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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ab ek aur suggestion lekar aaye hue ab pata nahi aap sab ko pasand aaye but koi iss suggestion par story zarur likhna try karna 🙈🙈🙈

Suggestion likhna tha but Maine story likh de. Hi dimag mein chal raha tha maine likh diya.

Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

M not so good in writing please be free to take suggestion and give some add on or make another os or ff on this suggestion..

Koi mere suggestion ko improve karke kuch likh do.

I don't know whether u like it or not. 🙈🙈

So the story starts

Vansh and Ridima are business rivals and they are rich, powerful and want to achieve more heights in the business.. Dono koi mauka nahi chodte ek dusre ko neecha dikhane in business. Dono business ke maamle mein bahut particular hai and ek galti bhi bardash nahi karte. Vansh is dating ragini but actually she is behind his money. Ridhima ne ragini ko dekha hua hai with vansh in business party.

One day ridhima was in mall and doing some shopping and she was shocked when she see ragini with another man hugging and lip locking .

Ridhima immediately hide behind the pillar and make video of them and immediately goes to vansh office and starts taunting and gives him lecture that somebody use to tell that true love is everything and all that shit and then shows him the video. Initially vansh was shocked and small tears starts coming and when ridhima see she felt bad and thought she has not right thing. Vansh composes himself and maintain cold and arrogant look and say zindgi mein hamesha gulab nahi milte, kahe na kahe kaante bhi milte hai.

Ridhima for the first time feels sad and to divert his mind she asked him let's go for coffee. Ridhima then instantly realises that what she has asked? She has asked to his rival for coffee and he also nonchalantly says okay, let's go to my mansion, I make very nice coffee, she also agree.

They both were looking at each other in the car and when they reach vr mansion both were shocked too see ragini. She immediately hugs vansh and say why are not picking up your phone and all that romantic stuff, vansh started feeling angry, his eyes becoming red and he immediately goes to his room and bring gun and pointed towards ragini and say mujhe tum dhoka de rehe the, cheat kar rehe the, mujhe dhoke se sakth nafrat hai. Tum sirf mere paise ke liye saath thi.i hate you and then ragini starts sobbing and saying mujhe maaf kardo. Vansh aims his gun at ragini and ridhima tries to stop and say chodo usee jaane do ,isne kya khoya hai isse khud nahi pata. Then immediately there was sound of gun shot and ragini arm was injured. Vansh was shocked, he said maine toh goli nahi chaliye toh kisne chalyi then he goes to ragini and ragini say mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhe dhoka diya.

I want to tell you one more thing, i know who is the killer of your mother. I was blackmailing that person for money. When she was trying to say she fanits. Both riansh takes her to hospital and shift to secret location. Doctors declare that ragini goes in coma, Vansh was devastated and wants to avenge his mother death .. He was crying bitterly and ridhu kept his hands on his shoulder and he immediately hug her, laying his head on chest. He hugged for around 20 min and then after some time he realises his position and say sorry. Riddhu say it's OK and she says m with u and we both will take revenge and whosoever have killed your mother will face our wrath. Then they goes to their respective home. Both of them thinking about each other and suddenly ridhu phone ringed and she picked kabir phone and kabir said meet him tomorrow at cafe. Both kabir and ridhu meet and her kabir is unaware that ridhu knows any vansh raisinghania. He says that our parents have fixed our marriage and it is after 6 months so I want you to do something for my love and she says what and then he tell his plan to spy on vansh. Ridhu immediately understands about his intentions and after meeting kabir, she messaged vansh to meet him at a secret location and then she tells him about kabir plan and ask him why he is behind u. We both know what we do but we don't indulge in illegal business so what his enemy why he is behind u, ridhu ask all such question and vansh also say I don't know, I also don't meet him personally and no police or cbi is behind him except this idiot kabir, then ridhu say it's quite fishy na that even there is no personal enemity he want you behind the bars.

Then she say ke kya kabir toh nahi tumhare mom ke death ke peeche? Vansh say maybe..

Vansh say we should be careful about his move and let him think what ever u r doing, u r doing for him but in fact u r on my side. Both riansh join hands and say we will not meet and talk to each other for few days. Kabir send ridhu to vr mansion and she starts staying over there and both riansh starts working together and starts digging about his identity. They checked his phone call list and there is one number which he is being frequently called and it's location is vr mansion. Vansh starts feeling that somebody is actually helping or behind his mother death from vr mansion. So with the help of risky he starts planning tricks to humilate ridhu so they think that actually ridhu is pawn in his game but in fact she is queen, marrying her was not just the plan but in reality he fell in love with her and and they both become one on the wedding night and in front of family they are couple who hate each other to show to that person who is behind his mother death.

Pls koi bhi try karo isse better banane ke 🙏🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tum hi try kar lo. You write so good. Even if i want to i already have two stories and in wattpad so i can't haha. But the plot is actually good.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb

Please Do Update Soon

Can't Wait To Read The Continuation

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raveena0605

Tum hi try kar lo. You write so good. Even if i want to i already have two stories and in wattpad so i can't haha. But the plot is actually good.

Yaar I can't write 😫😫

Pls I request you to write on this topic and make it more better.

I have such bad vocabulary and not good in writing..

Pls you write 🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Yaar I can't write 😫😫

Pls I request you to write on this topic and make it more better.

I have such bad vocabulary and not good in writing..

Pls you write 🙏🙏🙏


Abhi i can't promise anything. Too many stories i am writing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please Anyone write this story more beautifully and interesting

I can't write because m not good in writing,

I request you to pls write on this suggestion and make it better if possible 🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raveena0605


Abhi i can't promise anything. Too many stories i am writing.

Jab bhe aap free hoge tab likh dena 😇😇🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Jab bhe aap free hoge tab likh dena 😇😇🙏

Koi nahi yaar, someone better than me, will write, since you have tagged some many.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yaar aap bhi likh sakte ho 😇

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Arre ur story is so good

👏👍🏼

why don't u write it ur way

I'm sure its gonna come out amazing

Infact u nearly have laid a super foundation of ur plot!!

Try it ...I'm sure u can do complete justice to ur plot!!😳

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