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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi everyone main hamesha sochti hoon ke show me mandar track ke baad jo kuch bhi dikhaya gaya hai us ke baad ab show se logic, deep conversations between the leads, story me continuity, flow, nice script, better editing, writing, direction expect karna chod dena chahiye aur ise sirf ek fictional show ke jaise entertainment ke liye dekhna chahiye but i dont know everyday new epi dekhne ke baad main itni frustrate ho jati hoon ke epi me dikhayi gayi mistakes loopholes ke bare me discuss kiye bina mujh se raha nahi jata

Aaj ka epi start ache se hua but us ke baad continuity kahan gayi dont know. Pehle to aayi sab janti thi aur mandar wedding nht aayi se milne gaya tha, is baat ne aur questions arise kar diye ke uske baad mandar hospital se kahan gaya dr ne raghav se jhooth kyu bola aayi ne 2 saal tak aise normally behave kaise kiya phir jo aayi ne vd aur mandar ke beech relation ko lekar baat ki thi cvs sab bhool gaye

Then after that raghav aur pallavi ka dress change karke ghar aana koi injury ka mark nahi aur dono aise lage jaise kuch khas hua hi nahi itne dino se pallavi ne jis fear pain ko feel kiya and recently raghav ka khud ko shoot karne ke liye ready hona for pallavi itni serious situation se bahar aane ke baad dono me koi deep conversation nahi heart to heart talk nahi hua kya ke dono aise ghar wapis aaye jaise party attend karke aaye ho aur us ke baad amma ke sath koi baat nahi dinner tak nahi kiya how insensitive

Then that romantic date jo mostly sab ko out of place lagi i mean makers ye bhi bhul gaye ke kis situation me kya dikhana chahiye itne dino baad dono ki life normal hui hai aur aate hi date past situation ke bare me koi baat nahi. agar sath me bethkar ek dusre se baat karte ke dono ne kya feel kiya itne time me aur aaj jo hua uska dono par kya effect hua to acha lagta but kuch nahi.

Aur jab consummation abhi dikhana hi nahi hai to useless reasons dekar use delay karna mujh to samjh nahi aaya. Agar abhi dikhana hi nahi to pallavi so gayi is liye nahi hua aise lame reasons kyu dikha rahe hain aur pallavi raghav ke door lock karne me hi so gayi jab ke thoda time pehle wo room me bhag rahi thi aur ready full thi consummation ke liye. My point is agar aaj dono me deep conversation dikha dete to jarurat hi nahi padti is date ki aur jab consummation dikhana hota tab date dikha dete aaj is lollipop ki kya jarurat thi. Aur pallavi ke bare me kya kahon kabhi wo honeymoon aur first night ki baat par normally react karti hai(in kitchen) aur kabhi use sharam a jati hai (in ayi,s room). Kabhi khud 1 month me honeymoon ki baat kehti hai. Dont know wo chahti kya hai.

Truly makers day by day show ko ruin karte ja rahe hain kabhi socha nahi tha show ka aisa haal hoga starting me kitna acha tha

Maine jo feel kiya wo keh diya please share your views.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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picture abhi baaki hai mere dost .Today/Tomorrow swamini pallaviananda will be giving bhashan wearing that kuchipidi thingy on her head pleej wait ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I will come back and reply in some time.

Been a busy day. Sorry fr d delay.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Haan sirf bhashan hi hai ab to dekhne ke liye jab show dekhna start kiya tha tab itni excitement thi ke kaise dino ki love story start hogi kaise story aage badhegi dono ke characters real life jaise lagte the but now mujhe to romantic scenes sab se zyada forced lagte hain kuch feel hi nahi hota nahi to pehle wait thi ke inke romantic scenes kaise honge bcs bina romance ke hi dono ke beech initial epi,s me sizzling chemistry thi

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please don,t say sorry i can understand.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: chokri

picture abhi baaki hai mere dost .Today/Tomorrow swamini pallaviananda will be giving bhashan wearing that kuchipidi thingy on her head pleej wait ☺️


Pallavi to Raghav : Mee marathi madhe suru zhaale na tar tujhya dokyala taap hoyil


Chahat to Pallaviananda: Tum Hindi mein shuru hoti ho na ab mera bheja fry hot hai


Wy her bhashans are reserved for patidev only


Raghav itna paisa hai patni ko ek pravchan channel khol ke de and then don't subscribe to that channel Lecture free life majja ni life

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I get your disappointment about the lack of continuity in the show. Shows can work widout continuity but then for that it has to be an episodic kind of show where everything is forgotten at the end of one episode. Since its not that kind of show and also bcz all this happened in just one episode ,it feels very out of place. Also I personally feel they could hv shown Raghav and Pallavi walking back home in the same clothes or normal daily wear rather than party wear. Its a bit weird that they appeared all decked up .


Secondly the date wouldnt hv seemed dt weird had they made them sit and talk about everything dt happened over the period of a month or more. Reminisicing how difficult that time was and how overcoming it together brought them closer . Also they could hv expressed how terrifying the day was wid them abt to lose each other. It would hv looked beautiful had they just placed some cushions in the garden area and they would hv sat cozily and discussed all this casually.


About the loopholes in Mandar track. I had put up a post yesterday only. Lots of questions hv been left unanswered and I highly doubt they are ever going to reveal dt. I mean where Mandar went frm the hospital and how Ved knew him could hv been explained todat itself in the flashback but they chose not to .....bcz they dont hv any answers fr all dt. Khair chodo. I hv zero expectations these days. I am glad atleast they explained his missing from wedding nyt.


Other than all this ......I personally hv no complaints abt consummation track. Being tired is a valid reason too. Besides consummation tracks are dragged in every show. Personally I enjoy the romantic scenes more and the emotional ones between couples too.

Also Pallavi isnt inconsistent. She is ready to take their relationship ahead but that doesnt mean she wont feel embarrassed if Raghav talks it in a room where Sharda is present. It is embarrassing. And she is ready for the nexr step matlab yeh toh nai she cant run around and tease him or feel shy when he comes closer. Personally I didnt find anything wrong here

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Personally mujhe bhi movies ya shows me consummation ya unnecessarily romance pasand nahi but my point is ya to wo dikhate hi nahi ke raghav aisa chahta hai jaise sab keh rahe hain ek hug hi kafi tha dono apni pain apne fears ek dusre ko kho dene ka, jo bhi dono ne face kiya mandar ke aane ke baad wo share karte or then they fall asleep

Jaise situation se wo bahar aaye the consummation to fit hi nahi hota uske baad only heart to heart talk or hug. But ye dikhakar cvs ne disappoint kar diya like always. I mean jab consummation dikhana hi nahi tha to delay karne ke useless reason na dekar jo dikhana chahiye tha wo dikhate aise to track ki continuity or jo story chal rahi thi uska essence bhi khatm kar diya.

Aur pallavi ke bhagne se meri matlab ye tha ke uske baad within 1 sec wo so bhi gayi jo lame reason laga mujhe

And one more point raghav ne pallavi aur uske natak ke bare me pehle hi sunny ko bata diya tha agar wo mandar ko bata deta to raghav ne uspe itni jaldi trust kaise kiya?

Wo mandar ke sath mila hua bhi to ho sakta tha please explain

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I hope now you get my point

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi


Pallavi to Raghav : Mee marathi madhe suru zhaale na tar tujhya dokyala taap hoyil


Chahat to Pallaviananda: Tum Hindi mein shuru hoti ho na ab mera bheja fry hot hai


Wy her bhashans are reserved for patidev only


Raghav itna paisa hai patni ko ek pravchan channel khol ke de and then don't subscribe to that channel Lecture free life majja ni life

He told her about this channel in one of their fights. Maybe he should do it for her and open up saree showrooms in the mall to keep her busy. 😆

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