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Posted: 4 years ago
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Not exactly a poem. But still tagging you😆

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Dekh liyo. Ainveyi bas😆

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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Dekh liyo. Ainveyi bas😆


Ooh!

Let me read after I finish up a little work... I need to imbibe!

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Aww babe!

So very sensitive... and heartfelt.

You feel guilty for feeling hurt about something that looks insignificant in comparison, but jo hai, woh hai..

I could feel her frustration... and Viru toh Baiko sack pehenke bhi aayi toh Miss World lagegi ussko - nikamma insaan!

He had to put his hands in his pocket!!! 😈 oooooohhh!!!

That's all she needs... the reassurance that not only her, he has changed too, the years have changed them both... and that she is always the most beautiful person in his eyes!!!

Awwwieeee.... my grl and my boy are so good together! And he is still Virat Sir 😳

I could see them in the mirror, Cheeks!

And Shivani Bua getting married... and Sai Virat are Aai Baba!!! ❤️

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Beautiful... very nice...

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Loved it ❤️ I liked the shopkeeper character. Poem is as usual awesome. The omg moment while reading the story was when Sai called him 'virat sir' 😂 It reminded me 'Old habits die hard' 😃

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You always touch my heart Cheeku❤️

This was really very endearing. How lovely you put forth a general thing, but the way it was handled was just so beautiful.

Even I had gained weight past two years due to health issues, and I used to feel so bad that I was bloating but no one was there to pacify apart from my parents 🥺

So, i felt so connected to this OS, and this brought a huge smile on my face at the end.

Really amazing❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivpri

Loved it ❤️ I liked the shopkeeper character. Poem is as usual awesome. The omg moment while reading the story was when Sai called him 'virat sir' 😂 It reminded me 'Old habits die hard' 😃

Thankyou❤️

Exactly😆

There are times when even long lost habits come back😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Not exactly a poem. But still tagging you😆


I am glad you tagged me. I like reading OS too. I am not good with only long stories - both reading and writing

One quick question - How to do this member only post?

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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

You always touch my heart Cheeku❤️

This was really very endearing. How lovely you put forth a general thing, but the way it was handled was just so beautiful.

Even I had gained weight past two years due to health issues, and I used to feel so bad that I was bloating but no one was there to pacify apart from my parents 🥺

So, i felt so connected to this OS, and this brought a huge smile on my face at the end.

Really amazing❤️

Thankyou so much Shristhi.

I'm really sorry you weren't through this Shristhi. I'm happy that it made you smile🤗

I can understand you very well. But my problem have been a little bit different. I used to be skinny. And nothing ever looked good on me. Now that I'm not skinny that much, my tummy sticks out😆

Feels like rarely anything looks good on me. I really don't like changing rooms. That is the time, when I'm fully vulnerable. I cannot run anywhere, nor can I cry. I'm left alone with my insecurities in that time, with mirrors slapping me and mocking me. At that time, I am reminded of all the people who ever told me or implied that I'm ugly. And I unintentionally tell myself that they are right. They've always been right. So I kind of felt that and poured my heart into it.

But yeah, sometimes when I happen to come across anything that suits me at all, I become very happy😆 I'm so fickle🤣

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