Riansh os- A new beginning.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey guys, this is a request and i have not included the black mamba, sara fiasco in this. Only Vyom, black box and the room which Vansh always visited.


Vansh was standing in the balcony of their new house, in Siliguri. He had decided to move away from his family. He doesn't want his own child to live in fear of his family, and though he had not given up on the mafia business since it won't be easy to leave it. He will make sure to be always careful, and push his luck like he used to before.


A pair of soft hands encircled his waist, and he felt Riddhima giving him a kiss on his back, after days she looked so peaceful and without any stress,

R- What are you thinking?

V- Nothing much, waise Riddhima i hope you are not angry that i didn't leave my mafia business.

R- Vansh, i would ask you to leave your business just for me. I was just scared and all i want you is to be careful, when you go to do your deals. I know ki once your a part of Mafia world you cannot leave easily. But i just want ki whatever you do you always keep us in your mind and do it.

V- I promise i will always do that. Now come on go back to sleep, yeh pura hafta you have just been running around here and there.

R- Waise, Sia ne hotel bulya hain hume. Tumhara birthday hain aaj.

V- Ugh, Riddhima why...i don't like celebrating my birthday.

R- Aare but i like na and baby ko celebrate karna hain uske papa ka birthday so no if and buts okay.

V- Okay fine. Tum jeet gayi, and i lost. Happy.

R- Very.


Riddhima kept her head on his chest and entwined her legs with Vansh and slept peacefully, since there would be no one to disturb them, Vansh on the other hand was still lost in everything that had happened in the past few days.


Flashback


The week around his birthday was always painful, he would always lash out on others, he had just found out Vyom was in his hotel and he had been instigating Riddhima. Surprisingly she hadn't asked him anything yet, but he knows she will she was waiting for him in the room,

R- Aacha hua tum aa gaye, aacha batao na tumhe kaise birthday party chaiye.

V- Riddhima i don't celebrate my birthday.

R- Par Kyun.

V- Riddhima, tumhe har baar sab kyun pata karna hota hain. Kabhi toh apni jassosi chod do😡😡

R- Okay, please calm down. I won't ask you anything.


Suddenly the alarm system in the hotel started blaring, Angre called Vansh and told them someone was trying to steal something from the locked room, Vansh ran and found Dadi with the black box,

V- Dadi, yeh aap kya kar rahi hain?

D- Vansh i am sorry i need this box.

Vy- Yeh mere liye black box chura rahi hain. You wanna know why because i killed your father. And she was the one who ordered the hit.

V- What.? Dadi yeh saach hain?

D- Nahi, uss din i was very angry. I didn't want Ajay to do that deal but he still went away, gusse mein aa kar i told Vyom to kill him, and when i tried to stop him he didn't listen.

D- He had been blackmailing me and Riddhima for this box because it had the voice recording of the me saying that he should kill Ajay. And also give him secrets of our business.

Suddenly Riddhima turned him around and slapped him, Angre was standing next to her, with a gun pointed at him,

Vy- Aaj kal bahut jayada haath pair chal rahe hain tumhare.

R- Chup, ek dum chup. Tumne mera Vansh ko murderer bola tha na. But the truth is tumhari biwi aur beti aaj bhi zinda. She left you because she didn't want to be related to man who was in mafia.

Vy- Jhoot. Riddhima showed him pictures of his wife and little girl, happily enjoying their life. In his anger he tried to hit Riddhima, but Angre shot him.

V- Riddhima!! are you okay.?

R- I am fine.

D- Vansh?

V- Dadi, i don't want to talk to you right now, please apne room mein ja kar rest karo. Angre destroy this box and it's contents.


Vansh took Riddhima to the locked room, now there was no need to hide anything from her. Riddhima was awe the room was beautiful, it was filled with antiques yet it looked classy, Vansh stood near a baby stroller,

R- Yeh room kiska hain Vansh?

V- Mere Dad ka.

R- It is so beautiful, yeh baby stroller kiska hain.

V- Mera. Whenever i feel like i am missing dad toh i come and stay here for a while. Not being able to control himself any longer he went outside.

V- Aaj tak mene apne birthday islye nahi manaya kyunki i felt guilty. Ki meri wajah dad ki death hui.Because i was going to do the deal instead of him.

R- But now you can be happy, knowing the truth behind your father's death.

V- Nahi Riddhima, ab toh takleef aur jayada hain. Kyunki someone from my own family, ek ma ne apne beta ko marna ka plan banaya.


Tried and dejected, he went back to his room and feel asleep as soon as he laid down, Riddhima felt sad too because he had to endure so much guilt and sadness, betrayal in life, she wished she could help him somehow.


The next day, Vansh looked bit different and more serious, he had called the family meeting, but Dadi was missing they went to her room to call her but found her dead, with an overdose of sleeping pills, Riddhima was scared that Vansh would lose it but surprisingly he was deadly calm.


After some time everyone came to the lobby, even Riddhima was confused at what was happening,

V- Today, i have called you here to say that i am dividing the property. 50 percent Angre ka hain and baki sab Ishani, Sia and Chachi and Aryan mein equally distribute ho jayega.

An- But boss..

V- Nahi Angre, i am tired hamesha iss family ke baare mein socha and isse protect kiya hain. Aaj mein apne baare mein sochna chahta hun.

V- I hope tumhe bura nahi lagaga ki ab hum baade se mansion mein nahi rehne wale.

R - Nahi Vansh, mere liye tum aur humara baby important hain. I can stay wherever you want me to stay.


Present


He smiled when he felt, Riddhima hugging him tightly, for the first time in his life he felt at peace, he was looking forward to new chapter in his life. There were so many things to look forward to, starting his business again from scratch, arrival of new member in their family.


Slowly he too drifted into a peaceful sleep, knowing how much ruckus his little sister would create for his birthday party, he will be forever grateful for Riddhima, for teaching him how to live again.


Ps- Hope you like it @ Wandererh342. And hope you guys like it too. Please do comment.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing Raveena loved it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey guys, this is a request and i have not included the black mamba, sara fiasco in this. Only Vyom, black box and the room which Vansh always visited.


Vansh was standing in the balcony of their new house, in Siliguri. He had decided to move away from his family. He doesn't want his own child to live in fear of his family, and though he had not given up on the mafia business since it won't be easy to leave it. He will make sure to be always careful, and push his luck like he used to before.


A pair of soft hands encircled his waist, and he felt Riddhima giving him a kiss on his back, after days she looked so peaceful and without any stress,

R- What are you thinking?

V- Nothing much, waise Riddhima i hope you are not angry that i didn't leave my mafia business.

R- Vansh, i would ask you to leave your business just for me. I was just scared and all i want you is to be careful, when you go to do your deals. I know ki once your a part of Mafia world you cannot leave easily. But i just want ki whatever you do you always keep us in your mind and do it.

V- I promise i will always do that. Now come on go back to sleep, yeh pura hafta you have just been running around here and there.

R- Waise, Sia ne hotel bulya hain hume. Tumhara birthday hain aaj.

V- Ugh, Riddhima why...i don't like celebrating my birthday.

R- Aare but i like na and baby ko celebrate karna hain uske papa ka birthday so no if and buts okay.

V- Okay fine. Tum jeet gayi, and i lost. Happy.

R- Very.


Riddhima kept her head on his chest and entwined her legs with Vansh and slept peacefully, since there would be no one to disturb them, Vansh on the other hand was still lost in everything that had happened in the past few days.


Flashback


The week around his birthday was always painful, he would always lash out on others, he had just found out Vyom was in his hotel and he had been instigating Riddhima. Surprisingly she hadn't asked him anything yet, but he knows she will she was waiting for him in the room,

R- Aacha hua tum aa gaye, aacha batao na tumhe kaise birthday party chaiye.

V- Riddhima i don't celebrate my birthday.

R- Par Kyun.

V- Riddhima, tumhe har baar sab kyun pata karna hota hain. Kabhi toh apni jassosi chod do😡😡

R- Okay, please calm down. I won't ask you anything.


Suddenly the alarm system in the hotel started blaring, Angre called Vansh and told them someone was trying to steal something from the locked room, Vansh ran and found Dadi with the black box,

V- Dadi, yeh aap kya kar rahi hain?

D- Vansh i am sorry i need this box.

Vy- Yeh mere liye black box chura rahi hain. You wanna know why because i killed your father. And she was the one who ordered the hit.

V- What.? Dadi yeh saach hain?

D- Nahi, uss din i was very angry. I didn't want Ajay to do that deal but he still went away, gusse mein aa kar i told Vyom to kill him, and when i tried to stop him he didn't listen.

D- He had been blackmailing me and Riddhima for this box because it had the voice recording of the me saying that he should kill Ajay. And also give him secrets of our business.

Suddenly Riddhima turned him around and slapped him, Angre was standing next to her, with a gun pointed at him,

Vy- Aaj kal bahut jayada haath pair chal rahe hain tumhare.

R- Chup, ek dum chup. Tumne mera Vansh ko murderer bola tha na. But the truth is tumhari biwi aur beti aaj bhi zinda. She left you because she didn't want to be related to man who was in mafia.

Vy- Jhoot. Riddhima showed him pictures of his wife and little girl, happily enjoying their life. In his anger he tried to hit Riddhima, but Angre shot him.

V- Riddhima!! are you okay.?

R- I am fine.

D- Vansh?

V- Dadi, i don't want to talk to you right now, please apne room mein ja kar rest karo. Angre destroy this box and it's contents.


Vansh took Riddhima to the locked room, now there was no need to hide anything from her. Riddhima was awe the room was beautiful, it was filled with antiques yet it looked classy, Vansh stood near a baby stroller,

R- Yeh room kiska hain Vansh?

V- Mere Dad ka.

R- It is so beautiful, yeh baby stroller kiska hain.

V- Mera. Whenever i feel like i am missing dad toh i come and stay here for a while. Not being able to control himself any longer he went outside.

V- Aaj tak mene apne birthday islye nahi manaya kyunki i felt guilty. Ki meri wajah dad ki death hui.Because i was going to do the deal instead of him.

R- But now you can be happy, knowing the truth behind your father's death.

V- Nahi Riddhima, ab toh takleef aur jayada hain. Kyunki someone from my own family, ek ma ne apne beta ko marna ka plan banaya.


Tried and dejected, he went back to his room and feel asleep as soon as he laid down, Riddhima felt sad too because he had to endure so much guilt and sadness, betrayal in life, she wished she could help him somehow.


The next day, Vansh looked bit different and more serious, he had called the family meeting, but Dadi was missing they went to her room to call her but found her dead, with an overdose of sleeping pills, Riddhima was scared that Vansh would lose it but surprisingly he was deadly calm.


After some time everyone came to the lobby, even Riddhima was confused at what was happening,

V- Today, i have called you here to say that i am dividing the property. 50 percent Angre ka hain and baki sab Ishani, Sia and Chachi and Aryan mein equally distribute ho jayega.

An- But boss..

V- Nahi Angre, i am tired hamesha iss family ke baare mein socha and isse protect kiya hain. Aaj mein apne baare mein sochna chahta hun.

V- I hope tumhe bura nahi lagaga ki ab hum baade se mansion mein nahi rehne wale.

R - Nahi Vansh, mere liye tum aur humara baby important hain. I can stay wherever you want me to stay.


Present


He smiled when he felt, Riddhima hugging him tightly, for the first time in his life he felt at peace, he was looking forward to new chapter in his life. There were so many things to look forward to, starting his business again from scratch, arrival of new member in their family.


Slowly he too drifted into a peaceful sleep, knowing how much ruckus his little sister would create for his birthday party, he will be forever grateful for Riddhima, for teaching him how to live again.


Ps- Hope you like it @ Wandererh342. And hope you guys like it too. Please do comment.

Thank You... It was too good... 💗💗💗💗 Leaving mafia overnight can happen in a fairytale not in a thriller... The writer was Too dumb..

I was really disappointed with the abrupt ending which had only loopholes... They suppressed VR character to be a coward... Running away for his wife and unborn baby... They infact ruined his personality... Thanks for making a point that he is still a mafia... They should have given such a climax... What else can we expect from such a lame writer.... Shashu and his illogical theories...

Thanks for considering my request 😊😊😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: wandererh342

Thank You... It was too good... 💗💗💗💗 Leaving mafia overnight can happen in a fairytale not in a thriller... The writer was Too dumb..

I was really disappointed with the abrupt ending which had only loopholes... They suppressed VR character to be a coward... Running away for his wife and unborn baby... They infact ruined his personality... Thanks for making a point that he is still a mafia... They should have given such a climax... What else can we expect from such a lame writer.... Shashu and his illogical theories...

Thanks for considering my request 😊😊😊


Not a problem, even in real life you will be killed if you want to leave a gang because you would become a liability, he worked so hard to become VR they should have kept him strong till the end.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raveena0605


Not a problem, even in real life you will be killed if you want to leave a gang because you would become a liability, he worked so hard to become VR they should have kept him strong till the end.

True.... Hope they make the next season with the same leads and a sensible plot...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing one shot 👏🏻

More realistic than show's ending...... it's obvious that one can never leave Mafia alive. And moreover that's not the character of VR.

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