Raghvi OS continuation (current bts) on pg 7 24th Sept - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Version 2

Raghav was still watching her.....that's when flashback of Keerthi coming thru the door married to Sunny came, clenching his fist he stepped some steps back and moved away.....Pallavi saw Raghav going away "Raghav" she called out to him but he.....why....why doesn't he believe me....it was not my fault....Raghav please for once.....please.

After a while Raghav went back to his room to call it a day, Pallavi was not there....he removed his shirt while staring at the door "yeh Pallavi kaha....yahi kahi hoga" he thought to himself and climbed on to the bed to sleep.

Raghav was sleeping he opened his eyes when he turned around to see Pallavi was still not there, toching her side of the bed....it was cold as before. Raghav got up switching on the lights, he searched her in the bedroom but she was not there, he ran downstairs and started searching for her, he ran towards the main door but Pallavi was not outside either....

"Amma...amma" Raghav knocked on the door of amma's bedroom, amma came outside but before she could ask him anything Raghav spoke "amma..Pallavi aapke sath hai kya" he asked worriedly, amma got confused "mere sath kaiko hoga voh".

Raghav started sweating as he was dialing Farhad's number "hua kya hai kuch batayega" amma asked getting annoyed, "amma...Pallavi ghar pe nhi hai" Raghav answered "itni raat ko....voh shayad apna ghar..." before amma could further say anything "ghar" Raghav went back to his room to take the car keys...

He reached Deshmukh niwas and banged on the door loudly...Sharda opened the door "Raghav tu yaha kuch hua ha-", "aai...Pallavi yaha hai kya" Raghav asked but before she could answer everyone else came out of there respective rooms..

"ab kya tamasha karne aaya hai tu" Vijay asked while Raghav ignored him "nhi Raghav....Pallavi yaha nhi aayi" Sharda answered while Raghav got weak hearing that, his phone started ringing "anna dukaan toh bandh hai aur bhabi yaha pe bhi nhi hai" Farhad said, Raghav's face was getting more pale, before Sharda could ask anything further he went back...

Raghav in the car was searching for Pallavi while memories of her were flooding in his mind, he was panicking trying hard to control himself, amma was constantly calling him but he was not picking up her call......as his words were hitting back to him "mere paas aana bhi mat....Pallavi"....

Koi nhi....tere siva mera yaha

Manzilein...hai meri toh sab yaha

Mita de sabhi aaja faasle

Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le

Zara sa mujhme tu jhank le

Mai hoon kya?

Woo...aeee...aee...aaa

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

So guys just added a version 2 side of the story...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is way better then the current track on tv.


Loving it.


Tag me please 🧸


Take care 🙏🏽🌹

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Please continue soon. Loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

update dear.... loved it...😊

Edited by tazbuuuz - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monster08

Version 2

Raghav was still watching her.....that's when flashback of Keerthi coming thru the door married to Sunny came, clenching his fist he stepped some steps back and moved away.....Pallavi saw Raghav going away "Raghav" she called out to him but he.....why....why doesn't he believe me....it was not my fault....Raghav please for once.....please.

After a while Raghav went back to his room to call it a day, Pallavi was not there....he removed his shirt while staring at the door "yeh Pallavi kaha....yahi kahi hoga" he thought to himself and climbed on to the bed to sleep.

Raghav was sleeping he opened his eyes when he turned around to see Pallavi was still not there, toching her side of the bed....it was cold as before. Raghav got up switching on the lights, he searched her in the bedroom but she was not there, he ran downstairs and started searching for her, he ran towards the main door but Pallavi was not outside either....

"Amma...amma" Raghav knocked on the door of amma's bedroom, amma came outside but before she could ask him anything Raghav spoke "amma..Pallavi aapke sath hai kya" he asked worriedly, amma got confused "mere sath kaiko hoga voh".

Raghav started sweating as he was dialing Farhad's number "hua kya hai kuch batayega" amma asked getting annoyed, "amma...Pallavi ghar pe nhi hai" Raghav answered "itni raat ko....voh shayad apna ghar..." before amma could further say anything "ghar" Raghav went back to his room to take the car keys...

He reached Deshmukh niwas and banged on the door loudly...Sharda opened the door "Raghav tu yaha kuch hua ha-", "aai...Pallavi yaha hai kya" Raghav asked but before she could answer everyone else came out of there respective rooms..

"ab kya tamasha karne aaya hai tu" Vijay asked while Raghav ignored him "nhi Raghav....Pallavi yaha nhi aayi" Sharda answered while Raghav got weak hearing that, his phone started ringing "anna dukaan toh bandh hai aur bhabi yaha pe bhi nhi hai" Farhad said, Raghav's face was getting more pale, before Sharda could ask anything further he went back...

Raghav in the car was searching for Pallavi while memories of her were flooding in his mind, he was panicking trying hard to control himself, amma was constantly calling him but he was not picking up her call......as his words were hitting back to him "mere paas aana bhi mat....Pallavi"....

Koi nhi....tere siva mera yaha

Manzilein...hai meri toh sab yaha

Mita de sabhi aaja faasle

Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le

Zara sa mujhme tu jhank le

Mai hoon kya?

Woo...aeee...aee...aaa

Love it. Please continue.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Guys sorry but this was the end...😅

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Monster08

Guys sorry but this was the end...😅

what😳 pallavi kaha gyiii????? dont tell me ki ab tm v bolo ki nxt part k liye """'mere paas v mat aannaa."".🤔
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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Awesome 😻😍🤩

Please update the next part soon

Can't wait

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

What??? Noooo that can't be the end or is it?? 😲

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