears. omg that scene was so beautifully written. what a tender moment it was.

ok now abhi's third outburst lmaoooo. but well justified. akshu ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai.

The question made him feel a sudden surge of rage in his bones and the beast in him returned. His nostrils flared as he spat through gritted teeth, “What the F*CK is wrong with you Akshara? Did you leave your f*cking brain in Udaipur? Because I don’t see why anyone would jump in fire in their right mind.”

“The pillar would have fallen on the kid if -”

“TO HELL WITH YOUR KID ALRIGHT? THERE WERE EMERGENCY CREWS FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE!!”

“Yeah but there weren’t enough people and no one was-”

“Just shut the f*ck up before I lose my f*cking mind. You are one selfish woman, Akshara Goenka”

what an intense scene. THIS is exactly what i want to see in the show. the angry, intense abhi but angry because of her not taking care of herself. i just love love loveeeeddddd this scene so so much. and i know it sounds weird that he called her selfish but he said selfish because she didn't care what will happen to HIM if something had happened to her. I just love the kind of dialogues you put into your stories along with the detailed emotions. makes it all the much better👏

The bedroom scene will be in my next post because that scene needs a seperate appreciation post altogether 😳

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

This .... You are becoming a pro in leaving me speechless.... Nd you should have tagged me and others. Huh... But I will write a review later as it's long in my head nd currently I am in a time crunch. But this was beautiful Mush .... Nd you have depicted every emotion so so beautifully... Suddenly heartbreak seems more endearing

Bold: you stole words from my mouth! Sach mein i have never thought ki heartbreak aur angst itna pasand karungi mein

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Battamiz ladki😳

Awwie... Ab Mush ke pyaar ne mere ko badtameez bana hi diya... Kya karu

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Awwie... Ab Mush ke pyaar ne mere ko badtameez bana hi diya... Kya karu

Dekhna madam neend se jag kar bolegi “yeh kya chal raha hai mere thread pe” 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Dekhna madam neend se jag kar bolegi “yeh kya chal raha hai mere thread pe” 🤣🤣🤣

Abhira toh mil nhi rhe .. tum dono mere saath hi love lapata ka story bana lo 🤣

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Abhira toh mil nhi rhe .. tum dono mere saath hi love lapata ka story bana lo 🤣

Mush already thinks mera asmaanixxx k sath chalkar chal raha hai. Ab tere sath bhi agar shuru ho gayi mere character pe bohot bada daag par jaye ga🤣 aur sam bhi kya kya soch ne lagegi☺️

Speaking of sam, yeh hai kaha?

Oye kaha hai tu sam?

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Mush already thinks mera asmaanixxx k sath chalkar chal raha hai. Ab tere sath bhi agar shuru ho gayi mere character pe bohot bada daag par jaye ga🤣

Mush be like: Abhimanyu toh aise hi famous hai ... Huh. Mere se zyada pankhi thodi hai uski 🤣

Originally posted by: Mira_Pranali

Mushfika.... What a beautiful piece of writing!!! My heart nosedived to my stomach when she said Abhimanyu and he said Dr Abhimanyu Birla.. There are so many moments in the OS where my heart was in my mouth... when he saw her first in Pune and didn't react/ when she spoke to herself that she misses her family/ when he said call me Dr Birla/ when she was in ER/...incredible piece of writing!! I hope we get to see this kind of angst from Abhi in the show as well...I will reread it .. dil ko karar aaya in dono pe hai pyaar aaya..

Bold- mujhe lagraha tha ki mujhe hi panic attack ajayega when he asked her to call him dr Abhimanyu birla