Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 56

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Maine kuch notice kiya re-read mein..PM kar raha ☺️

Should I be worried? Galti se mistake ho gaya kya? 🤓

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hope that didn’t mess up things for ya! 😳

Most ppl on IF react like this when I say I’m a mom 😆

Waise I also have a fur baby (in addition to a human one) 😆

It didn't mess up anything at all. 😆 Infact, it's a joy to know that we have another momziee on board.🥱

@bold:

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Should I be worried? Galti se mistake ho gaya kya? 🤓

Nahi nahi nahi🤪

Ruko tho thoda...😆

Bechari Raavi. I love the way you portray the feelings so well in your writing

And I loved the twist at the end!

I dont understand what you didnt like about this part??😳

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Bechari Raavi. I love the way you portray the feelings so well in your writing

And I loved the twist at the end!

I dont understand what you didnt like about this part??😳

Thanks Hinna!

@Bold: maybe you can tell me what you liked about this part 😆

I just thought it didn’t quite come out that way I wanted it to 🤷🏽‍♀️

Kitna aage pahuncha agla?

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Kitna aage pahuncha agla?

Hiatus dinon wala tha ghanton wala nahi 😆

Haven’t started though have begun sketching the plot skeleton

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hiatus dinon wala tha ghanton wala nahi 😆

Haven’t started though have begun sketching the plot skeleton

Mujhe tho laga hiatus wala lafda sort kr diya tha maine 😭

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Mujhe tho laga hiatus wala lafda sort kr diya tha maine 😭

Imma sitting on dharna!

If I don't get longer reviews am not writing ! 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Imma sitting on dharna!

If I don't get longer reviews am not writing ! 😆

Diya tho reviewww 🥺