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Posted: 4 years ago
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I want somebody to write on these suggestions pls.

Somebody pls take your valuable and precious time and pls write on the below mentioned suggestions..

1) I want somebody write on karva chauth scene, that watch gift after the fast and that sindoor scene before the fast has to open. After Karva chauth ceremony ridhu gift him watch and the same dialogue baazi from the show and then he tells her about ragini the entire truth and then she also tells her the truth but initially, she was hesitant that if she reveals her truth he may leave her but she thinks that she doesn't wants to start her relationship on jhooth she tell him and he was angry but ridhu tells him that after marriage especially after shotout she fell in love with you and nobody else and then they make love each other.

2) Actually this suggestion is based on idea that I have taken from wattapad..

So the scene starts from where vansh holds the press conference and then introduce aahaan as her wife and all things same from show and ishani throw ridhu out of the house and she left the place.

7 yrs leap and Ridhima is living in London with his friend and her daughter. Here vansh gets to know about ridhima sachai and tries to find her but unable to find her. One day he get a business offer from ridhima's friend so he went to London with his entire family. Ridhima doesn't know that his friend know Vansh and she doesn't tell him about her past to his friend. Ridhu friend invited vansh and his family to ridhu's daughter bday celebration. Vansh and his family arrives and see the daughter and unknowingly he starts feeling something in heart and he starts feeling restless or maybe he got peace after so many years.

Then ridhu arrived with vanya's cake (ridhu daughter) and she kissed Vanya unknowingly vansh was looking at her and feels so happy. But in one moment he feels jealous that vanya calling ridhu friend as papa. He comes to know that vanya is like her, her all habits are like him and he concluded that she is her daughter and nobody has a right to be her father.

Then ridhu friend introduce ridhima to vansh and his family. She starts feeling restless and all memories of throwing her out came in front of her.

Vanya introduce vansh as his friends to ridhu.

Vanya and vansh becomes friends before her bday celebration as once he saved her from hitting from car and then they have ice cream and become best friends. Ridhu doesn't want vanya to be near with vansh or his family.

Vansh tries to meet ridhima but she doesn't come and when she was going for her meeting or office she came outside and collided with vansh. He ask for forgiveness but ridhu doesn't bother to answer and ignored him for few days and then vansh came with demand that if she didn't forgive him he will take his daughter with him to India. And then they start fighting. And ridhu tries to hurt him and wants him to feel the pain that she actually suffers when he fails to recognize during the press conference. And her revenge starts but she came to know that he already suffer so much so she forgives him at the end.

3) So this scene starts where he was going to meet ragini after that karva chauth scene and ragini was listening to vansh and angry talk and then vansh see her spying. Then vansh shifts ragini but here ridhima was unable to find the place where ragini is shifted. So she goes to home and to her and was surprised to find vansh over there. She wants to ask him directly that where he shifted ragini? And here vansh was smirking and saying sweetheart kaha gayi thi?

Kuch dhoondne gayi the? Mila kya?

aidhima was so angry that she holds her collar that you are so mean and u r haiwan and all bad stuff and that u don't value anybody life and vansh holds her hands and pinned to walls and said that he values everybody life but life is so unfair that it takes all your precious stuff and said that I know u meet ragini so that's why I shifted. She doubts him and thinks he wants to kill ragini so she start saying bad things to vansh and irritated vansh kissed her and say that sometimes it is better to hide some things and then tries to have access to her lips but push him and then he holds her and say that trust him he will never kill any pure soul.

She was touched by his confessions and asks about ragini. He says that she is safe and will never harm her and will tell truth when times comes . pls trust me and then they have eyelocked and then they make love.


Sorry for grammatical mistakes and my English is little poor so pls don't offend..

Pls somebody write on these suggestions 🙏🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey guys i know everyone is waiting for my message. đŸ€ȘđŸ€ȘđŸ€ȘI actually want to write on 1 and 3. I have had enough of writing revenge track so anyone else can take that🙈🙈🙈🙈...but it will take time to write them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mein kuch aisa likhna chahati hoon jaha dono estranged lovers the aur fir kafi sal bad mile. Ek dusre k liye hurdles create karenge fir Mu hoga and then upon clearing them they will reunite.

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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Mein kuch aisa likhna chahati hoon jaha dono estranged lovers the aur fir kafi sal bad mile. Ek dusre k liye hurdles create karenge fir Mu hoga and then upon clearing them they will reunite.


That is a fresh concept do write it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Mein kuch aisa likhna chahati hoon jaha dono estranged lovers the aur fir kafi sal bad mile. Ek dusre k liye hurdles create karenge fir Mu hoga and then upon clearing them they will reunite.

Likho likho 🙏🙏

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Originally posted by: raveena0605


Ya i have kept it in my wattpad library. I will read it. But my personal favorite is Guns and Roses. And A king's wife.

Yeh toh avi likhna shuru kiya hai. Lets hope it goes well!
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey tumhare 3rd wale suggestion what exactly you wanna see? Batana mere ko.

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Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey tumhare 3rd wale suggestion what exactly you wanna see? Batana mere ko.

I want to see when After karva chauth she misunderstood vansh and vansh too misunderstood her and then next day she was listening to vansh and angre conversation regarding ragini's place shifting.

She tries to find ragini in first place but she didnt find.

Actually in the show she has installed some GPS tracker in vansh phone so she was able to locate place where ragini was shifted but I want that she didn't come about 2nd location where ragini is shifted and then she tries to confront vansh and then he smartly acts what she is asking or where she has gone? And did she find it what she was finding

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