TS: Raos ki Laxmi | Pages- 1 & 7 - Page 6

Just read both parts - 👏

They were so good. I loved everything about it.

I NEED that kamarband scene to happen in the show now. Sigh. Can you be hired by the writers? They need you.

I loved the patch up, the way I imagine Raghav saying I love you - with his awestruck eyes. sigh.

Originally posted by: MsPrez

I am actually rewatching from the beginning and Raghav was saying this about Pallavi that only she has the courage to question him while everyone else bows down in front of him. Usse yeh dialogue banadia😆

I am kinda hoping Pallavi's educational qualification is explored more in the show. Since she is so obsessed with law, it would be great if she is shown as a Lawyer or something. Isi umeed mein apne harr write-up mein Pallu ke dialogues mein IPC sections add karti hoon😆

Oh yes now I remember he was telling similar dialogue to farad and harish 😊

Indeed it will be great to see her as lawyer. Kinda wife who work for law vs husband who work against law 😆

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Isske baad aur nahi karungi tag😳

Thanks for the tag dear .. it was a beautiful ❤️ one ..

Awww...this was so cute...the combination of Kathak and Bharatnatyam and admiring each other during the dance and them fighting and resolving their problem and their Telugu-Marathi talks--this was truly a RaghVi piece

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I’m a little late to this but this is so cute Ghamandi Rao and Saree Ka Dukan are made for each other

This was wonderful! Keep writing more!

Zasha this is your first work I've read and massive respect to you dude.

I'm in process of reading the rest of them in due course. But pehle take a 🤗 for writing so well. They behaved like Raghvi, spoke like Raghvi and were Raghvi.

It really felt like this is how they should have shown things in the show. Again, brilliant writing Zasha. Tumne dil jeet lia 🍉

Read both the chapters in one go and absolutely enjoyed reading them!! ❤️

Kaash aisa show mei bhi hota

Please keep writing on them