Abhira OS: Rain , Kiss & Confession 🌧😘💌

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@Silvertarax

Stunner

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Posted: 4 years ago

#21

Very well written, some of the lines were very brilliant too. For example, the rhythm one. How I wish this would happen on the show too 😳

Btw I was looking at your DP and it somehow fits with this story 😆

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Simran🥀

@Simran_h

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Posted: 4 years ago

#22

Awww😍😍😍 it was so sweet and perfectly done 💜 i was in abhira land while reading this 😍😍 plz do continue your Amazing work 👍👍❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 4 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Mridzy
I'm going to reply again, cause that was probably very brief... "The rhythm of his life" this line was beautiful.
A lovely piece. Keep writing more.

thank you darling so much ❤️

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 4 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Silveraliax
Very well written, some of the lines were very brilliant too. For example, the rhythm one. How I wish this would happen on the show too 😳

Btw I was looking at your DP and it somehow fits with this story 😆

thank you so much for appreciating my efforts❤️

Ha ha yes I just love this dp