Shivi FF: Chooriyan (Part 17- Pg.74) (complete) - Page 23

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Posted: 4 years ago

Read all the chapters in one go....It's a very nice story❤️❤️

Raavi being Dobi as well as cute

Some of the lines Shiva said in anger are really harsh even though she is Dobi but it hurts😭

Lets see how Shiva will make her understand about chooriyan although Dobi Raavi won't realize anything too easily she will continue making his life hell and I am sure of that🤣🤣

Waiting for next chapter Post it asap👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

So cute... Shivi Hug❤️

Raavi is proving that she really means it.

Even if its crazy😆

So who is going to help...??

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Posted: 4 years ago

💕💕❤️Amazing update…uff their hug😍🥰🥰

Please update soon 🥰😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

OMFG, Ananya! So glad to read these 7 parts consecutively.


By far, I think this Raavi gets the dobiest of all award🤣🤣. How has she survived thusfar, like how? Just how? Itni naive. Has she never come across real Laila Majnu story in her life? Did she never bother reading about her favorite story? Never even googled it?


Like how did she never come across anything like this in her life. Man, I feel for Shiva. Poor Shiva. Keeping aside my love for ShiVi, could imagine if some random thing you did for someone and the other person believed that to be some kind marital commitment? Haha, I'd go hide.


Looking forward to see how will Shiva make her see some sense!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aaaawww there hug was sooo sweet…

cant wait for the next chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Sprite,chips and chooriyan....My sexy life...am loving it😎

Ye kyun laal tamatar ke tarah sharma raha hai...ja noch kha Raavi ko🤨🤪

Also yeh kya kaand karne wala hai ....kaun person....phast phast update karo😘


Yaha ulta chal raha hai. Raavi noch khayegi Shiva ko 😂


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Wow another amazing update❤️

Raavi is still in her chooriyan jaap😆 And her craziness made take an extreme step!! But I loved her blind trust on Shiva❤️

Woahhhh we got the first proper hug...Shiva is also getting affected...lets see till when he will keep shooing Raavi away!!

Waiting for the next update to know where Shiva is taking Raavi..do update soon❤️


Thanks. Yup, Raavi is a bit extreme here 🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Way to a man's heart is through the stomach... Hence proved🤣!!! She made good lunch for him, he ended up hugging her... 🤣


Shiva Pandya loves his food…. Even more than he loves Raavi 🤭


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

Wonderful chapter.

The trust she had that Shiva would never let anything happen to her smiley20

Wonder whom Shiva is going to go to for help smiley36


The one and only…. Read the next one to find out 😂


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMFG, Ananya! So glad to read these 7 parts consecutively.


By far, I think this Raavi gets the dobiest of all award🤣🤣. How has she survived thusfar, like how? Just how? Itni naive. Has she never come across real Laila Majnu story in her life? Did she never bother reading about her favorite story? Never even googled it?


Like how did she never come across anything like this in her life. Man, I feel for Shiva. Poor Shiva. Keeping aside my love for ShiVi, could imagine if some random thing you did for someone and the other person believed that to be some kind marital commitment? Haha, I'd go hide.


Looking forward to see how will Shiva make her see some sense!


Yup, my dobiest Raavi so far 🤣

Poor Shiva. I feel bad for him too.


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