ShiVi OS: Raavi kaise na jale

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Disclaimer:

I don't watch Pandya Store. Watched only one episode. I read ShiVi FFs & thought to write one OS. I don't know characters much. Sorry in advance for any mistakes. I am not good at writing; so please bear with me

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It was a normal day for Somnath & Pandya family

ShiVi as usual at loggerheads

Shiva : Dhara Bhabhi jaldi se naashta dedo. Dukan ke liye niklata hoon. Iss se chhutkara mil jayega

Raavi: Ha tu toh aise sochega hi. Ja mujhe bhi shaanti milegi

Krish: Aur mujhe bhi

Shiva: Kya bola?

Dhara: Jaane do. Thepla kha chal

Shiva left for stores

The girl Nisha who came to Somnath for few days at her Bua's place came to PS to buy Bisleri

Shiva handed her that & she was smitten

Shiva immediately went to store room

but that girl went little bit away from stores & was observing him

Her sister came & asked who is He

She said are ye toh Somnath ka famous Shiva hai

Nisha was happy

At Home

Raavi: Di kabhi Shiva ki shaadi ke liye koi ladki aapke mann mein thi kya?

Dhara: Nahi Aisa kuch nahi

Krish thought ye bhabhi bhi na, accha mauka tha Raavi Bhabhi ko jalane ka. Maza aata mujhe

Raavi sighed a breath of relief

Raavi (in mind) - Ye maine abhi abhi Dhara di se kya pucha? Like seriously. Tujhe ho kya gaya hai. Shiva ki shaadi kisi se bhi tay hui ho ya na ho, tumhein kya farak padta hai. Tu uski biwi hai ab. She smiled

At Night

Raavi: Agar teri shaadi mujhse nahi hui hoti toh tu kis se karta? Kuch socha hoga na tune

Shiva: E chipkali! Kya bol rahi hai tu. Aaj tak mujhe ladkiyon se bolte hue dekha hai kya jo main aisa sochunga. Ye aise tedhe sawal tu hi kar sakti hai. Mujhe sona hai ab

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2-3 days passed

Nisha everyday used to visit stores in the pretext of interacting with Shiva to buy any items

That day She came but Krish gave her items as Dev, Gaumbi & Shiva went out to buy wholesale maal

Nisha: Tum! Har roz toh woh dusra ladka hota hai na

Krish: Ha woh bahar gaya hai. Aapko saaman mil gaya na

Nisha: Haan

Krish: Kaka ye ladki kaun thi? Shiva ke baare mein kyu puch rahi thi

Kaka: Ye ladki har roz aati hai store. Nayi hai Somnath mein. Shayad kisi ki rishtedaar hai. Aur dur se Shiva ko dekhti thi. Raavi beti ko sambhalne ko bolo

Krish chuckled smiley36

At Home:

Krish: Raavi Bhabhi Raavi Bhabhi

Raavi: Kya hua Krish? Itna kyu chilla raha hai

Krish: Baat bhi toh important hai

Raavi: Toh bol

Krish: Bhabhi mujhe dukh raha hai ye kehte hue but ab aap donon ke beech woh aa gayi hai

Raavi: Kaisi bakwas baatein kar raha hai tu? Thik se bol

Krish: Toh suniye. Aaj kal store pe ek ladki roz aati hai

Raavi: Toh accha hai na. Humara profit hoga

Krish: Are aap samjhi nahi. Shiva ko dekhne ke liye aati hai. Samaan toh bahana hai. Baaki aap chronology samjhiye. Kaka ne aapko warn karne ko bola tha. Main toh chala.

Raavi was fuming with anger but could not show in front of Krish

She angrily served dinner to Shiva at night

Dhara was confused

only Krish knew real reason

ShiVi Room:

Shiva: Aaj itni nafrat dikhane ki kya zaroorat thi bahar? Bhabhi ko kya lagta

Raavi: Tujhe kya? Store par to aaj kal bahut accha lagta hoga tujhe

Shiva: E! Kya bol rahi hai? Kaam toh mujhe pasand hai hi

Raavi: Tu so ja sundar ladkiyon ke sapne dekh

Shiva: Ab chup rahegi. Pata nahi kuch bhi bolti hai

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Next morning

Breakfast

Shiva: Aaj jaldi dukaan par jaana hai

Raavi: Ha tu toh jaldi jaldi khaake ladkiyon se (seeing Dhara) I mean customers ke paas jayega hi

Raavi (to herself): Waise mujhe Shiva pe bharosa hai aur ye Krish mazak bhi toh kar sakta hai. Dekhne jaoon ya na jaoon? Jaati hi hoon. Aur agar koi ladki hui bhi toh, mujhe kya farak padta hai

Raavi went to stores in pretext of bahut din ho gaye gayi nahi

Nisha came there

Today she came to ask nailpaint

Shiva showed shades

She showed her nails to him & asked him to see carefully & tell which shade suits her

Raavi was burning with jealousy

She came at the counter & said kya chahiye tujhe I mean aapko

Nisha: Ji aap kaun? Woh dikha rahe the na

Raavi: Main unki wife hoon. Batao kya chahiye

Nisha stammered & said k...kuch nahi. Bye

Raavi smiled

Shiva: Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Raavi took him to store room

Raavi: Ab tak toh main taane maar rahi thi but ab face to face bolti hoon. Kya hai ye sab. Main store aati nahi toh tu ye sab karega. Ladkiyon se pyaar se baatein karega?

Shiva: Ye kya bol rahi hai tu? Dimag kaam nahi kar raha kya?

Raavi: Dekha maine kaise bata raha tha ki nailpaint ki kaun si shade uspe jachegi

Shiva: Main ladkiyon se baat nahi karta. Tujhe pata hai. Aur itna gussa karne ki kya zaroorat hai

Raavi: Gussa na karoon toh kya karoon? Woh toh accha hua Kaka ne mujhe warn kiya Krish ke through. Ab main yahi rukungi jab tak tu yaha hai. Woh ladki phir se aa gayi toh!

Shiva: Shaq karna band kar. Tujhe rukna hai toh ruk par mera dimag mat kharab kar

Shiva wondered isse kya hua

At evening

Krish told all information that Nisha will live here for 8-10 days

Raavi fumed & declared in front of everyone that she will go to store for 4-5 days to help Shiva

Krish understood

Shiva irritated & went to room

Krish: Bhabhi jealousy ki spelling kya hai

Raavi: Tu jayega yaha se

Krish laughing & ran away

ShiVi Room:

Raavi: Sorry maine over react kiya. Mujhe tujhpar vishwas hai. Par main bhi insecure ho gayi. Tu toh bhola hai. Tu jaisa bhi hai mera pati hai, mera apna hai. Aur main nahi dekh sakti tere saath koi flirt kare toh

Shiva was glad that she started accepting him

Shiva: Are mera vishwas kar. Main sach mein kisi ladki se baat nahi karta tere siva. Tu hai na mera sabkuch. Bakbak machine, satane wali par meri patni. Chalo so jaate hai kal tum bhi aa rahi ho na dukan par

Raavi hugged him & they slept peacefully!

THE END

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Special Thanks to GrilledCheese, Swastika & Sara for helping & encouraging me

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Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa


I LOVED IT BUB ❤️

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE 🥺👉👈

& TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE :))

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loved it I’m always a fan of Raavi putting other girls in their place 🥳

please write more!!

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I reallllyy loveee this..

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Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

loved it I’m always a fan of Raavi putting other girls in their place 🥳

please write more!!

Thank You

Would love to see jealous Raavi (only cute jealousy)

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YOU ARE BACKKK
It felt amazing reading your work again

I used to love your stories in THR forum

Do write more on shiviii

Lots of love ❤️

Amazing OS ❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

YOU ARE BACKKK
It felt amazing reading your work again

I used to love your stories in THR forum

Do write more on shiviii

Lots of love ❤️

Amazing OS ❤️❤️

Hi

Glad to meet you here

@bold - Thank You So Much!❤️

Will write if I will get idea

I love jealous FLs

they look soo cute❤️

(only cute, funny jealousy)

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