what went wrong with pallu and mandy scenes !!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: rs-shailu29

i know pallu wont redeem still hoping how they gona justify her errors

hope they show us ..

she might realize when aai truth is out

U know to speak frankly uska realisation ll do more damage to her than already done. She ll be guilty beyond anything as her love for anna s immense it's just she chooses to over look all d fam abuse.

If she has hurt anna for some filth she ll be too much hurt. N ll be too far gone to return to normalcy. Which ll again hinder raghvi love life. Har taraf se bas dead end hi hai. 🙄🙄🙄🙄

Sometimes I feel bad for Shivangi. I think she is also not able to connect with her character hence giving meh performance these days. Then there is that stupid cheek ILU signal. ugh. It reminds me of my son's finger when he says mamma I want to do susu potty.

Originally posted by: chokri

Sometimes I feel bad for Shivangi. I think she is also not able to connect with her character hence giving meh performance these days. Then there is that stupid cheek ILU signal. ugh. It reminds me of my son's finger when he says mamma I want to do susu potty.

so true she is on the job thats all

writer and sandip sir has to blame in this not shivangi

Originally posted by: Salutethearmy

Pallu aur Mandu ko chodo, Raghu also lost his cells in the process.

Raghav Rao, the self proclaimed Don didn't even provide any evidence to justify his claims.

Mandarin is a ambulance driver, he literally took all wickets and has won the match.

Sensational couple are planning and plotting and giving competition to Komolika. Raghav"s born smart dialogue is embarrassing. He connect the dots otherwise but his sixth sense was only reserved for Mandy. Raghav also did not share his concerns with Farhad. As of now he seems to be better off than his boss.

Raghav completely lost his abilities after falling in love.

Everyone's character arc took a 360° turn because of Mandar.

Only Sharda Deshmukh is more or less the same. Any viewer can relate to her.

Kaka and Amrutha are just spectators. I don't even know why Mansi is around.

exactly this is not raghu

old director ke saat gaya don raghu this is different raghu

Bang on post Shailu. 👏🏻👏🏻I think out of all the points you’ve mentioned, Pallu being dumb and ignoring Raghav was the one that was most unacceptable. This track had loads of potential to gather trps had it been executed properly.

Originally posted by: masin

Fully agree with you - the writing has failed drastically and the producer seems in no rush to redeem it!

Siku said he was trying to show Pallavi see-sawing between her kartavya/farz and her pyaar, but in what world does a happily married woman have any kartavya/farz to aid her ex-husband who left her to rot as a widow and serve his family for all intents and purposes?!

Then showing Mandy as an outright creep did further damage to their cause. Why is he so obsessive? What's his deal? His plotting and execution is too speedy and doesn't match the pace of his character reveal. Had they shown the reason behind his obsession or given more insight to his relationship with Dr. Ramya and his chota version of Farhad (wohi... sidekick dost uska, naam yaad nai mujhe), then I'd still come to appreciate his character. Instead he's being chummy with Sunny and Keerti for no rhyme or reason other than the fact that they want to separate RaghVi. Arrey bhai... koi sar peir toh ho ya bas bewakoofi pe bewakoofi dikhani hai?!

Raghav as a lovesick fool is tolerable only because it speaks to the intensity of his character and the depth of his emotions. Otherwise, him aimlessly chasing after Pallavi is not a good look on him at all!

Gaah... I could write an essay on this topic, iss hadh tak mood off hai mera! Sikuu's been on my nerves since the day he said he's making changes for the fans... uhm, excuse me, why are your very own brain cells on vacation that you need to rely on us to tell your story?! Use our feedback to improve your writing, don't keep flipping the script as if it's a bloody light switch!

You know Maine Abhi expectations hi chod diya hai sab aadha adhura hai ..!!

I was so unhappy with yesterday’s episode it was flat on feelings and romance.. kal bhi I felt she is blaming him and thanking Aai for their get together wherein she should have thanked him for forgiving her mistakes ..!

I hate when she gives justification.. I know it’s ok to justify but at least apologize first for hurting someone.

And yaar Raghu ko thoda to self respect dete.. aatehi honeymoon planning.. man common give her some cold shoulder 🙄

Originally posted by: sias2

You know Maine Abhi expectations hi chod diya hai sab aadha adhura hai ..!!

I was so unhappy with yesterday’s episode it was flat on feelings and romance.. kal bhi I felt she is blaming him and thanking Aai for their get together wherein she should have thanked him for forgiving her mistakes ..!

I hate when she gives justification.. I know it’s ok to justify but at least apologize first for hurting someone.

And yaar Raghu ko thoda to self respect dete.. aatehi honeymoon planning.. man common give her some cold shoulder 🙄

@bold: That's exactly it! I understand the episode was shot in a rush, but common sense shouldn't take a complete hike when you're in a rush - especially when writing/scripting is your full-time job. That's like any one of us not being able to think on our feet at our respective jobs. Aise thodi hota hai! Rush hai, we all understand that, but had they taken even five minutes to map out the script, I'm positive itna bura result nahi hota. They're trying to undo 2-3 weeks of dragfest damage in a 21-minute episode and we cannot be blamed for not buying it. I wonder whether the CVs/producer even understand what the damage is that they need to control and clean up. I think they're on a totally different page than the rest of us!

Side note:

Putting all our frustrations and disappointments aside, what I always try to remind myself is that this show is literally someone's bread and butter. That's why I get even more furious at Sandip because his tadka-obsession won't hinder his career as much as they would hinder the cast and crew's livelihood. If the show doesn't gain TRPs because of illogical changes, then it will shut down and people will struggle to put food on their table. Sandip was under K-Ekta's wing for YHM and though I hate to admit this, she truly is a responsible producer. Her shows run endlessly, and sure, they shouldn't; but hey, at least nobody on her set fears whether they'll be able to provide for themselves and their families the following day. Sandip's experiment has his entire cast and crew hanging on the edge and that won't help their team spirit nor their morale.

Originally posted by: masin

@bold: That's exactly it! I understand the episode was shot in a rush, but common sense shouldn't take a complete hike when you're in a rush - especially when writing/scripting is your full-time job. That's like any one of us not being able to think on our feet at our respective jobs. Aise thodi hota hai! Rush hai, we all understand that, but had they taken even five minutes to map out the script, I'm positive itna bura result nahi hota. They're trying to undo 2-3 weeks of dragfest damage in a 21-minute episode and we cannot be blamed for not buying it. I wonder whether the CVs/producer even understand what the damage is that they need to control and clean up. I think they're on a totally different page than the rest of us!

Side note:

Putting all our frustrations and disappointments aside, what I always try to remind myself is that this show is literally someone's bread and butter. That's why I get even more furious at Sandip because his tadka-obsession won't hinder his career as much as they would hinder the cast and crew's livelihood. If the show doesn't gain TRPs because of illogical changes, then it will shut down and people will struggle to put food on their table. Sandip was under K-Ekta's wing for YHM and though I hate to admit this, she truly is a responsible producer. Her shows run endlessly, and sure, they shouldn't; but hey, at least nobody on her set fears whether they'll be able to provide for themselves and their families the following day. Sandip's experiment has his entire cast and crew hanging on the edge and that won't help their team spirit nor their morale.

This. 👍🏼 I am a long time watcher of Ekta shows and YHM and all the K dramas ran forever because it had a slightly relaxed pace for romance, not too dragging and also had enough doses of drama and masala to keep everyone entertained. Plus Ekta team made sure all aspects of viewers are satisfied.

I wish they had shown RaghVi romance in a relaxed way taking time to build up trust and communication and lot of reflection/comedy.

I wish they showed Mandaar as a good man who is genuinely interested in Pallavi and then Pallavi will have to choose because one is a good man and one is in love with her and she with him. That would be an awesome storyline.

This creepy Mandaar track and Pallavi who is known to be so smart in sniffing out villains and bringing them to justice is shown so dumb overnight when Mandy returned. That was the disconnect moment for me. Plus episodes shot by different directors lose their continuity and in a rushed pace is seriously not giving pause to anyone to think and take a step back. I wish they had a solid script and not a loose one like this.

I am a silent reader in this forum and was waiting for a topic like this to put forth my two cents…

The writer & the producer claim that they wanted to show the dilemma of Pallavi choosing between her Duty(Mandar) and Love (Raghav)…but my question to them is Where was/is the dilemma at the first place????? whatever they have shown till now of Pallavi in this track…she is very clear about what she wants and what she wants to do…she clearly chose Raghav as her husband over Mandar, she firmly chose to help Mandar over her responsibilities as a wife, she chose Baba’s promise over Raghav’s insecurities, she chose to believe her instincts over Raghav’s warnings on Mandar and above all she chose to stay at Deshmukhs for whatever time it takes than staying with her Husband….she clearly chose to help Mandar over everything. All of these were conscious decisions without an iota of pondering or confusion….so I want to ask the writer sir, where was the dilemma that they are talking about…

If they really wanted to show Pallavi’s conflict then the writers completely failed in it… because neither there was a C of conflict nor D of dilemma in her decisions or actions… and to make it worse she was doing all this while being fully aware of Raghav’s intense love for her, his insecurities and Mandar’s intent to reclaim her as his wife…

Had they NOT shown the love confession & her zillion promises then we could have given Pallavi the benefit of doubt that she was not aware of Raghav’s love for her because everything Raghav did to her till that point could have been easily categorized as redemption care concerns attraction or even affection but NOT Love…but after confession she knew to what extent he loved her so no excuse there. Similarly had they shown Mandar as a nice guy or at least fake it in front of Raghav & Pallavi. Had they NOT made it Raghav vs Mandar from the word go, Had they NOT revealed Mandar’s intent and the extent to which he went to have Pallavi back, at least not in front of her then again we could have given a pass to her behavior on the grounds that she has nothing to doubt about him and is trying to help a nice person. So her very act of ignoring Raghav’s love and choosing to believe Mandar despite knowing Mandar’s intent, her character came across as completely loose and shallow if not a cheat….You can’t hurt your husband, be insensitive towards his feelings, ignore his insecurities to help your Ex and call it humanity. I don’t even understand how can the writer come up with something like this without realizing the damage they are causing…

It’s really unfortunate that they thought they will show a wife consciously and deliberately choose her possessive Ex over her loving husband for whatsoever reasons and the viewers will accept it.. coz the very thought is revolting as per ITV standards….

Pallavi is very kind human who can put herself into trouble to help another…that’s her basic character but the writer’s here failed to come up with a solid reason to justify her insensitive behavior towards Raghav and ignorance towards Mandar’s Intent…

The damage is done…without a logical intense redemption track for pallavi…they may not be able to install back viewer’s love & trust to the character…

This track had so much potential to make the show more interesting and as well as character development but the writing completely failed the plot as well as the characters.

Originally posted by: Anu1975

I am a silent reader in this forum and was waiting for a topic like this to put forth my two cents…

The writer & the producer claim that they wanted to show the dilemma of Pallavi choosing between her Duty(Mandar) and Love (Raghav)…but my question to them is Where was/is the dilemma at the first place….whatever they have shown till now of Pallavi in this track…she is very clear about what she wants and what she wants to do…she clearly chose Raghav as her husband over Mandar, she firmly chose to help Mandar over her responsibilities as a wife, she chose Baba’s promise over Raghav’s insecurities she chose to believe her instincts over Raghav’s warnings on Mandar and above all she chose to stay at Deshmukhs for whatever time it takes than staying with her Husband….she clearly chose to help Mandar over everything. All of these were conscious decisions without an iota of pondering or confusion….so I want to ask the writer sir, where was the dilemma that they are talking about…

If they really wanted to show Pallavi’s conflict then the writers completely failed in it… because neither there was a C of conflict or D of dilemma in her decision or actions… and to make it worse she was doing all this while being fully aware of Raghav’s intense love for her, his insecurities and Mandar’s intent to reclaim her as his wife…

Had they NOT shown the love confession & her zillion promises then we could have given Pallavi the benefit of doubt that she was not aware of Raghav’s love for her because everything Raghav did to her till that point could have been easily categorized as redemption care concerns attraction or even affection but NOT Love…but after confession she knew to what extent he loved her so no excuse there. Similarly had they shown Mandar as a nice guy or at least fake it in front of Raghav & Pallavi. Had they NOT made it Raghav vs Mandar from the word go, Had they NOT revealed his intent and the extent to which he went to have Pallavi back at least not in front of her then again we could have given a pass to her behavior on the grounds that she has nothing to doubt about him…so her very act of ignoring Raghav’s love and choosing to believe Mandar despite knowing Mandar’s intent, her character came across as completely loose and shallow if not a cheat….You can’t hurt your husband, be insensitive towards his feelings, ignore his insecurities to help your Ex and call it humanity. I don’t even understand how can the writer come up with something like this without realizing the damage they are causing…

It’s really unfortunate that they thought they will show a wife consciously and deliberately choose her possessive Ex over her loving husband for whatsoever reasons and the viewers will accept it.. coz the very thought is revolting as per ITV standards….

The damage is done…without a logical intense redemption track for pallavi…they may not be able to install back viewer’s love & trust to the character…

I couldn’t agree more with whatever you said :)

I was thinking the same.. there was no dilemma or confusion in her mind..she from day one chose Mandar over Raghav.

She has taken him for granted in simple words!!

With this track Pallavi has lost that respect and I cannot connect with her lovey dovey dialogues.

I had always loved her character coz she showed people their mistake and always supported truth. But now turning her into dumb person is not helping at all.

I really hope writers work on their scripts n make her character little stronger n wiser