Formula for 3.5+ trp - Page 4

Get a better actor as vamp and get Patralekha married to anaconda.

GUYS IM IMMENSELY THANKFUL TO Y’ALL FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND FEEDBACK. I’M HUMBLED BY ALL THE LOVE SHOWERED BY Y’ALL ON MY SCRIPT.

I HAVE MODIFIED AND COMPLETED THE STORY WITH A PROPER HAPPY ENDING. I REQUEST Y’ALL TO READ THE ENDING AND PROVIDE FEEDBACK.

Thanks 🖤

No.1StarPlusFan

Originally posted by: No.1StarPlusFan

GUYS IM IMMENSELY THANKFUL TO Y’ALL FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND FEEDBACK. I’M HUMBLED BY ALL THE LOVE SHOWERED BY Y’ALL ON MY SCRIPT.

I HAVE MODIFIED AND COMPLETED THE STORY WITH A PROPER HAPPY ENDING. I REQUEST Y’ALL TO READ THE ENDING AND PROVIDE FEEDBACK.

Thanks 🖤

No.1StarPlusFan

I stopped at Patralekha and Virat get married. Can you change it to Patralekha committing suicide or get her pregnant with the child of that police officer whose life Virat saved.

Also imho, this is a Ekta Kapoor type script. I don't know about others but doesn't gel well with me. Thanks and I appreciate your efforts

Thanks for your feedback. I do accept that the main inspiration I took is indeed from other shows only. I used elements from “Pavitra Rishta”, “Kumkum/Kundali Bhagya”, “Qubool Hai” , “Saath Nibhana Saathiya” , “Chhoti Bahu Season 1” and “Banoo Main Teri Dulhan” to create this amalgamation.

i apologise but I would not alter it as each step is interconnected and making a change means I must change subsequent steps too.

I assure you that for the short marriage period of Pakhi-Viraat they have no love or intimacy whatsoever as Virat’s heart only belongs to Sayi. Actually they were coerced into marrying each other as Pakhi is still obsessed with him and she keeps convincing Bhawani to let them get marrried. But once again sorry if you could not find my story acceptable.

Arre no..I appreciate your efforts. 😊 par haa if you go by this story, please no intimacy or love between Virat and Patralekha.