SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 59

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Posted: 4 years ago
Pahle he lakshman shakti ka part ab to durr lag raha hai muze because ye Indrajeet bhi ye ker sakta hai 🥺 . Poor Urmila aur urmila he nahi sari sisters ke liye bura lag raha hai . Kranti khud ko blame ker rahi hai jabki uski mistake hai bhi nahi 🥺 . Shruti kitni mature ho gai hai ☺️ . Such me is family me sab apne app ko he blame karte rehte hai 🥺. Lakshman urmila ki conversation 💔 urmila ke complaints 🤭. Lakshman ko kyu negative thoughts aa rahe hai 🥺😰 kya shakti part aane wala hai 😱 . Lakshmila ka pahle bhi separation hua tha and abhi bhi separation 😰 bus is baar bahot durr lag raha hai 💔 muze ab lakshman ke liye Durr lag raha hai kyuki ager ise kuch bhi hua to ram bilkul seh nahi paega 😭😭😭 . Indrajeet and Raghavan 😡🤬 dono ke done se ab itni nafrat hone lagi hai ki esa lag raha hai ki inki jaan le lu 🗡️ . Kaikasi ki baat bhi nahi mani Raghavan ne 🤬 . Indrajeet ab lakshman ne ladne jaane wala hai 😡 lakshman ise awkat dikha dega . Sulochana ne letter he he diya letter chota tha but usme bahot emotions the 🥺. Sulochana ne sab bata diya lakshman ko . Kitna gussa ho gaya lakshman jab use pata chala to aur koi kyu gussa nahi hoga . Siya ke baje se laksh chup ho gaya warna aaj bahot kuch ho jata . But itna muze pata hai ki ab indtejeet gaya 😎 . UPDATE SOON ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 4 years ago

@Sammy: yes, it's quite exciting now (according to me atleast, lol). The track will be focused on inder's destruction now. Finally the first step.!

And no you are not an emotional fool, it's just that we all are so much into the story that we are feeling their happiness and pains too.

And how Raghvan wants to welcome Ram and Lakshman, let's see in the upcoming part.


@Shanoka: thanks a ton dear, I know you were eagerly waiting for this track. Ramayana phrases gives us that hint for the upcoming tracks, isn't it.? Answering your question, yes it's moving towards the same track which is one of the important fights in the battlefield.

Raghvan is seriously pakao with his words. Or else I have made him more pakao, wink wink. Now this father son is planning against the sena first.!

Lakshman's anger we all enjoy, and then imagining Karan's face and expressions with the track is something out of the world feeling, ahh.! I wish while writing I could portray everything through video 🤭🙈

And as I told you, a twist coming up soon, for that part only we would witness somewhat shattered Urmila, after which she is going to be strong.!


@Vishakha: everyone is changed for good in the family now. We have already witnessed mature ShruGhan taking everyone's care. LakshMila conversation very much needed, specially for the upcoming track. Darr lagna is obvious, and Lakshman is getting that negative thoughts too. Kaikasi was acting selfish still she tried for the best, to get things normalise. But abb der ho chuki hai, Inder ka already number lag chuka hai. Let's see what's next.?


Thank you for the comments, stay tuned ❣️😘

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Posted: 4 years ago

I actually not getting words to say right now. This chapter has tongue tied me because it carries a strong vibe of some nightmare coming true alongwith the hope that there will be a beautiful sunrise after the nightmare. Throughout the chapter and even now , my heart is racing at jet speed. I don't have words to say about the episode. And believe me if your reader is tongue tied because of your great writing skills then this is the biggest proof that you have successfully accomplished your work. Today I am not going to say anything about the episode because I am really not getting a single word to say or comment, but today I wanna say something for you....

Somu you had become an important part of my heart..

Your words are always with me though we are miles apart..

I think of you and your words each passing day

Never wanna to get distanced from you in anyway.

Coz you , yes you are one of best thing I had received in my life,

You are that light which makes my life more happy and bright.

Right from the day I met you,

One thing with surety I knew,.

That you are like no other,

Will definitely gonna have a friendship with no rules or order.

With each passing day, I love to become a dieheart fan of you,

The way I had started living my life after reading your story,had made all the problems of my life to flew.

When I say something for you,

My words are absolutely true,

Coz you, yes you are the one of the best thing I had got for myself in my life..

When I go to sleep in night, or sit idle in day,

It's the thoughts of your story in my mind that makes the way,

You are always in my mind,

And I'll love to be your friend till the end of time..

I am sure , that I'll not gonna find a friend like you,

Who is unknown yet know and true in my life

Coz you, yes you are the best gift of my life..

And I want you,

Yes I need you,

Stay forever as you are in my life..

Love you loads and loads.........💖💖💖💖💖💖

Update soon 🥺🥺🥺

Will be eagerly waiting for the next......

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Posted: 4 years ago

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What a dhamakedar update Saumya! Loved it 🤩

You brilliantly put the Ramayana parts where its needed. Liked when Shruti and Manvi scold Dashrath and Kranti and that small light hearted moment. Poor Urmila, tried to tell Lakshman everything, but could not. Lakshman being restless, is this indicating towards the infamous Nagapash and vasavi shakti part?

Why Raghvan speaks in riddle? I am sure, most of his enemies accepted defeats because of his pakao baatein. How can a father permit his own son to kill someone? And at least Kaikesi being selfish kuch to akkalwale baatein ki. And Suvarna, she became a joker by now.

Ram got motivation from Siya, and she predicted right! Her words made Lakshman calm. Well, I enjoyed Lakshman's anger 🙊 But also felt bad for Sulochona, either something happen to Indrajeet or not, she is the one who have to suffer the consequence.

Can I request you something? If you are going to include that first part of Lakshman-Indrajeet fight, can you please show Urmila to be stronger? If it goes with the story.

Enjoyed reading a lot! 😘

I too want to see Urmila strong in this. And as much I have understood saumya's perspective I guess she will be portraying Urmila as strong and handling everyone in the family, rough guess !!

Plus, I am eager to know the siblings reaction and bond in this, though it is obvious that everyone will be heartbroken but still I am excited

PS- wanted to tag you Saumya, but nahi hua 🙈

Edited by Sammy04 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

I am really worried about Urmila after all this & she is in fear too ... I loved the small but necessary chat of Lakshman & Urmila to support each other

Maanvi & Shruti are now scolding their mother & Father in laws for blame game was so cute & nice😊

So Raghvan still is not listening to his mother who is actually now giving her correct advice ... Sahi kaha vinaash kaale vipareet buddhi

Now he took it on his ego without knowing the reality ... Even Inder is in his own world hope they see the truth before it's late

So Sulochna & Trishala met Ram & Lakshman giving him message of Siya & also told him about the Inder evil plans

Lakshman was bound to erupt like a volcano but he calmed listening to Siya words which made all emotional

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

@Khyati: I know you all are excited now, for Laksh Inder fights, yes I am excited too.!! Areh and the poem...... Wah partner, tussi to bohot vadhiya poem shoem likhte ho.! Come on I am not replying you with emotional words now but yes I loved this poem a lot. Thanks for your words, muah muah.!!


@Sammy: smart you are.! 😜


@Goldie: yes dear, LakshMila conversation was much much needed. They are distance apart still they support each other, getting scared with this unknown silence now.!

Kaikasi, still she is being selfish still she atleast told Raghvan to release Siya. She doesn't have any soft corner for Siya, but she is getting scared for her family.

Sulochana told Lakshman everything, again a very important part. Lakshman was about to blast on Inder, but thankfully listen to Siya's advice. But let's see till when he is stopping himself.?


Thank you for the comments, stay tuned ❣️😘

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update❤️

LakshMila conversation was very emotional... Lakshman ko aane wale storm ka feel ho raha hai... Dashrath n Kranti ke liye i felt bad...they have always that is better for their all 8 children still kuch aisa ho jata hai unn sab me sath 🥺

Yeh Raghavan ko toh ab khud Bhagwan ji bhi aamar nhi samjha sakte...isko ab naa bas Ran hi apne tarike se samjha sakta hai...normal bhasha samjh ni aati inhe😤they people think that Raghuvanshis weak hai isliye shant hai...

And Siya ka letter...Siya chahe kitni bhi durr ho Ram se still she is the only one to calm and soothe Ram...his never-ending support system...

And finally ab tufan ki taiyari ho gayi.. Lakshman got to know about Inderjeet's intention...

Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali00

Superb update❤️

LakshMila conversation was very emotional... Lakshman ko aane wale storm ka feel ho raha hai... Dashrath n Kranti ke liye i felt bad...they have always that is better for their all 8 children still kuch aisa ho jata hai unn sab me sath 🥺

Yeh Raghavan ko toh ab khud Bhagwan ji bhi aamar nhi samjha sakte...isko ab naa bas Ran hi apne tarike se samjha sakta hai...normal bhasha samjh ni aati inhe😤they people think that Raghuvanshis weak hai isliye shant hai...

And Siya ka letter...Siya chahe kitni bhi durr ho Ram se still she is the only one to calm and soothe Ram...his never-ending support system...

And finally ab tufan ki taiyari ho gayi.. Lakshman got to know about Inderjeet's intention...

Continue soon 😊

LakshMila conversation, yes very much needed. Though laksh is not feeling good.. Dashrath and Kranti always wished good for their kids, but kuch na kuch ho hi jata hai, though not their fault.!

Raghvan abb baat karne se bohot upar uth chuka hai, neither he will understand words nor ghuse and thappad.!!

Siya's words for Ram, amd Ram got ready to fight.! Yaayy.!! The countdown begins....

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Posted: 4 years ago

awsome update somu...the family is really going through their toughest phase...but these rajrishi girls are idols....the way they handle every situation is too good...this son and father duo is pathetic....kekasi bhi warn kar di..but still these bad lankeshwars are sooo intrested in their destruction....finally the truth is revealed to laksh.....i cant comment more somu...and so sorry fornot commnet on the previous update....i will try my level best to not skip commenting on any update....mom problems...hope you understand....love you as always somu....my oxyge giver....jai siya ram.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

awsome update somu...the family is really going through their toughest phase...but these rajrishi girls are idols....the way they handle every situation is too good...this son and father duo is pathetic....kekasi bhi warn kar di..but still these bad lankeshwars are sooo intrested in their destruction....finally the truth is revealed to laksh.....i cant comment more somu...and so sorry fornot commnet on the previous update....i will try my level best to not skip commenting on any update....mom problems...hope you understand....love you as always somu....my oxyge giver....jai siya ram.

Rajrishi girls are seriously to look at to earn so many things in life.!! The positivity, the humanity, the maturity they have is important for one in his or her life.

Kaikasi's words went unheard. Amd wht not she was the one who never listen to the good people in her house. And now, pachatane se kya hoga?

It's ok Hema, I said you don't have to feel sorry 😌😌 will update soon. ❤️

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