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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Flora_Fauna

instead of watching the cringe episodes your book is more interesting to read can't wait to read ahead

Thank you ☺️.

Btw are u on Wattpad?

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Part 29: Dard


"Malini"

Imlie froze in her steps, a sudden feeling of trepidation and something familiar yet distant coursing within her. She curled her fists, her eyes shut tight as she tried to gain some control over herself. Taking a deep breath, she turned. A young lady dressed in brown saree, her hairs left open, slightly big earrings dangling from her ears, a small bindi on her forehead, her smile as beautiful as the moon, her neck bare, her wrists adorned with a pair of bangles on one hand and a watch on the other, her face glowing, stood infront with Aparna and Radha on either side of her. She was speaking something to them which Imlie couldn't hear after which Aparna hugged her.

Imlie just stood watching her not able to comprehend what she felt at seeing the woman who was her husband's love, who would be his wife, who would be having all those rights she dint have. Imlie shook her head. It shouldn't matter isn't it? It shouldn't matter because she knew this from before. Yet it did! Imlie sighed and turned to go when she heard

"Who is she?" Malini asked looking at Imlie whose back was facing her.

"She's Imlie! She's joined here for work" Radha answered to which Malini nodded. She dint understand why but she wanted to see her once. Malini could feel a certain warmth in her heart for the girl infront who wasn't even facing her and she wanted to find out why. Was she somebody familiar?

"Imlie come here beta" Aparna called out. Imlie slowly turned and looked at them. The moment she saw Imlie, flashes of something played in her mind and her fingers dug into her palm. Sweat beads started trickling down her forehead all of a sudden and she felt her breaths grow a bit shallow.

"Excuse me Aunty. I need to use the washroom. If you could show me which one I can use" Malini asked, trying her best to sound normal.

"Sure beta. Use the one in Adi's room" Aparna directed her which brought back the interaction of sometime back flashing in Imlie's mind. Her heart twitched in her chest as her eyes filled.

"Umm Kaki I'll be back in sometime. I just remembered something" Imlie said and literally ran away before Aparna could say a word, happening to move in the opposite direction Malini went in a moment back! She ran and slipping behind the saree door, sat on her bed and cried. Bringing her knees together, she placed her head on it and let her tears flow, not a single sound slipping her mouth.

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Malini leaned against the door breathing heavily as those flashes haunted her again. They weren't new to her. Only, they never haunted her during the day. Why then did it happen today? Why looking at Imlie brought those flashes to her mind? Why?

Tears slipped down her eyes even as she collapsed down on the floor, against the door. Keeping her head on her knees, she cried silently.

That unfortunate day, what she saw then would come to haunt her each night after that. But she dint want her mother who was the worst hit to have another worry on her head. And so she decided to sleep alone in her own room from then so that she could keep her nightmares away from her parents, who's world had just collapsed. Only while one knew, the other dint the aftermath of which was the severely butchered relationship they still shared!

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Aditya stood in the balcony, the feeling of something being wrong making him restless. He couldn't figure out why his heart felt so heavy as if weighed down by tonnes of something. Already whatever happened at Pagdandiya was a huge burden that he was carrying on his chest and now, he felt as if one more had been added to the pile. Irritated at not able to make out anything, irritated he was stuck in such a situation, he banged the table kept infront in anger and left the balcony. Maybe a short drive would help.

As he stepped out of the balcony, his eyes fell on the saree door. His brows furrowed in confusion. Why was a saree hung there like that? He moved towards it and as he did, he felt the familiar strange feeling course through him. That's when the very familiar sound of bangles reached his ears.

"Imlie" her name escaped his mouth before he could even register it.

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She froze when she heard his voice call out her name. No she couldn't face him right now. Why is he here even? Isn't Malini Didi with him? Wait, has he come to warn her about the truth again? Doesn't he trust her even this bit?

She hurriedly wiped her tears and stood up. Moving the saree door a little, she peeped out only to meet his eyes.

"What is it Babusaheb?" she asked still looking into his eyes.

"What are you doing there?" he asked instead of answering her question.

"Kaki has given me this corner to stay in since yo-your m-marriage functions shall be done in the house and hence there is no other place. I just covered this with a saree which would act as the door so that I can have my privacy"

"Hmm okay" he said

"Malini Didi has come right? Why don't you go meet her? If you have any work, you can tell me then"

"Hmm...wait what? Mun has come....here? When? If yes why hasn't she met me yet? And how do you know it's her?"

She rolled her eyes and said

"I have my senses working well that's why"

"You mean to say I don't?" he asked glaring at her.

"Any doubt in that? Of course you don't!"

"Imlie......" and their banter continued till they heard Aparna calling Imlie, interrupting Adi when he was retorting back to her.

Imlie grabbing the opportunity ran from there. He shook his head and turned to move towards his room but then again turned and moved the saree door and looked in.

"Aditya" he heard Malini call out to him and he left from there


PS: Sorry if this hasn't turned out so good. Wrote it in a hurry.

Love,

PSR




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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 30: Sach Ke Parinaam


He sat on the bench, holding his head in his hand. Tears flowed down his eyes which he dint bother to wipe. Why was all of this happening?

After convincing Malini to come with him to the café, he had mustered the courage to tell her the truth. He dint want to marry her, keeping her in the dark. He knew that'd be like betraying her.
Look at his fate now - he had to do the same thing! He had to keep her in the dark for her own wellbeing.

"She's really weak mentally. Any thing that can shock or surprise her or give her stress should be kept away from her. She collapsed due to shock but she's stable now. One more such attack and it might not be really good for her health" the doctor's words rang in his head.

The love of his life was lying unconscious inside and he could do nothing. He sighed deeply and painfully swallowed as he realised he'd have to hide the truth from her. When he's hiding it from her itself, what's the point of telling others?

He felt scared for a moment. What if his family forced him to leave Malini since he was already married to Imlie?
No! He shook his head. That wasn't a possibility. His family would understand, wouldn't they?

He had no answer to that question so he decided he wouldn't tell the truth. He'd bear that burden on his chest than telling the truth and destroying lives. If only he realised just how much he was actually destroying her life by doing so!

"Sir, can you please fill this form and make the payment" a nurse's voice brought him out of his thoughts. He nodded and took the form. He filled it and reached for his wallet but did not find it! Where was it? That's when he remembered he had left it back at home. He sighed irritatedly. He couldn't go leaving Malini all alone here but he needed his money as well.

He took out his phone and dialled the house landline since he knew most of them wouldn't answer their phones, being busy in getting the arrangements done.

"Hello" he heard when the phone was picked up after 3 rings. He fisted his hands, anger bubbling within him at her voice. If she hadn't come into their lives, this wouldn't have been the situation today.

"Babusaheb?" she called out

"How do you know it's me? Koi bhi hosakta hain. Landline pe naam thodi dikhte hain" he asked unable to stop himself, completely forgetting the anger he felt just a moment back.
(It can be anybody. You can't see names on the landline can you)

"I just know" she almost whispered and then hurriedly said
"What have you called for Babusaheb?"

Aditya sighed. He had to tell her. She was the only one he could tell.

"Bring my purse. It's on the cabinet in my room. Take it and come to Sanjog hospital right away"

"Hospital? Are you okay? What happened? Did you fall off your bike? Why do you even ride it when you can't drive properly? Where are you hurt? Should I tell the family? Wait, Malini Didi was with you right. Is she okay? Hey Sita Maiyya, did you drop her?" Imlie said it all in one breath.

"Hogaya? Ab hamari baat sunogi? Bullet train bhi itne speed se nahi chalti! Inme se kuch bhi nahi hua meri Maa! And just do as I say! Bring it to the hospital! And don't tell anybody!"
(Done? Will you listen to me now? Bullet train is also not this fast! None among these have happened meri Maa!)

"O-okay Babusaheb" she said and rushed to get the wallet. She reached the threshold of the room she couldn't cross so she bent and managed to take the walled from atop the cabinet and left. But just as she moved towards the door, she realised she dint actually know where Sanjog hospital was!

"Arey Imlie, where are you going?"

"Umm Kaki, Babusaheb has forgotten his purse. He had called at the landline. I picked it up since all of you were busy. His friend has been admitted to the hospital so he can't come himself to get it and hence told me to bring it. Can you tell me where the hospital is?"

"Oh is it? Don't worry, I'll send Suresh. He's our driver. He'll take you to the hospital. I hope whoever it is, he'll get well soon" Aparna said and went to call Suresh. She heaved a sigh of relief and left behind her.
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Malini woke up to a splitting headache and a certain heaviness in her head. All she could remember was she was in the house with Aditya asking her to come with him to the café after which she couldn't recall anything except darkness.

"Mun, how are you feeling now?" he asked as he rushed towards her, worried to see her holding her head.

"Aditya? What happened Aditya? We were at your house right? How did I reach here? I can't remember anything after"

Aditya sighed in relief. He thanked God she did not remember what he told because if she did, it'd have been so difficult to convince her, without telling the truth, why he had said all of that!

"No nothing much Mun. You just fainted when we reached the café so I brought you to the hospital. The doctor said you need a lot of rest and should avoid taking stress"

"Hmm"

"Shall I get you something?"

"No, just stay here"

"Hmm okay, I'm right here"

Silence prevailed for sometime till both heard the door click open, making them look at who it was at the door.

"Imlie" Malini whispered with a smile, warmth in her tone which made Aditya look towards her immediately. What the hell? Why were everyone being so warm and tender to her? He then looked at Imlie. Is she some enchantress by any chance? First his mother and now Mun?

"How are you now Malini Didi? What happened? Did Babusaheb drop you off his bike apart from falling himself?" she asked at which Malini giggled and Aditya glared at her.

"No no. He dint do anything such. I just fainted....."

"Because you haven't had food since morning?"

"How did you know?"

"I just do" she said and walked towards them. Handing the wallet to him, she wished Malini a speedy recovery and moved from there, all the while his eyes not leaving her.


Love,
PSR

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Posted: 4 years ago
its quite good Infact it is helping us relate to the real episodes as well link the dots
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Posted: 4 years ago
this is better and more relatable than the crap they showed us in the beginning
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Originally posted by: Ps143

Part 30: Sach Ke Parinaam


He sat on the bench, holding his head in his hand. Tears flowed down his eyes which he dint bother to wipe. Why was all of this happening?

After convincing Malini to come with him to the café, he had mustered the courage to tell her the truth. He dint want to marry her, keeping her in the dark. He knew that'd be like betraying her.
Look at his fate now - he had to do the same thing! He had to keep her in the dark for her own wellbeing.

"She's really weak mentally. Any thing that can shock or surprise her or give her stress should be kept away from her. She collapsed due to shock but she's stable now. One more such attack and it might not be really good for her health" the doctor's words rang in his head.

The love of his life was lying unconscious inside and he could do nothing. He sighed deeply and painfully swallowed as he realised he'd have to hide the truth from her. When he's hiding it from her itself, what's the point of telling others?

He felt scared for a moment. What if his family forced him to leave Malini since he was already married to Imlie?
No! He shook his head. That wasn't a possibility. His family would understand, wouldn't they?

He had no answer to that question so he decided he wouldn't tell the truth. He'd bear that burden on his chest than telling the truth and destroying lives. If only he realised just how much he was actually destroying her life by doing so!

"Sir, can you please fill this form and make the payment" a nurse's voice brought him out of his thoughts. He nodded and took the form. He filled it and reached for his wallet but did not find it! Where was it? That's when he remembered he had left it back at home. He sighed irritatedly. He couldn't go leaving Malini all alone here but he needed his money as well.

He took out his phone and dialled the house landline since he knew most of them wouldn't answer their phones, being busy in getting the arrangements done.

"Hello" he heard when the phone was picked up after 3 rings. He fisted his hands, anger bubbling within him at her voice. If she hadn't come into their lives, this wouldn't have been the situation today.

"Babusaheb?" she called out

"How do you know it's me? Koi bhi hosakta hain. Landline pe naam thodi dikhte hain" he asked unable to stop himself, completely forgetting the anger he felt just a moment back.
(It can be anybody. You can't see names on the landline can you)

"I just know" she almost whispered and then hurriedly said
"What have you called for Babusaheb?"

Aditya sighed. He had to tell her. She was the only one he could tell.

"Bring my purse. It's on the cabinet in my room. Take it and come to Sanjog hospital right away"

"Hospital? Are you okay? What happened? Did you fall off your bike? Why do you even ride it when you can't drive properly? Where are you hurt? Should I tell the family? Wait, Malini Didi was with you right. Is she okay? Hey Sita Maiyya, did you drop her?" Imlie said it all in one breath.

"Hogaya? Ab hamari baat sunogi? Bullet train bhi itne speed se nahi chalti! Inme se kuch bhi nahi hua meri Maa! And just do as I say! Bring it to the hospital! And don't tell anybody!"
(Done? Will you listen to me now? Bullet train is also not this fast! None among these have happened meri Maa!)

"O-okay Babusaheb" she said and rushed to get the wallet. She reached the threshold of the room she couldn't cross so she bent and managed to take the walled from atop the cabinet and left. But just as she moved towards the door, she realised she dint actually know where Sanjog hospital was!

"Arey Imlie, where are you going?"

"Umm Kaki, Babusaheb has forgotten his purse. He had called at the landline. I picked it up since all of you were busy. His friend has been admitted to the hospital so he can't come himself to get it and hence told me to bring it. Can you tell me where the hospital is?"

"Oh is it? Don't worry, I'll send Suresh. He's our driver. He'll take you to the hospital. I hope whoever it is, he'll get well soon" Aparna said and went to call Suresh. She heaved a sigh of relief and left behind her.
____________________________________________________

Malini woke up to a splitting headache and a certain heaviness in her head. All she could remember was she was in the house with Aditya asking her to come with him to the café after which she couldn't recall anything except darkness.

"Mun, how are you feeling now?" he asked as he rushed towards her, worried to see her holding her head.

"Aditya? What happened Aditya? We were at your house right? How did I reach here? I can't remember anything after"

Aditya sighed in relief. He thanked God she did not remember what he told because if she did, it'd have been so difficult to convince her, without telling the truth, why he had said all of that!

"No nothing much Mun. You just fainted when we reached the café so I brought you to the hospital. The doctor said you need a lot of rest and should avoid taking stress"

"Hmm"

"Shall I get you something?"

"No, just stay here"

"Hmm okay, I'm right here"

Silence prevailed for sometime till both heard the door click open, making them look at who it was at the door.

"Imlie" Malini whispered with a smile, warmth in her tone which made Aditya look towards her immediately. What the hell? Why were everyone being so warm and tender to her? He then looked at Imlie. Is she some enchantress by any chance? First his mother and now Mun?

"How are you now Malini Didi? What happened? Did Babusaheb drop you off his bike apart from falling himself?" she asked at which Malini giggled and Aditya glared at her.

"No no. He dint do anything such. I just fainted....."

"Because you haven't had food since morning?"

"How did you know?"

"I just do" she said and walked towards them. Handing the wallet to him, she wished Malini a speedy recovery and moved from there, all the while his eyes not leaving her.


Love,
PSR

Awesome...

BTW I already read it on wattpad

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Flora_Fauna

its quite good Infact it is helping us relate to the real episodes as well link the dots

Glad to hear that

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Flora_Fauna

this is better and more relatable than the crap they showed us in the beginning

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiti

Awesome...

BTW I already read it on wattpad

Thank you ☺️

Hehe good

What's your wattpad id btw?

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Oh yes

You have your works published on Wattpad as well right

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