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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guys, hope you are doing well. First of all a big congratulations to all of you KV jit gaya finally but we need to concentrate on ICONIC GOLD AWARDS now.

So basically this story takes place after the events happened the last day i.e. from my last OS ANNIVERSARY.
Please ignore the typos.
So let's start

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It was a beautiful morning, the birds were chirping, due to the cool breeze the curtains of the room were dancing. Two souls were in each other's arms. They both woke up half an hour ago but didn't wanted to get up from there as they were together after a long separation of 1.5 months.

They both have craved for each other in last 1.5 months, to feel, to touch, to talk, to hug, to kiss, but finally there long separation was over.

After a long silence

"Teri Meri Gallan Ho Gayi Mashhoor
Kar Na Kabhi Tu Mujhe Nazron Se Door
Kithe Chali Ae Tu Kithe Chali Ae Tu
Kithe Chali Ae Kithe Chali Ae"

Anokhi: I really missed this

Shaurya: Me too Anokhi. Hum roz baat karte the phir bhi it was like ke hum kitne saalo se nahi mile hai

"Jaanda Ae Dil Yeh Toh Jaandi Ae Tu
Tere Bin Main Na Rahun Mere Bina Tu
Kithe Chali Ae Tu Kithe Chali Ae Tu
Kithe Chali Ae, Jaan Chali Ae"

Anokhi: Haan par koi nahi ab toh tum aa gaye ho na so we will make up for it

Shaurya: Haan toh do na

Anokhi:Kya? (confusingly)

Shaurya:Are abhi tum hi ne toh kaha

Anokhi:(Getting more confused)
Maine kya kaha!?

Shaurya:Are abhi toh tumne kaha ki we will make up for it.Soooo.....
(With one finger pointing on his lips)

"Kaatun Kaise Raatan Oh Saawre?
Jiya Nahi Jaata Sunn Baawre?"

Anokhi became all shy and was about to go from there but Shaurya being Shaurya, he caged her between him and bed

Shaurya:(in Husky voice)
Wifey apne hubby ki itni si ichha bhi puri nahi karogi!?

Anokhi cupped his face and gave him a kiss on his forehead then both the eyes then in both the cheeks. All this time Shaurya's eyes were closed and he was just feeling the soft feathery lips on his face

"Ke Raataan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re"

Seeing the opportunity Anokhi pushed Shaurya and ran from there and started laughing
Shaurya was just blank for few moments, was processing what just happened.
He heard Anokhi laughing and turned his face on the other side.
Anokhi saw this and walked towards him.

"Cham Cham Cham Ambran De Taare
Kehnde Ne Sajjna
Tu Hi Chan Mere Is Dil Da
Mann Le Ve Sajjna"

She turned his face toward her but he denied.
She came in front of him and held her ears and made a cute puppy face.
Shaurya got up and was about to go but Anokhi held his hand to stop him and back hugged him

"Tere Bina Mera Howe Na Guzara
Chhad Ke Na Jawin Mainu
Tu Hi Hai Sahara"

Shaurya smiled and turned only to give her a bone crushing hug

"Kaatun Kaise Raatan Oh Saawre?
Jiya Nahi Jaata Sunn Baawre?"

Anokhi:I love you (still hugging)

Shaurya:I love to too

"Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raataan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re"

Anokhi: Tum mujse ab door mat jaana muje tumhare bina aacha nahi lagata (breaking hug)

"Teri Meri Gallan Ho Gayi Mashhoor
Kar Na Kabhi Tu Mainu Nazron Se Door
Pichhe Chali Ae Tere Pichhe Chali Ae
Tere Pichhe Chali Ae"

Shaurya: Khabhi nahi

"Jaanda Ae Dil Yeh Toh Jaandi Ae Tu
Tere Bina Main Na Rahun Mere Bina Tu
Kithe Chali Ae Tu Kithe Chali Ae Tu
Kithe Chali Ae"

He gave kiss all over her face except lips as he wanted her to make the first move.

"Kaatun Kaise Raatan Oh Saawre?
Jiya Nahi Jaata Sunn Baawre?"

Anokhi understood this.
She cupped his face and placed her soft lips on his

"Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re"

They poured their heart and all their love for each other in that kiss.
They broke the kiss after some time and hugged each other.

"Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re"

Anokhi: Chalo jaldi se ready ho jate hai phir breakfast ke liye chalte hai...
Waise bhi aaj kafi time baad puri family saath beth kar breakfast karegi so hume late nahi hona chahiye...

Shaurya: Haan maine sab kuch bohot miss kiya waha

Suddenly he got an idea

Shaurya: (in excited tone)
Anokhi why not aaj hum sab logo ko ek suprise de...

Anokhi:Suprise? kaisa suprise?

Shaurya: ...............

Anokhi:Wow Shaurya this is amazing!!
Sab ko yeh suprise kitna pasand aayega...

Shaurya: Haan na...

Anokhi:Chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jate hai phir suprise ki bhi taiyari karni hai na....

She got up saying this and was about to go when Shaurya stopped her by holding her hand

Shaurya: Wifey I have an idea...
You know hume abhi suprise ki taiyari karni hai so we need to get ready fast so why not we should save time...

Anokhi: Hain! Woh kaise zara batane kast karo ge (while folding her hands)

Shaurya:Kyun na hum dono saath me shower le..usse kya hoga na hamara time bhi bach jayega and paani bhi save hoga...
What say? (winking)

Anokhi thought for some seconds before replying

Anokhi: Toh chalo

Shaurya:Whatttt!
( surprised like hell )

Not even in his wildest dreams he thought that his Wifey will agree for such thing that too so easily.
Without wasting any second he scooped her in his arms and took her to take a shower.
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Breakfast was a fun affair.
Everyone enjoyed having breakfast together after such a long time.

After breakfast everyone was sitting in hall as they wanted to spend some family time.
Shaurya came there after attending few calls

Tej: Shaurya kaha gaya tha?

Shaurya: Kuch nahi bade papa woh important calls the so woh hi attend karne gaya tha

Shaurya eyed Anokhi for something

Anokhi: Aacha sab log hamari baat dhyan se suniye
(Moving towards Shaurya)

Devi: Kya hua Anokhi

Shaurya: Badi maa hamare pass aap sab ke liye ek suprise hai

Kitty/Bebo: Surprise (in a very exciting tone ) Kya suprise hai bhaiya jadi bataiye na...

Kanchan: Haan bhaiya bataiye na kya suprise hai...

Anokhi: Bhabhi agar suprise bata diya toh phir uska kya matlab

Shaurya: Haan and trust me aap logo ko woh bohot pasand aayega

Shaan: Tu to rehene hi de muje pata hai tere suprise kaise hote hai
Anokhi tumhe pata hai Shaurya jab 3 class me tha tab woh ek baar mere liye gift laya tha tab....(Shaurya interrupted in middle)

Shaurya: Dad please woh nahi please....

Shaan: Are tu chup kar...
Tere karname teri biwi ko bhi toh pata chalne chahiye na

Anokhi: Haan papa bataiye na kya hua

Shaan: Haan jab woh 3 class me tha tab woh mere liye gift laya tha and you know woh gift me kya tha?
It was a soft toy of an elephant and you know usne muje kya reason diya to gift that to me

Anokhi: Kya (curiously)

Shaan: He told me ki Dad when I saw this toy toh muje aap ki yaad aa gai so mai yeh aap ke liye le aaya

After Shaan finished everyone in the room started laughing except for one person. After few minutes of laughter session

Anokhi:Don't worry Papa yeh suprise sach me bohot aacha hai you all will like it a lot

Alok: Are par yeh suprise hai kaha

Anokhi: Chachu uske liye hame kahi jana hoga so aap sab log jaldi se ready hoke aaiye

Aastha:Are Anokhi par hame jana kaha hai us hisab se hi hum taiyar ho kar aayege na

Anokhi:Maa aap sab log kuch comfortable sa pehen lijiye

Devi: Chalo toh phir sab 30 minutes me taiyar hokar milte hai

Everyone retired to their rooms to change only ShaKhi were left
Anokhi turned towards Shaurya only to see him annoyed and she knew the reason very well

Anokhi:(very sweetly)
Shaurya kya hua

Shaurya: Kuch nahi or tumne hasna band kyun kar diya or haso na

Anokhi: Awww tum gusse me kitne cute lagate ho

Shaurya: What awww haan!
What awww ... yeh tum apna awww apne pass hi rakho and one more thing mai cute nahi hun hot hun! Samjhi...

Anokhi: Kisne kaha (while giggling)

Shaurya: Kisne kaha matlab?
Mai hot nahi hun?(rising eyebrows)

Anokhi:Nahi

Shaurya:Aacha (he pulled her from her waist with force due to which she crashed to his chest)

Anokhi: Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho koi aa jayega (checking if any one was there)

Shaurya: Tum phele bolo mai hot hun ya nahi ?

Anokhi: Shaurya yeh kya zid hai yeh hamara bedroom nahi hai yeh hall hai jaha koi bhi kabhi bhi aa sakta hai

Shaurya:First say ki mai hot hun ya nahi

Anokhi: BADI MAAA

And badi maa sunte hi Shaurya left Anokhi and turned to face Badi maa but didn't find her
He turned back only to see Anokhi running on the staircase not before showing her tongue.
Shaurya chuckled on his wife's cute childish behavior.
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It's been 45 minutes since they left Sabherwal house and none of them had idea where were they going.

Aastha: Shaurya ab toh bata do ki hum ja kaha rahe hai akhir

Shaurya: Maa sabar karo sabar ka phal mitha hota hai

Shaan: yeh same jawab tu pichle 40 minute me 20 baar de chuka hai

Shaurya: Haan toh ab aap log same sawal puchege to same hi jawab dungana

Devi: Anokhi tum hi bata do

Anokhi:Badi maa bas poch hi gaye

After 10 minutes Shaurya's car entered in a big farm house followed by Yash's car.
Everyone came out of the car.

Tej:Shaurya hum yaha kyun aaye hai ab toh bata de

Shaurya:Picnic ke liye Bade papa

Everyone: Picnic!

Anokhi:Haan picnic... woh actually hum sab kitne time se saath bahar ghumne nahi aaye the so Shaurya ne idea diya or vaise bhi aaj sab ghar me hi the so humne aaj hi ka plan kar liya...
So kaise laga hamara Surprise!?

Shaurya:Dad yeh wala suprise toh aacha laga na ?(smirking)

Shaan: Haan bohot aacha...
Meri beti ne kaha tha toh aacha hi hoga na...

Shaurya:Dad but yeh plan mera tha or aap iska credit Anokhi ko de rahe ho..
That's not fair(he made an irritated face)

Shaan:(chuckled) aacha baba thoda sa credit tu bhi lele or kya apni biwi se jaal raha hai

Everyone laughed at Shaurya's reaction

Shaurya: Ab chale

They all went inside the farm house where there was a big swimming pool,a badminton court and a big garden with a beautiful fountain in middle and different flowers.

Kitty:Bhaiya this place is so beautiful

Bebo:Haan yaha photos kafi aachi aayegi

Alok:Shaurya puttar yeh kiska farm house hai?

Shaurya:Chachu yeh mere ek friend ka fram house hai..
Maine usse aaj ke liye rent par liya hai..

Gayatri: Toh ab plan kya hai?

Anokhi : Chachi aap sab log phele fresh hokar aaeye phir hum batate hai aage kya karna hai...

Everyone gather after 15 minutes in garden

Aastha:So kya karna hai

Shaurya: Race

Tej/Devi/Alok/Aastha: Race!!!

Shaurya:Haan race...

Devi:Shaurya hum kaise...

Shaurya:Kaise matlab..
Race hi toh lagani hai

Aastha: Bhabhi ke kehene ka matlab hai is ummar me hum sab kaise....

Shaan: Iss ummar me matlab Noor...
Abhi toh mai jawan hun...Haan par aap logo ka pata nahi

Anokhi: Are papa ek minute ek minute Shaurya ke kehene ka matlab hai ki 3 legged race...
Is game me hum sab couples ke ek ek pair band dege and fir aap ko ek dusre ke saath balance karke chalna hoga or jo bhi pehle line cross karega woh jita...

Shaurya : Haan so ab toh khelege na aap sab!?

Kanchan:Par agar hum sab hi race me participate karege toh pata kaise chale ga ki kon jita

Voice:Are mai hun na mai judge ban jati hun

Everyone turns towards the voice and gets suprised to see them.
Anokhi move towards them and hugs them.

Anokhi:Aap log yaha kaise?

Shaurya:Anokhi yeh family picnic hai so puri family honi chahiye na...

Anokhi:Par tumne kab bulaya?(getting confused)

Voice:Toh ab hum picnic par bhi nahi aa sakte kya!?

Anokhi: Are nahi dii aisa nahi hai Infact hume bohot aacha laga ki aap log aaye

Shaurya: Anokhi maine Babli ko Breakfast ke phele hi call kar diya tha or yaha ka address bhi de diya tha..
Or tumhare liye yeh suprise tha isliye maine nahi bataya or Bubli ko bhi bata ne se mana kiya tha...

Devi: Yeh bohot sahi kaam kiya tune Shaurya

Shaan :Toh chale game start kare!

Tej :Haan bhai chalo

Bebo/Kitty: Bhaiya hum kya kare?

Babli : Are tum dono mere saath referee ban jao waise bhi itne sare logo par mai akele dhyan nahi de paugi..
Or waise bhi yaha bohot log cheating kar sakte hai so tum dono mere saath aa jao

So all the couples took part in this race and of course ShaKhi won this race.
After playing such more games they took a refreshment break. Anokhi and Kanchan served everyone nimbu paani.

Alok:Aaj toh saachi bohot thak gaye par maza bhi bohot aaya nahi bhaisahab(having a sip)

Tej: Haan maza toh bohot aaya

Gayatri:Hame aisi family picnics or plan karni chahiye

Devi: Haan sahi me...
Waise Shaurya Anokhi baccha Thank you tum dono ki waje se hum sab ne kitna enjoy kiya aaj...

Anokhi: Badi Maa issme Thank you ki kya baat hai or waise bhi humne jo bhi kiya hamari family ke liye kiya..

Shaan:Chalo bhai aab konsi game khelni hai?

Aastha: Tumhe abhi bhi khelna hai
Waise bhi time dekho shaam ke 7 baj gaye hai ab hame ghar chalna chahiye dinner ki taiyari bhi karni hai or phir kal sab ko college bhi toh jaana hai na..

Bebo: Thodi der or rukte hai na Taiji maza aa raha hai or dinner hum bhahar bhi toh kar sakte hai na...

Yash: Haan na Taiji hum sab ne kafi time se bahar dinner bhi nahi kiya...

Devi: Are par...

Shaurya: Maa Badi maa chachi aap log chinta mat kijiye humne phele hi bahar dinner ka plan kar liya hai or 9:30 tak ghar ke liye nikal jayege so late nahi hoga.. So chill...

Tej:Haan bhai aaj waise bhi sab in logo ne hi plan kiya hai toh dinner bhi inhe hi plan karne do..

Ramesh:Bhaisahab Bhabhiji ab hame bhi nikalna chahiye

Shaan:Are aise kaise abhi dinner baki hai or dinner kare bina toh hum sab apko jane hi nahi denge...
Kyun Bhabhi ?

Devi:Haan Shaan bilkul sahi kehe raha hai dinner toh aapko hamare saath hi karna hoga...

Rama:Thik hai ji..

Shaurya: so dinner ke liye chale?
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Dinner was a fun affair.They went to a beautiful garden restaurant everyone enjoyed it. They all shared food, took photographs, and cracked jokes.
Coming out of the restaurant

Alok:Bhai khana toh ho gaya par desert ka kya?

Shaan:Mai ek bohot aachi jage janta hun jaha bohot aachi ice-cream milegi chalo wahi chalte hai..

After reaching that place Aastha started blushing and Anokhi saw this

Anokhi:Maa kya hua?Aap yaha aa kar itna Sharma kyun rahi hai (teasingly)

Aastha:Kuch bhi toh nahi..

Shaan: Are kya kuch bhi toh nahi.. Anokhi mai batata hun woh...

Aastha:Shaan kya tum bhi...(red from blushing)

Shaan: Noor sab ghar ke hi toh hai or waise bhi sabko pata hai ki hamari Love Marriage hui thi toh itna kya sharma rahi ho...

Shaurya:(curiously)
Dad bataiye na kya hua tha yaha?

Shaan:Woh jab maine Aastha ko shaadi ke liye propose kiya tha or usne haan kaha tha phir hum dono yaha ice-cream khane aaye the(lightly blushing)

Everyone:Ohh hooo

Shaurya: Aacha chalo sab ice-cream khaae.
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After having Ice-cream Babli Rama and Ramesh left for their house and Sabherwal's left for Sabherwal house.

Yash:Aaj toh sach me bohot thak gaye..
Ab jamke nindh aayegi

Alok:Hmmm

Tej: Chalo bhai ab sab so jao kal college bhi jana hai...

Everyone left for their rooms as they all were very tired.
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Anokhi was reading something when Shaurya entered there from bathroom.

Shaurya:Aaj bohot thakan ho gai

Anokhi:Hmm par sab ne bohot enjoy kiya..

Shaurya:Haan enjoy toh bohot kiya..

Anokhi:Waise Thank you..

Shaurya: woh kis liye

Anokhi: mummyji papaji or dii ko bulane ke liye...

Shaurya: Anokhi woh bhi toh hamari family ka hissa hai maine toh Kanchan ke parents ko bhi call kiya tha but woh log kissi relative ki shaadi me gaye the issliye nahi aa paye...

Anokhi felt overwhelmed, she went towards him and gave him small peak on his cheeks hugged him

Anokhi:I love you

Shaurya: I love you too par aab so jao 11:30 ho gaye hai or kal hame college bhi jana hai (breaking hug)

Anokhi:Hmm

As Shaurya turned the lights off Anokhi wrapped her hands and hugged him to which he smiled , reciprocated the hug and kissed her forehead and they both slept after a long eventful day with a smile on their faces.

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Hufff finally finished it.
So guys hope you liked it.
Tell me how was the song part as I have tried it for the first time.
I hope I have fulfilled your expectations for a family time OS.
And I personally wanted to write something like this.
So stay home stay safe vote for KV Deba SAAKK and ShaKhi in ICONIC GOLD AWARDS as there are 5 categories for which we have to vote.
And Rewatch SAAKK on Disney +hotstar
Create hype for SAAKK season 2 and lastly send mails to channel, PH and Hotstar for season 2.

Love
Dhwani ❤


My other OS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158323022

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one

Do write more

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Wow this OS is touching dr

I really loved it

Pls do write more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushfiza

Nice one

Thank you ❤

Do write more

Yes will definitely do it

Thank you for your feedback ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Wow this OS is touching dr


I really loved it

Thank you

Pls do write more

Yes will definitely write more

Thank you for your feedback ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its indeed beautiful one. ❤️


I am enjoying your OS through out my reading.😳


Please keep writing dear.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Its indeed beautiful one. ❤️

I am enjoying your OS through out my reading.😳

Thank you 😍

Please keep writing dear.

Yes I will definitely write new OS.

Thank you for your feedback

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Posted: 4 years ago
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this was lovely ❤️ wish we had got this moments on tv 😒

nevertheless would like to see a OS related to Anokhi Pregnancy ( something where she gets to know/sharing it with Shaurya/dilemma towards it)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you for your feedback

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishbir_7

this was lovely ❤️ wish we had got this moments on tv 😒

Me too

nevertheless would like to see a OS related to Anokhi Pregnancy ( something where she gets to know/sharing it with Shaurya/dilemma towards it)

Will try 👍🏼

Thank you for your feedback

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