ShiVi OS: Make You Mine - Page 3

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

This was so beautiful cute and honest! Loved it!🌸🤍

Thank you hun ❤️

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

I'm here & I love you & please tag me next time 😭❤️

I feel both 🥰dil lelo mera & dil maange more🥰

Awwie okay, next time, I'll pakka tag you 😆❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Terrific!!

The scene had so much potential. I wish it was a bit longer than what it was in the episode.

Please keep writing more.

Lots of Love. ❤️

Thank you so much!❤️

And I will 🤗

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Aah my heart doesn't exist because you took it❤️

How beautifully you expressed their emotions and their decisions. Everything was just *chef's kiss*

Aww thank you so much, love!❤️

I'm so happy you enjoyed this piece!

Originally posted by: Dandellion_22

Hey sweetie, loved the OS🤗

You described Shivi's emotions so well

I feel Shivi talking like this will be so blissful to watch

Let's hope we get something similar like this in the future

Lovely OS in all❤️

Thank you for the kind words Praniti 🤗 I appreciate them so much!❤️

Indeed, Shivi having a conversation like this would be lovely to watch onscreen! Hope that time comes soon enough!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Shyna!!! I loved this OS!! This is the kind of golden opportunity the CVs always keep letting go of... The end right there, with Raavi insisting on Shiva putting a stop to any plans of remarriage? So gods damned cute!!!

PS Will you please, pretty please, make an index so I can read all your works when ever the hell I want to? I love re reading them, but I forget the titles so it's super hard to find them again... A list with just the titles should work too.... Consider it, please?

Aww thank you so much Sathya!❤️ I loved writing the ending to this a lot too! It was most definitely my favorite part even though it was short. I don't do well with serious pieces 😆

You have no idea how much this means to me!🤗

The fact that you think my work is worth rereading makes me so happy 💖

I have made an index in the FF archive thread on the MF. I'll paste the link below!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158231676

I might consider making a separate post with all my works soon!

Shyna!! You're the best🤗!! Thank you for the link..... ❤️

Blissy this was beautiful...Like I really don't have words to express how happy I am reading this. You made use of the moon gazing sequence in such an amazing way. Their conversation, Raavi's final outburst and Shiva's reaction to that was so heart touching and you have penned it down so well!!

I really wished we had got something like this on the show!!

Thank you so much for writing this❤️

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Blissy this was beautiful...Like I really don't have words to express how happy I am reading this. You made use of the moon gazing sequence in such an amazing way. Their conversation, Raavi's final outburst and Shiva's reaction to that was so heart touching and you have penned it down so well!!

I really wished we had got something like this on the show!!

Thank you so much for writing this❤️

Pri, thank you so much!❤️

It makes me so happy to know you loved it.🤗

I really wish their moon-gazing scene had led to some sort of convo - even just a little bit of small talk, not revolving around their current situation but alas, they're allergic to convos 😆 Hopefully, some convos happen soon in the near future!🤞

It was my pleasure writing this piece!🤗