ShiVi TS: For My Chikki - Page 6

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful ❤

Thank you !

Originally posted by: mpks1

Avi, Beautiful TS with full of love, care, understanding and a journey to parenthood❤️ It is so feel good that you want to keep reading it again and again. Jahnvi Pandya, bundle of joy has finally arrived and is going to be raised by doting parents. Can’t wait to read the next part.

Couple of things to mention:

It is dedicated to Chikki, tumhari bacchi no wonder you could write a beautiful TS

Second, thing, I liked the way you wrote the line where he reveals about reading her diary accidentally and found that she wanted to name her child Jhanvi, that is where your creativity shines and gives the readers an experience as if Shiva is saying that non stop without any space.

Thank you so much Prema !

This story was challenging to write because I never experienced parenthood myself.. I only ever saw it through the lens of my parents, friends, and some patients in the hospital, so I'm glad it was good enough to read again!

In the next part, you'll read about mischievous Janhvi 😆 and her adventures with Shiva and Raavi.

Yes, Chikki inspired this story. She's cute and sweet on this forum, so I tried to channel some of the cuteness and sweetness here ❤️!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Avi! This was beautiful and all the soft scenes have special place in my heart!!❤️❤️

The journey was very well written and I feel next phase will be of the child growing up. I've always admired the idea of writing something down from the parents perspective as they grow up and giving it to their child on the milestone moment of their life. It's something I have desired to do for my future kids and wonder if that's where you're heading too. And maybe presenting it to her this diary on her wedding day or as she begins the journey of her own motherhood.

Loved it and can't wait to read the next part!❤️❤️

Why, ML?!? Why?!?! Did us becoming sisters suddenly allow you to get into my head 😭

Maybe it was the format of the diary, but yeah 😆, Jahnvi will read all about her parents once she gets those journals. Drats, you read through me 🤣 As much as I want to show a scene of Janhvi's wedding/motherhood, that's too long of a journey to cover 😆

But thank you !

This is beautiful avii ❤️❤️❤️

You have described their journey beautifully, all while keeping the shivi essence intact.

This is a part that is unexplored by itv, the journey of pregnancy of a couple, labour, the child being born. I know we will never see shivi go through this journey, but it would be exactly like this if they do👏👏

I can't wait for the next part, can't wait to see shiva being a doting father to his daughter.

Thank you so much for writing this❤️

Originally posted by: Paru95

WOW🥳 This is a wonderful one👏 Loved each diary entry of Raavi, loved Shiva's excitement😳 The part wid family was funny😆 Though Janhvi's hasnt really entered the story, iam already in Love wid her❤️ Waiting for you to continue Thank you for tagging me🤗

Thank you !

I'm glad you enjoyed it! You'll see a lot more of Jahnvi in the next part! She'll be up to quite some mischief 😆

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This is beautiful avii ❤️❤️❤️

You have described their journey beautifully, all while keeping the shivi essence intact.

This is a part that is unexplored by itv, the journey of pregnancy of a couple, labour, the child being born. I know we will never see shivi go through this journey, but it would be exactly like this if they do👏👏

I can't wait for the next part, can't wait to see shiva being a doting father to his daughter.

Thank you so much for writing this❤️

Thank you so much Pri!

The next part will be filled with Shiva and Raavi scenes and how their daughter has shaped their lives! Plus Janhvi will be a mischievous kid 😆

Thank you so much for reading! I wish ITV explored this, but at least this is something that can be explored in fanfiction!

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Thank you Maahi , and I love you too!

Love u toooo

Anddd Updated the next part

U r next

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Why, ML?!? Why?!?! Did us becoming sisters suddenly allow you to get into my head 😭

Maybe it was the format of the diary, but yeah 😆, Jahnvi will read all about her parents once she gets those journals. Drats, you read through me 🤣 As much as I want to show a scene of Janhvi's wedding/motherhood, that's too long of a journey to cover 😆

But thank you !

The title and the diary entries...

But it was also this adhbhut sisterly bond!🤗

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Thank you !

I'm glad you enjoyed it! You'll see a lot more of Jahnvi in the next part! She'll be up to quite some mischief 😆

Waitinggg🤗

I would, I am sure❤️

Will look forward to it🌺