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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am shocked that naresh who adopted a boy could bot accept sanchi bcz of brainwashing.liked sujal telling virat to stay there to keep an eye on swayam.whats manvi's take on this issue?shravan apologizing to rakesh on behalf of naresh was nice.how can rakesh say that shravan also did injustice to sanchi like his dad?loved sanchi dancing with shravan. Rakesh slapping him n sanchi was sad.but thinking of the past moments he hugging sanchi emotionally was touchy.surprising that shravan took up the job of a cook in the hotel.i hope he will impress rakesh.now what will the angry naresh do?perfect pics.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Rakesh threw his temper for Naresh on Shravan.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I am shocked that naresh who adopted a boy could bot accept sanchi bcz of brainwashing.liked sujal telling virat to stay there to keep an eye on swayam.whats manvi's take on this issue?shravan apologizing to rakesh on behalf of naresh was nice.how can rakesh say that shravan also did injustice to sanchi like his dad?loved sanchi dancing with shravan. Rakesh slapping him n sanchi was sad.but thinking of the past moments he hugging sanchi emotionally was touchy.surprising that shravan took up the job of a cook in the hotel.i hope he will impress rakesh.now what will the angry naresh do?perfect pics.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 9


Fabulous and so Awesome Update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 10

A senior cook named Sagar met the hotel manager after a long break.

The hotel manager said, "Sorry, there is no job for you as I have hired someone else."

Sagar: I am sorry, please give me a chance.

Praful: I gave you enough chances. We called you up, but you never bothered to pick our call. I don't have a job for you.


He called Shravan.

Shravan: Yes, Sir.

Praful said, "Sagar, he is the guy I hired & I am happy with his work."

Sagar leaves.

His friends said, "It is an insult to you."

Sagar: Yes, I know & I will fix that guy.

The next day

Sagar comes to the hotel earlier & occupies Shravan's place.

Shravan came there & said, "Kitchen is my place. Please move."

Sagar: You want Kitchen, right. Do you love cooking? Wait, I will show you.


Sagar takes the frying spoon & starts hitting Shravan.

Both start fighting.

Praful entered.

He stopped the fight & said, "Sagar, you have crossed all your limits."

Praful goes to Shravan & says, "I hope you are fine."

Shravan nods.

Praful: The next time, if you raise your hand on a youngster, it won't be good for you."

Sagar leaves fuming.

Shravan: Sir, can I continue.

Praful: I know you work very hard, but you got injured & you need rest.

Shravan: Every day is crucial for me.

Shravan lifts the hearth, but his hand starts bleeding.

Praful: The wound is fresh. Would you please take some rest?

Saanchi enters the Kitchen & applies turmeric on his wound.

The bleeding stops immediately.

Saanchi helps Shravan with his cooking.

The background song is:


Saanchi cuts the vegetables & makes the chapathi flour ready.

Shravan does the cooking.

Both of them work as a team.

Shravan: How come you are here today?

Saanchi: The company gave us leave according to the US holidays. Since Praful is my father's friend, he allowed me to help you.

So, even my efforts count.


Shravan hugs her.


After the customers leave, Shravan & Saanchi wash vessels.

Saanchi washes the clothes used for the Kitchen and the tables.


Saanchi uses the hotel bathroom and washes Shravan's clothes. However, she struggles to hang them as the cloth line is high.

Shravan sits like a horse for her and helps her to hang the clothes.

Both of them leave for the day.

Rakesh sees Shravan exhausted and says, "You got tired within two days! Still, 28 days to go. Leave the job and go home. The labor work is not in your cup of tea."

Shravan: Cooking is one of the things that I love. I prepared food exclusively for you. Please taste it and tell me.

Rakesh: An outside food is an outside food.

Saanchi: The customers gave good feedback that it is a homely food.

Avi: Yes, uncle, please have it.

Rakesh: Okay. If you guys insist, I shall have it.

Rakesh tastes the food. He said, "Yes, you guys are right. Shravan prepared yummy food. But Shravan, keep one thing in mind. You are yet to complete the challenge."

Shravan: I understand.

Rakesh: Now go to your room.


Shravan goes to the room.

The days pass by. At the end of the month,

Praful decides to expand his hotel by accommodating the music and dance.

Shravan goes to the hotel the next day.

Praful makes an announcement, "Guys, we are now going to accommodate music and dance in our hotel, and you will get extra payment for your music."

Shravan comes to the stage with his colleagues and Saanchi. The background song plays.

Dil De Ke Darde Mohabbat Liya Hai

Soch Samajh Ke Yeh Sauda Kiya Hai

Maine Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya Hai

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Pehle Pehal Jab Use Maine Dekha

Woh Ban Gayee Meri Kismat Ki Rekha

Khabar Kya Thi Yeh Baat Itni Badhegi

Mohabbat Mein Mehnat Bhi Karni Padegi

Dilwale Mehnat Se Darte Nahin Hain

Darte Hain Woh Pyar Karte Nahin Hain

Maine Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya Hai

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Duniya Ki Daulat Thukra Chuka Hoon

Zulfon Ki Chhaon Mein Aakar Ruka Hoon

Yeh Chhaon Meri Hai Meri Rahegi

Jo Main Kahoonga Woh Duniya Kahegi

Yeh Chand Sooraj Bhi Chhoden Chamakna

Mushkil Hain Mere Iraade Badalna

Maine Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya Hai

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Maein Teri, Dil Tera, Yeh Jaan Teri

Teri Mohabbat Hai Pehchaan Meri

Maein Aaj Kehti Hoon Yeh Sabke Aage

Ek Din Maein Keh Doongi Yeh Rab Ke Aage

Tujhko Hi Bigdi Banana Padega

Bichhde Hue Dil Milana Padega

Maine Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya,

Pyar Kiya Hai…


Praful: Thank you for making our music inauguration a hit. Shravan, you have contributed a lot to my hotel.

Praful pays salary, prize money, and gives the best employee award to Shravan.

Praful: From now on, you are a leading singer.

All of them clap.

Shravan & Saanchi returns home.

Shravan showed the money he earned & said, "I have completed your challenge. Can I dream about marrying your daughter?"

Rakesh: You still have a long way to go. It is just the beginning for you.

Avi: Uncle, you told him one month & he completed it.

Rakesh: You can say that Shravan cleared the first level. There's no need for you to be so happy. Shravan, for how many days can you feed my daughter with this money? I believe you lived lavishly throughout your life & you need to increase your resources, or you won't even be able to give her the meals twice.

Saanchi: Stop it! I don't expect anything from him. I am also there to give a helping hand & we share everything. You can only see the numbers, but are you not able to see the hard work & efforts that he put? Are you not able to see that he had put his work above his meals & drinks? FYI, he has now become a leading singer.

Rakesh gets speechless. Shravan feels bad.

He said, "Don't mind about what Saanchi said. It is only my love that's forcing her to talk like that. I agree with you on that point. I will ask for her hand only after establishing myself."


Shravan was about to go to his room.

Rakesh: Shravan.

Shravan comes.

Rakesh: You have completed your challenge. I was only testing your attitude & am happy with your response. Now, I have complete confidence that you will make progress in your life & give a comfortable life to my daughter.

All are happy.

Rakesh hugs Saanchi, Shravan, & Avi.

The next day, Shravan calls up Sujal & Virat to give them the good news.

Sujal picks the call.

Shravan: I got the promotion as a lead singer.

Sujal: That's great. You have done it!

Virat & Maanvi come to Sujal.

Virat: Congrats, Shravan.

Shravan: Can I speak to mom?

Sujal & Kashish call Garima.

Garima took the phone & said, "Well done, my boy!"

Shravan: Thank you, mom. Uncle called all of you to his place.

Garima: Sure, we will come.

Rakesh hears the word uncle. He said, "From now onwards, you call me dad or papa."

Garima, Sujal, Kashish, Virat, & Manvi goes to Naresh's place, but they find Swayam manipulating him.

Sujal: Stop it Swayam, Shravan made his identity & is on his own now. So stop poisoning our father's mind.

Naresh: What did Shravan do now?

Garima showed him Shravan's photo & said, "Shravan made remarkable progress within a month & you should be proud of him."

Naresh realizes that Swayam has been misleading him.

Before Swayam could utter a word, Naresh said, "Shutup. It is because of you I lost my son and my best friend. From now on, I am canceling my partnership with you."

Swayam: There is a procedure to come out of the contract. I hope you know the penalty that you have to pay.

Sujal: Yes, we know that we need to work together for ten years and we kept renewing the contract. Here is the blank check. I have put my signature. Fill the amount that you want and get lost."

Swayam: My daughter is perfect for your house. You don't know what you would lose.

Naresh: Don't worry, we have a backup for that. My company does not depend on anyone. We have our brand.

Swayam leaves.

He went to Tara and said, "Forget Shravan. He is not the right guy for you."

Suhail+Tara: Well, we have a plan. When we see Shravan, we will kill him and sell Saanchi for a good amount of money.

Swayam: Nice idea.

Swayam, Suhail, & Tara track down Sagar & befriend him to kill Shravan.

Naresh and his family meet Rakesh.

Naresh: Where is my boy?

Rakesh: Well, I don't know where your boy is, but I know the person who left all his comforts and made his identity.

Rakesh: Shravan.

Shravan comes out with Saanchi hand-in-hand.

Shravan: Dad, I am here.

Naresh: Rakesh, though I got the good news about my son, I was a little apprehensive when I didn't see him here. I am sorry for insulting you.

Rakesh: Bygones are bygones. I have good news from my side to give you. I want to show you my office.

Naresh: That's great. I think you took my words so much to your heart.

Rakesh: Nothing like that. I had a plan to work in the gulf for two years & start my business in India.


All of them get ready to visit the office & reach there.

Everyone starts praying.

Later on, Rakesh & Naresh said, "Shravan, Sujal, & Virat, find a good venue for the engagement party."

Shravan: I want Saanchi to come with us as she has the better taste.

All four of them fix up the venue & are about to return, but they find Suhail & Tara on the way."

Suhail: What's the hurry for you to get married?

Shravan: Stop blocking our way. We will deal with you later.

Suhail: No later on business. It has to be now. First, you think about your survival before getting married to your lady love.

Shravan: Tara, you say you love me, but you have come here to kill me. It means that you never loved me. It was Saanchi who truly loved me.

Tara: Shut up, Shravan. Are you comparing that middle-class lady with me? I am not Saanchi.

Shravan: Yes, you have said the right thing for the first time. I would say that you can never match Saamchi either.

All of them start fighting.

Virat goes to Naresh & informs him about Suhail, Tara, & Swayam.

The fight goes on.

Naresh & Virat come with the cops & get Swayam, Suhail, Tara, & Sagar arrested.

A week later, Shravan & Saanchi get engaged.

Sujal+Virat: Congratulations, bro & sister-in-law!

Saavan: Thanks a lot.

Both families make wedding preparations.

15 days later

Shravan & Saanchi gets married.

Both of them continue with their career.

Rakesh & Avi flourish in their business.

Eight months later, Kashish gets the labor pain.

Sujal & family take Kashish to the hospital.

Later on, the doctor came out & said, "Congratulations. You have got a girl child."

Everyone gets thrilled.

Garima names the child Naina.

They live happily ever after.

THE END

Edited by kavitha_r - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Beautiful part

Loved it

Keep writing ✍️📝💞😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Shocking that sugar went to the extent of hurting shravan as he replaced him in the hotel.good that praful thew him out.sanchi helping shravan in cooking...washing n shravan helping sanchi to hang clothes was lovely.hug was lovely.shravan taking sanchi for the music inauguration n shravan selected as the leading singer was very nice.again rakesh saying that shravan has a long way to go was irritating.but I liked sanchi defending shravan.shravan supporting rakesh n saying that he will first become established was touchy.surprising that rakesh was testing shravan n accepted him.glad that naresh realized his mistake n apologized to rakesh.shocking that tara too joined suhail sagar to kill shravan.shravan is right.tara has never loved shravan. Good that the villains got arrested.Happy that savan got married n kashish delivered a baby.nice pics.nice edits.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Part 10

superb update... well written


thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

beautiful update dear

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Sagar has some ego. He lost the job and he can't let someone else take it either.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Shravan and Sanchi work so well together. They are a pair.

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