Raghvi FF: Hooked (Part 7/7) - Complete - Updated Pg 17 - Page 13

Such an amazing update

Kept me Hooked till last part ❤️

Hope you will continue writing 🤗

Loved this story. Beautifully written

That was some brilliant twist & turn with the main antagonists of the whole Fandom being utilized here

Add to the fact that you also used one of the most aesthetic scene of Raghav sleeping over Pallavi in their room with your own version

Loved the end. And as you already know, absolutely loved the entire SS.

She waited until they stopped at a traffic light and he turned to her again. “You’re my family.” Love shined through her eyes.

He felt a smile threaten to escape. “Is that so, Mrs. Rao?” His voice dropped.

Hope to see you soon with another piece

Originally posted by: SONIA441

That was some brilliant twist & turn with the main antagonists of the whole Fandom being utilized here

Add to the fact that you also used one of the most aesthetic scene of Raghav sleeping over Pallavi in their room with your own version

Loved the end. And as you already know, absolutely loved the entire SS.

She waited until they stopped at a traffic light and he turned to her again. “You’re my family.” Love shined through her eyes.

He felt a smile threaten to escape. “Is that so, Mrs. Rao?” His voice dropped.

Hope to see you soon with another piece

Thank you so much, really ❤️

There are just so many villains to choose from 😆

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Loved this story. Beautifully written

So glad you liked it - thanks for reading ❤️

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Kept me Hooked till last part ❤️

Hope you will continue writing 🤗

Haha thanks so much, really glad you enjoyed it 😳❤️

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Such an amazing update

Thank you! Thanks for reading ❤️

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

This was beautiful. I loved that you chose a simple end to this wonderful story! 👏

The simple things are what make life beautiful and personally, I thought the last line was an indication of this! Quoting it here because I loved it so much🤗

The light changed. They drove onwards into the night, together.

Oh I'm so glad you liked the end. It just seemed like a small yet significant moment ❤️

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: nooriex

so sad it's the last part 😭 but i loved reading this ss! the plot twist of baba being the mastermind behind the bad deed was clever and surprised me! again, great short story!! ❤️

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

I may or may not have come up with the culprit halfway through the story 😆