Riansh fs - We deserve better.. part 5 page 4 complete

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey so this is a request by Drna7 and i would really appreciate if you guys will comment..please do try..


Part 1


Riddhima was in her favorite coffee shop, today she had taken a day off, being a physiotherapist is something she loves but she too needs some time for herself and time away from her patients.


She was drinking coffee and enjoying her blueberry muffin, she was sitting near the window and enjoying the view, when a couple stopped right in front of her window and they were hugging and kissing..


Embarrassed, sad and hurt she looked, remembering how unlucky she is in love, one person she loved didn't love her and betrayed her, and the person who she thought was a monster was the one who loved her genuinely.


Her phone pinged and it was a message from her 'brother' Rohan, he informed her to come back to the house, he wanted her to meet his girlfriend, and he couldn't stop gushing about her. Smiling, at least someone has a good luck in love department..she finished her coffee and muffin and got ready to go back.


One hour before


Rohan was nervous and sweating, he wanted Sia to meet his sister but she asked him to meet her brother first, she wanted his approval first so, here he was standing at her penthouse door, he knocked

S- Rohan, you came..

R- Aana toh tha na. I really love and care about you.. waise agar your bhai kills me please inform my sister.

S- Oh Shut up bhai is not that scary..

R- Yeah..right..Anyways where is he?


Vansh was looking at the collage of his and Riddhima's photos. After knowing about Anupriya's betrayal, he didn't want to stay in the VR mansion eventhough he still cared about them, he caressed the collage

V- Why did you leave Sweetheart..i would have been angry but i still wanted to give a relationship a chance..

V- Where are you? Sia called him from the living room and he went..outside.

S- Bhai, this is Rohan.

R- Hello Mr.Raisinghania.

V- I will only say this once, if you hurt my sister i will kill you..

R- You know, you exactly sound like my sister Riddhima..

V- Riddhima?

R- Aare haan, aaj mein Sia ko milwane wala tha, aap log bhi aa jaye..

V- We will..


Riddhima was preparing the noodles, and salad. She also made dessert, she knew that Rohan usually gets hungry when he is super nervous, she really hoped that this girl truly loved him, she heard the door opening, she went outside the kitchen wiping her hands,

Ri- I hope you guys are hungry..i made a lot of food...Vansh?

V- Riddhima..?

S- Bhabhi..?


Ps- How was it guys? Please do comment it will motivate me to write and this time i am serious if there are no comments, i will not write more.. Also please suggest me a title if possible.

Part 1- page 1

Part 2- page 3

Part 3- page 3

Part 4- Page 3

Part 5- Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very Interesting

Awesome

Update Soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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They're gonna meet again

Continue soon, Raveena

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Zor ka jhatka laga.....off course bhuk aur badh gayi hogi dishes ke nam sunke๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

Quite a different take on RiAnsh...... amazing update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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Posted: 4 years ago
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loved this part raveena. keep it up.

cant wait for the next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its good!! Looking forward for the story to unfold! ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ™Œ

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow such a interesting update ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

It is such a marvellous and amazing update ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

There is one request Please make it slow ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

And Ridhu ka bhai very interesting ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

And at the end cliffhanger ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

I really loved it..

I want something like this ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for writing on my request..โค๏ธ

Interesting chapter, waiting for next.

Sia and Rohan angle is nice.

Snake family RiAnsh aur Sia se dur hi rehni chahiye...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Wow such a interesting update ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

It is such a marvellous and amazing update ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

There is one request Please make it slow ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

And Ridhu ka bhai very interesting ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

And at the end cliffhanger ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

I really loved it..

I want something like this ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜


Aare slow pace mein na, beech mein writing ka maan nahi hota, five shots hi theek hain..aur jayada chapter mein logo ka interest bhi chala jata hain..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drna7

Thanks for writing on my request..โค๏ธ

Interesting chapter, waiting for next.

Sia and Rohan angle is nice.

Snake family RiAnsh aur Sia se dur hi rehni chahiye...


Request mein you said family is positive ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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