Raksha Bandhan : Raghav-Keerthi OS - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Firstly, Thanks for keeping the original Keerthi intact here❤️


This was such a solace to read. Like Cozy feels today


Loved how this was connected to the previous drabbles & we get to see that Amma atleast cares for Raghav here! The way you described the entire convo between the two estranged siblings with the nurse in tow👏


Thanks for taking up my request seriously & giving us such a good RakshaBandhan Gift🤗

Thank you!❤️ I had to keep original Keerthi here, she was one of my favs.

Glad you liked it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: BrhannadaArmour

I loved this, especially the memory of Arjun! I miss seeing Kirti like this on the show.

Thank you!❤️ I miss Keerthi too🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

First of all, thanks for continuing your drabbles. Simply said, they are awesome.❤️

About this drabble, the way you have presented the story, it is heart-rending. I was almost moved to tears reading this one. How we all wish that this is the Keerthi we could see in the show. I feel they have butchered up her character so much that it is irremediable. I simply loved how you weaved Arjun also into the story and gave us blast into the past. It was good to see they were discussing about Pallavi too😆 and the bond between the four of them. Khair koi nahi, I feel we can experience all those things by these OSs & drabbles. You drabble is fantastic. As I always say, please continue writing. 🤗❤️

Vera.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viewpoint

This was one emotional piece of writing, a heavy heart to begin with but a small smile as the story ended. How i wish this was how it went in the show. Raghav and Keerti are two estranged siblings, they’ve had a history of hurt and they’ve not yet healed at all! I love this story...❤️

Thank you! ❤️

I love reading your work so I'm so happy you liked my story.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

First of all, thanks for continuing your drabbles. Simply said, they are awesome.❤️

About this drabble, the way you have presented the story, it is heart-rending. I was almost moved to tears reading this one. How we all wish that this is the Keerthi we could see in the show. I feel they have butchered up her character so much that it is irremediable. I simply loved how you weaved Arjun also into the story and gave us blast into the past. It was good to see they were discussing about Pallavi too😆 and the bond between the four of them. Khair koi nahi, I feel we can experience all those things by these OSs & drabbles. You drabble is fantastic. As I always say, please continue writing. 🤗❤️

Vera.

Thank you for your comment! ❤️

You have the sweetest comments. Glad you liked it and it moved you!

Edited by hapc - 4 years ago

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