Riansh ts - Rise like a Phoneix Part 3 page 3 complete

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Hey guys, since the story My Revenge didn't get much reviews, i am thinking of stopping writing os after this. I will just concentrate on the two stories left. Anyway this ts is a again a combination of three request like in the above mentioned story. So, here it goes,


Part 1


A girl was running around the mansion making sure everything was in order, today is a very special day for her, because it is the Godhbarai ceremony of her sister in law, who is more like an elder sister to her. She was running around in high heels, and suddenly her leg slipped, she closed her eyes, waiting for the inevitable pain but it never came,

M- Doll, you are getting heavy. No more chocolates for you.

G- Oh, hello i am not fat or heavy..😡😡

M- Oh, i was just kidding na, now don't be angry.

U- Riddhima...

R- Uma Ma, aap aa gayi...

U- Han and saath mein i have a surprise for you. Sia came and stood infront of her all healed. Riddhima squealed seeing her friend.

R- Yay, Sia you can walk. I am so happy. Come on sab andar chalo.


The rest of the Raisinghania family were in awe of the mansion, it was big as VR mansion but it had more homely feel to it. The mansion had Riddhima's touch it can be seen. They were all feeling a bit embarrassed as they were gawking around, but most of all they were gawking at the man who can be the twin of Vansh..

U- Vihaan how are beta? And London se wapas kab aaye?

Vi- Ek month phele hi aaya hun.

S- Waise Mom theek khethi hain, aap bikul Vansh bhai jaise ho.

Vi- No Sia, sirf shakal milti hain. Behavior uske jaise bikul nahi hain.

R- Vihaan.. he went away from there not interested to talk to that godforsaken family.


The whole function Vihaan had kept his distance from the family, the main reason he had went to London was because he didn't like the fact that Riddhima had agreed to forgive the family, not after everything they had done to her, especially Vansh.


Speaking of the devil, he came and stood next to him. Vihaan had physically stop himself from pouncing on him, everytime he saw his face or the longing devdas look he still gives to Riddhima,

V- How is she?

Vi- She is fine Vansh. You don't have to keep asking me that again and again.

V- Well you and Mom are the only people through which i can something about her. After everything that happened, she won't talk to me that is given.

Vi- Well you should have thought before betraying her.


Vihaan's phone pinged and he went towards Riddhima and told her to meet outside. After the function was nearly over, people were talking to her and Riddhima went outside but Vihaan was no where to be seen except a small basket in the middle of the garden, she opened it and squealed,

R- Puppy!!! aww, you are so cute..😘😘

Vi- You like it doll.

R- Aww, thank you so much for this gift. Waise yeh gift kis liya.

Vi- Woh, i fought with you, and went to London without telling you, isliye yeh puppy as a gift.

R- Aww, so from now on his name is Vihu. And jab bhi tum mujhse naraz ho jaogaye then he will sleep on the bed you on the couch😜😜😜😋😋

Vi- WHAT😈😡😡

R- Just kidding 🥰🥰🥰


Vihaan leaned down to kiss her and puppy suddenly started barking, Riddhima giggled but she kept the puppy in the basket and pulled him for a kiss, she had missed him when he went to London all that fear of loneliness, losing him came back to her. She never wanted to feel that.


They didn't know that someone was watching her, Vansh felt jealous he should have been the one to kiss and hold her but due to his anger, and him not knowing the whole truth he had hurt her the most, he still remembers the day of the press conference when everything changed,


Flashback


Vansh was ready to do everything to hurt Riddhima, she had betrayed him, played with his emotions, now he will play with her by taking away her identity. He was waiting for her at the press conference. But she didn't show up when he announced Ahana as his wife but as the press was leaving they heard clapping.


Everyone turned around to see Riddhima standing there, but she looked so different, elegant in her black short dress with high heels and smokey eye shadow,

R- Mr. Raisinghania, this is not fair aapne shaadi kar li and mujhe bulya bhi nahi?

R- Anyway congratulations to you. She turned to Ahana and congratulated her as well. Waise i have a surprise for you and it will make this moment even more special.

R- Uma Maa, aap andar aa sakti hain.


Everyone was stunned and shocked that Uma was alive, Vansh was so happy that his mother was alive he went to hug her, but she stopped him and then slapped him.

U- From today, you are not my son. I have a daughter and her name is Riddhima.

V- Mom...?


Ps- Next time the truth comes out, Riddhima staying at VR mansion, rest of Riddhima's family arrives along with Vihaan.


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Part 2- Page 1

Part 3- Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh this is damnnn good 😈❤️

Jao Vansh......Rihaan ko dekh dekh kar jal bhun jao😂😂🔥😏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is epic and damn good..

Lovely..

Continue soooonish.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Flashback was getting interesting.... Cliffhanger me kyu choda😭😭... Uma sab ki band bajane waali thi...


Rihaan💕💕💕💕


Vansh... Ab pachhtaye hoye kya jab chidiya chugh gayi khet...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2


The media people, everyone was shocked when Uma told that Vansh was no longer her son, they wanted to get more of the story but the guards forced them to go outside,

R- Mr. Raisinghania, ek beautiful presentation apna dikhayi thi media walo ko ek mein aap ko dikhati hun.

R- Maa, aap aur baki sab log please sit in the living room.


Riddhima played the video, it had everything she had to endure, Ishani throwing her in room full of coal, Aryan trying to harass her, Chanchal and Aryan trying to kidnapping her. And most of all Kabir's confession that Riddhima is a mere pawn in his game.


Riddhima saw Kabir trying to run away, taking the gun from the guards that had accompanied her and Uma, she shot in him in the legs, everyone was shocked seeing her like this,

R- Tch tch Kabir, i am not the same naive scared Riddhima, now that i am not bound to any promise i can do whatever i like with you and all those who have hurt me.

R- Guards!!! Take him away, it will be a great homecoming persent for my friend. So, where were we, yes promise? Maa will you tell them?

U- I was badly injured somehow i had managed to reach Riddhima's house, and i made them promise me to protect my family, my Vansh. Now it feels like i shouldn't have forced them.

R- No Maa, you just didn't know that they will become like this.

I- How can we say that everything she told now was the truth.

S- Yeh saach hain Ishani...

V- Sia?

S- Yes, bhai mujhe pe hamla Anupriya ne karwa tha. Because i came to know her truth.


Vansh was feeling guilty, unknowingly he had hurt Riddhima when she was the most innocent person, she too was played, and betrayed he went to say sorry when Riddhima said that,

R- Maa, now that i am free. I would like to return back home. I can't stay here.

V- Riddhima, please forgive me.

R- For what Mr. Raisinghania.

V- For everything, i know that whatever happened was wrong but..it was just a show you are my wife not Ahana...

R- Wife? What wife? The wife you shout, scream, push and shove whenever you feel like? The wife who took bullets upon her not once but twice? And yet you questioned her loyalty? The wife who wanted to tell you her truth time and again but you didn't want to listen and suddenly she is the one who betraying.


R- You want my forgiveness then give me the right to hurt your family like they hurt me.

V- But they are my family.

R- And i was not?

U- Riddhima, Vansh ke liya na sahi but for me please just stay one week.

S- Haan Bhabhi please.

R- Alright just for you two. Come on Sia let's go back to your room.


She went back to her old room, she didn't even want to see Vansh's face, she couldn't believe how stupid she was to think that he would ever love her, she was the one who fell in love with him, for her she was a mere possession nothing else.


She woke up early in the morning and went straight to the kitchen, her family is coming today and she had decided to make all of their favorite foods, she had just set the table when Sia, Uma and rest of them came,

R- Maa, Sia aap log neeche kyun aaye, you guys have to rest.

S- Bahut rest hogaya Riddhima...i want to eat this delicious food.

I- Yeh dawat humare liye hain.

U- STOP aap mein se koi bhi, yeh khana nahi khane wala, that is not for you. Aapka breakfast aapke ke kamara mein hain have there. I don't want to see anyone's face.

R- Aare wait, Maa abhi inko ek surprise aur dene baaki hain. Ishani woh tum mujhe kya bulati thi, yes orphan, middle class trash.etc..

R- So, for your information mein orphan nahi i have family.

I- And where is your so called family?

A- Yahan hain...


Aarav and his wife Nikita, who were Riddhima family but stayed away since she was fulfilling her promise, Riddhima was so happy she ran and hugged them,

R- Bhai, Bhabhi i missed you guys.

A- I know islye tumhare liye yeh saare gifts...they had brought for her handbags, chocolates, perfume and diamond necklace.


Everyone was standing with their mouths open especially Vansh, she looked so happy with her family, while with him she was always in trouble, Nikita was whispering something to Aarav and laughed,

R- Why are you both whispering?

N- Tumhare liye ek surprise aur haan. Yo, Mr. Hacker, come inside.


It seems like it was a day of surprises for the Raisinghania family, the man who stood infront of them was a exactly a replica of Vansh minus the beard. Riddhima squealed and ran and hugged him,

R- VIHAAN!!!

VI- offo, my god you have gained a lot of weight...😜😜

R- Shutup.. Guys come on, i have made so many things for you.


Riddhima and her family, Vihaan, Uma and Sia were sitting at the dining table, she was so excited, that her best friend is back and her family is back. Vansh was feeling jealous when Vihaan was feeding Riddhima, it was his right but right now Riddhima was not even looking at her.


She felt at peace now that her family are back, Vihaan looked at so called family of Uma aunty, he was thinking of ways to torture them, like they tortured Riddhima. He felt Riddhima's hand on his, he was so happy that he got his soulmate back. Only he knows how much he had suffered without her.


Ps- Next time, Vihaan and Riddhima romance, Riddhima to divorce Vansh and some torturing scenes of the family.


Ps- I think i won't write os after this, i really felt demotivated today but anyway i will try my best to complete the two stories. The next os will possibly will be my last os. Thank you for all your comments.

Edited by raveena0605 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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hey yaar dont stop posting os / ts..

its the only thing that make us remind on our riansh..

morethan that your writings are grreat and awesome..

be positive..


with lots of love

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Brilliant chapters Raveena 👏


Loving how Riddhima is in full tashan, the RS clan doesnt deserve an ounce of respect or care.


So hapy to see Vihaan


P.S. I have read most of your stories and you're really good at writing. Please don't be demotivated. 🤗The show has ended and moreover people are busy with exams/work hence the forum activity is low I feel. I'd advice you to keep writing whenever you feel like ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing ❤👏

Please don't stop writing for your genuine readers 🥺🥺♥️❤✨⭐🍀🍀

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Brilliant chapters Raveena 👏


Loving how Riddhima is in full tashan, the RS clan doesnt deserve an ounce of respect or care.


So hapy to see Vihaan


P.S. I have read most of your stories and you're really good at writing. Please don't be demotivated. 🤗The show has ended and moreover people are busy with exams/work hence the forum activity is low I feel. I'd advice you to keep writing whenever you feel like ❤️


It is just personal life is not good and writing is release for me, but when i see less comments on my chapter it does feel demoralizing, but let see what happens..thank for your motivation

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Both Chapters Were Awesome

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