Why poorly written ?

To start with, I knew something of this sort was going to happen in todays episode. Though I was excited for raghvi but I had kept my expectations low.

Well, this is about poor writing of the character Pallavi. I have absolutely loved her character and will always love her by reminiscing the good old mhrw days. But I literally feel bad that I am loosing the connect nowadays. Whenever the episode portrays her in her real sense, I feel the connection but its kind of on and off. Makers do not maintain the consistensy and kind of ruining it for me.

For me mhrw is raghvi story. I just love the RR don mode to infinity but only the swag and fighting cannot make for a good serial.

Oh my god!! I am still not able to get over the fact that I am loosing connect with Pallavi char.

RR is a well written character and looks like makers put more efforts into his character than Pallavi's. Her past not explored, her pov not shown, her love for raghav not shown.

I know , the concept of love cannot be the same for two individuals. Rr is hopeless romantic, he is madly in love with her. For pallavi it might be cooking may be its her love language. Makers beautifully wrote P character till hyderabad days and now it seems they are not interested in her character and sometimes I feel they are not interested in the show anymore. Just because they have the time slot, they are running it.

I really feel bad for Shivangi as she is like a breathe of fresh air in todays times and she really stands out among the current actresses.

She is tall, she looks gorgeous and she also emotes in a beautiful manner. Her character writing should be given attention ,afterall its Pallavi's mehndi jo rachnewaali hai !! .

May both Saishi get good future projects!.

Sorry for long post.

I think the makers are themselves losing interest in the show.

Its not uncommon. Many a times people just hv a concept in mind and start off the show wid dt concept widout thinking abt the story progression. So they keep moving the story along widout a proper idea of where the destination is. And in the meanwhile lose their own interest in the story.

Also agreed abt character sketching . Seems the makers dont weigh character sketches while writing the scenes .

Originally posted by: DaffodilsNew

I think the makers are themselves losing interest in the show.

Its not uncommon. Many a times people just hv a concept in mind and start off the show wid dt concept widout thinking abt the story progression. So they keep moving the story along widout a proper idea of where the destination is. And in the meanwhile lose their own interest in the story.

Also agreed abt character sketching . Seems the makers dont weigh character sketches while writing the scenes .

I dont know why they are not changing the writers after failure of Mandar track.

Pallavi's dialogue writer has to be replaced as soon as possible; Pallavi had never been showered with so many expensive gifts, it is natural that she’ll feel overwhelmed , it might have been a heartwarming moment had they shown her appreciation and hesitant yet delighted state of mind at Raghav’s gesture, but they made the entire sequence into a dull lecture.

Pallavi is also clearly eager for intimacy with her spouse, but writers are hell-bent on portraying her as a romance killer these days to postpone consummation, do they find it funny ?

Pallavi was different from regular itv fls but these days they’re changing her into typical one , they put so much efforts into building Raghav’s backstory but Pallavi’s story is never explored much, writers add unnecessary tadka there.

I do feel bad for Shivangi, her talent and Pallavi’s potential are being wasted because of stupid writers.

Originally posted by: DaffodilsNew

I think the makers are themselves losing interest in the show.

Its not uncommon. Many a times people just hv a concept in mind and start off the show wid dt concept widout thinking abt the story progression. So they keep moving the story along widout a proper idea of where the destination is. And in the meanwhile lose their own interest in the story.

Also agreed abt character sketching . Seems the makers dont weigh character sketches while writing the scenes .

I assume channel interfered and makers brought in Mandaar but could not execute track they had in mind properly because of backlash their pathetic writing received.

Still they’re not rectifying that mistake. They have chance to revive show but unless they understand that Raghvi is USP not family drama , they aren’t getting good reviews.

And for RaghVi to work, both leads should be as strong as they were before Mandaar track.

Originally posted by: Couch.Potato

Pallavi's dialogue writer has to be replaced as soon as possible; Pallavi had never been showered with so many expensive gifts, it is natural that she’ll feel overwhelmed , it might have been a heartwarming moment had they shown her appreciation and hesitant yet delighted state of mind at Raghav’s gesture, but they made the entire sequence into a dull lecture.

Pallavi is also clearly eager for intimacy with her spouse, but writers are hell-bent on portraying her as a romance killer these days to postpone consummation, do they find it funny ?

Pallavi was different from regular itv fls but these days they’re changing her into typical one , they put so much efforts into building Raghav’s backstory but Pallavi’s story is never explored much, writers add unnecessary tadka there.

I do feel bad for Shivangi, her talent and Pallavi’s potential are being wasted because of stupid writers.

Rightly said, for postponing the consummation they are making pallavi as romance killer because she has also shown advances towards Raghav in the hyderabad track and the track that followed. I dont know why makers are hell bent on making us loose our connection with her.

And yes, why the lecture parade like other FL s?

Originally posted by: Owia

Rightly said, for postponing the consummation they are making pallavi as romance killer because she has also shown advances towards Raghav in the hyderabad track and the track that followed. I dont know why makers are hell bent on making us loose our connection with her.

And yes, why the lecture parade like other FL s?

Yes, she has shown advances even before love realisation, why change that aspect of her character post confession ?

Even recently she went secretly to meet him , expressed desire to live like normal couple , go on honeymoon..etc and then after all this , they show her saying dialogues like - “kya kar rahe ho ? Kya bole rahe ho ?” when she could have simply said - “Raghav control Aai is here.”

She was such a nice female lead but they’re destroying her to fulfill what their script demands 👎🏼.

Originally posted by: Couch.Potato

Pallavi's dialogue writer has to be replaced as soon as possible; Pallavi had never been showered with so many expensive gifts, it is natural that she’ll feel overwhelmed , it might have been a heartwarming moment had they shown her appreciation and hesitant yet delighted state of mind at Raghav’s gesture, but they made the entire sequence into a dull lecture.

Pallavi is also clearly eager for intimacy with her spouse, but writers are hell-bent on portraying her as a romance killer these days to postpone consummation, do they find it funny ?

Pallavi was different from regular itv fls but these days they’re changing her into typical one , they put so much efforts into building Raghav’s backstory but Pallavi’s story is never explored much, writers add unnecessary tadka there.

I do feel bad for Shivangi, her talent and Pallavi’s potential are being wasted because of stupid writers.

Very true.....begin with they made her so different from rest now turn into typical ITV bahu... Resulted

Entire fan hating Pallavi again blacklash....Shivangi doesn't deserved all this.

Sandeep Writer do not understand this show doesn't have typical viewers who love high aadarsh bahu....

I lost my connection with Pallavi the day she mouthed duty vs love dialogue!!

When will ITV start to show something natural without interruptions and what not? Pallavi has been having a very strong physical attraction towards Raghav & now they have reduced her into I don't what?