Raghvi OS.....The Next day....Pallavi's Plan - Page 2

Originally posted by: diksha710

You’ve penned down everything so beautifully Farheen. I could imagine each and every scene as it played out. Please do write more ❤️❤️

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: Avneel07

One of the best chapters I have read. Loved it. U have written it so beautifully.

Thank you so much ❤️

I am totally speechless. This is such a wonderful way for them to reunite. Hope the creatives, actually take some hints and add this to the reel story going on.

Great writing, Please continue, would love to rad more of your stories.👏

Fantastic story,

Love the detail and how cutely Pallavi organised everything

Originally posted by: alu5123

I am totally speechless. This is such a wonderful way for them to reunite. Hope the creatives, actually take some hints and add this to the reel story going on.

Great writing, Please continue, would love to rad more of your stories.👏

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Fantastic story,

Love the detail and how cutely Pallavi organised everything

Thank you so much ❤️

HOLYGOODNESS!

THIS is what the show needed! THIS is exactly it!

I was imaging various versions of this myself when I'd go off in my RaghVi La La Land. I was also hoping Pallavi would recreate the awards ceremony, but instead give him an award for his philanthropic efforts. You nailed the writing and the execution!

I was not expecting her proposal at all, but this, THIS, is how you redeem yourself on a time crunch! It wasn't dragged, it was short, sweet, and very well-timed. She didn't wait to sort out the Mandaar fiasco first. As you said, he's a problem for later, but Raghav and Pallavi come first, always.

I loved how you showed her misery, how she couldn't stop crying for hurting him, and that even though Raghav has forgiven her, she hasn't forgiven herself. That's what speaks to the gravity of her error in judgment over the past couple of weeks.

I LOVED how Raghav helped her come full circle. He didn't give her a cold shoulder or the silent treatment. Initially I was hoping he would, but I was pleasantly surprised at how much I liked the turn you took instead! Raghav, true to himself, maintained open communication and gave Pallavi the space to redeem herself for her own sake. Raghav isn't one to deny his loved ones, that's just how big his heart is! ❤️

My most favouritest part was the way he consoled her in the morning when she kept crying. I could visualize that entire scene! He was so soft, so gentle, so comforting, and yet so firm with her. He didn't stop her from apologizing or crying her heart out, he simply asked her to smile for him because he can't bear to see her cry. It's as if he's giving her the space to cope with her feelings, but he's also asking her to push past it for his sake and for their sake. Beautiful scene, very, very well written! 👏👏

My second most favouritest part was the way he reached for her after the ceremony. Loved the humour element with his bow tie and loved his romantic initiatives. Of course his sui has stopped at the verbal I Love You! 😆

I hope you keep writing! You understand the pulse of the audience far better than the producer himself! 🤗

Oh Wow......Im speechless reading your response. Thank you so much. This is what happens when you watch a show that could have a fabulous story and awesome potential being ruined by cheese lines and no emotion. Then you sit down and think of how it would turn out. Ive just recently started writing it, so thank you for appreciating it.

Thank you so much ❤️

Thank you so much. ❤️