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Posted: 4 years ago
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Cheeku.... I honestly have tears in my eyes....this is so so incredibly beautiful dear ❤️

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us.... you have the power to move hearts with your words

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tptwi

Cheeku.... I honestly have tears in my eyes....this is so so incredibly beautiful dear ❤️

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us.... you have the power to move hearts with your words

Thankyou Pooja❤️❤️

Bold: Awww. I am so touched. Thankyou so much...
Italics: I can't thank you enough for this compliment🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow!!! You weave magic with your beautiful words❤️

Soo heart touching❤️

You are an amazing writer❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devikadish

Wow!!! You weave magic with your beautiful words❤️

Soo heart touching❤️

You are an amazing writer❤️

Thankyou Disha❤️❤️

Bold: Just made my night😳

Thankyou so much🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's just so so so damn beautiful cheeku ❤️❤️

The poem is touched the strings of my heart and I am crying as if I am with that person just sitting beside him or her and seeing that internal struggle within him or her 🥺🥺

Kisse kahu

Kaun sunega

Udhde mere dil ke dhaage

Kaun bunega

You can just feel the loneliness of that person and the bitterness in his / her heart 😞😞

Uljhi hui si hu mein

Aaj apne hi mann ke dard mein

Dhoondh nahi pa rahi khud ko

Ansuon ki gard mein

The desperation for a ray of hope is so painful here and the helplessness at not finding it is so heartbreaking 💔💔

These two paragraphs are my favorite , you really have the power of evoking people's emotions by weaving feelings into poems so beautifully 😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Cheeks, lovely and so heartbreaking .

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You made me cry😭

I sort of connect a lot with your poems Cheeku. It seems as if I am reading a part of my life which I can never share😭

This was so Heart touching and beautiful ❤️

You are really very talented ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This... is ... wow!

My chest hurts from so many things... things bygone, things long forgotten, things long lost...

Cheeku, this is magic... and hreatbreak.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Kinda heartbreaking but very moving

I can identify quite a lot with this feeling

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