Who writes dialogues for Virat - Page 2

Agree 100%. Virat's dialogues today were pathetic...😕.

I wasn't expecting a profusely crying Gopi bahu, but some heartfelt, honest conversation. Listening to her pain and responding to it honestly. He started off with a sorry, Sai criticised him for calling her characterless which Virat denied. And that's it. After that it was all about Virat's desperation in trying to get her back to CN. 😳 . That parting self-pitying dialogue to the doctor - unecessary and ridiculous.

And him not wanting to talk about the incident 😵. How many times ....

First thing that kept screaming into my head... this girl has been through a life-threatening accident, just out from OT and immediately you stress her with bhaari bharkam emotional atyachaar. Arre bhai, saans to lene do.🤓It's like he walks into the room and immediately starts reciting his apologies without even attempting to even go to he bed.

I too was remembering the Virat of initial episodes. They have ruined him.😭His latest Kabir Singh avatar was so contrived. They need to write a better screenplay.

Originally posted by: archanan14

Agree 200%. The dialogues made him seem like a victim rather than the person who made this whole thing happen, and they seriously detracted from Neil’s excellent performance over the last 3 days (the less said about Monday, the better 😆). I felt more of a connect with Mohit and Sai’s scene than with SaiRat’s scene, thanks to these weird dialogues, and of course Adish’s natural acting. Actually the dialogues make it look like both Virat and KBA choose to victimise themselves instead of thinking of the actual victims of their nonsense not-love-but-something story - Samrat and Sai. And that might be KBA’s modus operandi, but that’s not who and what Virat has been shown to be. I understand the compulsion to do a copy paste of the Bengali, but Virat is not Rono - he is more sensitive and nuanced - then why make the dialogues like this? I actually didn’t even like Sai’s dialogues that much today, to be honest. Also adding to Neeraja’s point above - Mohit touched Sai’s shoulder, and Pulkit held her hand and sat at her bedside - but the husband who loves her was shown to be socially distancing. It looked really odd.

I am tired of pointing it out again and again.. Things are now not even that can be brushed under some random reason.. It looks like intentional ignorance from makers side...

Originally posted by: Kumuda-123

Agree to disagree. Can't take his behaviour as typical one. What he should have said 'I know what I did was so wrong, I hurted u so much, I'm responsible for ur condition, but please forgive me, I behaved ruthlessly because of my possessive nature, but I didn't intend to call u characterless. I messed up with my words. Please give me one last chance where I can rectify my mistake'. That's how his apology should be. If he genuinely accepted his mistakes & asked another chance for their relationship sake then it would have made sense. Not all husbands are like virat, a loving husband will try to understand the pain he caused his wife instead of asking her to forget everything so that he can escape from being accountable. Today he literally put all blame on sai for whatever happened. Can't generalize his actions as typical man behavior.

I don’t think they want to show virat as a superb man who has all the characteristics.. a woman desires and aspires for .. this author Leena Gangopadhyay .. specialises in writing stories where the lead characters have a lot of faults .. and virat is one of them .. that’s why audience are lapping it up ..

if virat accepts his mistake .. and never does it again .. then what ..all the interest in love story gets over .. this is a daily soap .. not a webseries ..the charm is when things are still unsettled between the lead couple ..

If u want to watch perfect miya biwi Wala love story then watch the earlier show in sitara.. the elder couple is left solving their family issues ..

Originally posted by: nethraa_99

Agree 100%. Virat's dialogues today were pathetic...😕.

I wasn't expecting a profusely crying Gopi bahu, but some heartfelt, honest conversation. Listening to her pain and responding to it honestly. He started off with a sorry, Sai criticised him for calling her characterless which Virat denied. And that's it. After that it was all about desperate Virat trying to get her back to CN. 😳

And him not wanting to talk about the incident 😵.

First thing that kept screaming into my head... this girl has been through a life-threatening accident, just out from OT and immediately you stress her with bhaari bharkam emotional atyachaar. Arre bhai, saans to lene do.🤓It's like he walks into the room and immediately starts reciting his apologies without even attempting to even go to he bed.

I too was remembering the Virat of initial episodes. They have ruined him.😭His latest Kabir Singh avatar was so contrived. They need to write a better screenplay.

That's where I find him selfish and someone who loves self victimization..I hurt you..I gave you pain.. you are hurt.. but I am more hurt..so I will not listen to you talk about your pain or what hurt you please please please...He did it before and did it again today...

His sorry also looked like he is forcing it on her...Le lo sorry please..no earnest both forceful..

Starts reciting apologies and talks about how she should have listened to his accusations 'calmly'.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

I am tired of pointing it out again and again.. Things are now not even that can be brushed under some random reason.. It looks like intentional ignorance from makers side...

virat did not touch her because he was guilty.. when he tried holding her hand she jerked it away with force .. he could sense .. she was totally mad at him ..

Mohit n pulkit share warm platonic vibes with Sai .. they had done nothing why will they not give her a friendly brotherly nudge ..

You seriously think .. Sai would have accepted virat’s proximity or any sort of touch today at hospital .. and could virat not sense the vibe
The direction is sub par most of the time I agree .. they should touch more when things are good between then .. which is never done properly

Originally posted by: Kumuda-123

Agree to disagree. Can't take his behaviour as typical one. What he should have said 'I know what I did was so wrong, I hurted u so much, I'm responsible for ur condition, but please forgive me, I behaved ruthlessly because of my possessive nature, but I didn't intend to call u characterless. I messed up with my words. Please give me one last chance where I can rectify my mistake'. That's how his apology should be. If he genuinely accepted his mistakes & asked another chance for their relationship sake then it would have made sense. Not all husbands are like virat, a loving husband will try to understand the pain he caused his wife instead of asking her to forget everything so that he can escape from being accountable. Today he literally put all blame on sai for whatever happened. Can't generalize his actions as typical man behavior.

I agree there... his how Sai should have listened to his accusations calmly and reacted calmly while he went on with his kya kar the akele room mei even when she kept on answering without registering it.. till she had that accident....was pure BS..He did not even go near her bed to talk or check how she is felling..Enter the room say sorry and start talking about where she went wrong..Even when one are at hospital because of their own mistake and in that condition.. their loved ones don't blame them atleast at that point of time...

Him talking about not wanting to even hear about Sai's hurt was insensitive.😡

Worst of all telling the doctor his wife does not want him there...WTF was that ??

Originally posted by: msin

I don’t think they want to show virat as a superb man who has all the characteristics.. a woman desires and aspires for .. this author Leena Gangopadhyay .. specialises in writing stories where the lead characters have a lot of faults .. and virat is one of them .. that’s why audience are lapping it up ..

if virat accepts his mistake .. and never does it again .. then what ..all the interest in love story gets over .. this is a daily soap .. not a webseries ..the charm is when things are still unsettled between the lead couple ..

If u want to watch perfect miya biwi Wala love story then watch the earlier show in sitara.. the elder couple is left solving their family issues ..

And thanks but no thanks for other show suggestions 😊.

I rest my case here 🥰.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

I agree there... his how Sai should have listened to his accusations calmly and reacted calmly while he went on with his kya kar the akele room mei even when she kept on answering without registering it.. till she had that accident....was pure BS..He did not even go near her bed to talk or check how she is felling..Enter the room say sorry and start talking about where she went wrong..Even when one are at hospital because of their own mistake and in that condition.. their loved ones don't blame them atleast at that point of time...

Him talking about not wanting to even hear about Sai's hurt was insensitive.😡

Worst of all telling the doctor his wife does not want him there...WTF was that ??

Mostly agree with you all..

They screwed up with directions badly otherwise the scene would have turned out outstanding.

When Virat entered it did look like he was talking to the wall. Bad editing. May be they had to take the scene separately .

Apart from that when someone gain consciousness you ask about how they are feeling or about their discomfort etc etc.

Virat didn't blame her for what has happened. He actually looked out of place and didn't know what to say. He was so happy to see his Sai is okay .Its a common human nature.

He is guilt. Because his anger all these happened to Sai. That's why was keep on asking him not remind him the incident. Though I not trivializing his actions Never. I meant that's also part of human nature. You don't want to remember any painful incident if you are the reason because that keep on haunting you. Hardly any man can face it and overcome from the situation. I can say Virat is extremely emotional. Again when it comes to Sai he is blindfolded by his sentiments for her.

He tried to state that he is insecure because he wants the marriage to be real. Doesn't want to loose her to anybody. But hit timing is just so wrong hence everything went over the head of Sai.

If Sai still wants to stay with virat she should be clear about her reasons. She needs to accept it to herself that she loves Virat.Because if she goes back that indicates that she is accepting him by all means. His anger, his impulsiveness everything...

What I felt Virat never going to reform.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

That's where I find him selfish and someone who loves self victimization..I hurt you..I gave you pain.. you are hurt.. but I am more hurt..so I will not listen to you talk about your pain or what hurt you please please please...He did it before and did it again today...

His sorry also looked like he is forcing it on her...Le lo sorry please..no earnest both forceful..

Starts reciting apologies and talks about how she should have listened to his accusations 'calmly'.

Yes, he is being selfish. I think his selfishness is coming out of his desperation. If you see he was truly remorseful when he was outside with his family members. He was even wailing inconsolably out of guilt.

Sai is out of danger now. After Pulkit threatened to take Sai with him, Virat is staring at the possibility of losing Sai. He is scared that if Sai chooses to leave, he may not be able to earn her forgiveness. He is driven by selfish motive to save the relationship. He is desperate to get her home - where he can hope to put efforts into the relationship.

None of this is desirable but that is the state Virat is in now.

He has nothing to defend himself with, no explanation to give. He knows he has done something extremely foolish and hurtful. I think that's why he didn't want to talk about it. Probably feeling foolish too, I don't know. In ousting kaand, after he returns from hospital, he stops Sai from speaking about it - not necessarily to shut Sai up but because he was deeply disturbed about what he had done and dusted not wish to revisit it. But the problem is the issues remain unresolved. He is looking at solutions in the wrong direction, unfortunately.

The dialogues were still off for me though - they were getting me irritated.