ShiVi OS - "Sur hai na taal hai" (VM updated) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

Hawwwww this is 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Barkhaaaaa where have you hidden your writing talent all these days???? Or have i not come across your works on this forum???? 😲

Phirst time che ☺️

Makes me so happy to know you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Barkhaa!!! I'm in Shivi heaven right now!!! Do continue this, and why on earth haven't you written anything before this on IF girl?!!! 😍😘😍😘😍😘

❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜

Array array mere toh gaal laal ho rahe hai ☺️🤗

Thanks a ton yaar .. I'm not much of a writer ... more of a memer 🤣 but yeh wala pata nahin kaise ho gaya .. I mean it just struck me as I was making a VM ... what if .. the "Haan toh jaake marr" scenes was for Shiva and not Nalla ? What if she had gotten rejected by Shiva and hence the highway scene ? 🥺😒

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Phirst time che ☺️

Makes me so happy to know you liked it 🤗

Write MOREEEEE.

Also, you can put your AU series here 👍🏼

Omg that was so cute 😍

Especially the last part when he says thik se Beth and she took it wrong

It was awesome

Loved it

awwwwwww this was so adorable

she talked to suman directly😆 gal on mission

Ohhh this was so good when I tell you I felt that pang of hurt Raavi felt, I mean it. Dard hua, but thankfully Shiva's brain finally sprung into action 😆

Loved this one!❤️

Aww, I loved every moment! It was funny in the beginning (could totally imagine pre-wedding Raavi up to all these tricks to get Shiva's attention) and warm and cuddly in the end when Shiva had Raavi wrap her arms around his waist 🥰

Amazing job!

Barkhaa... How am I just finding out that you write??

This was so so good... Such a good spin on that scene.. And the fact that it takes her almost suicide mission for him to realise just how involved she is in his life was very heartwrenching.

I hope you keep spinning more tales of this Raavi and Shiva!

Ps: do you have any other work on here?? I'd love to read if you can direct me 😊😊

Awwww.. this was so warm and fuzzy! Raavi's unconditional love for Shiva and trying everything under the sun to win him over had all my heart

The final part subtly showing Shiva's acceptance and happiness was beautiful! ❤️

I loved it!

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

I knowwww 🤗

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