ShaKhi TS Mareez-e-Ishq | Last part - Pg 04 | Apr 23 | - Page 4

Fabulous, good job, would wait eagerly in near future to read more stuff from you, waiting eagerly dear

Superb update

Finally the truth is out

I am glad anokhi is there to take care of shaurya

Emotional update!😭

Beautifully written!❤️

Wow 👏

Beautifully written. I believe at some point in the show as well Shaurya will go thru all these feelings when he will see Devi’s true colors. Today's episode showed a glimpse of things to come.

Looking forward to many such stories from you.

Keep it up. You are too good.

The only problem is that there are some grammatical mistakes which I find a bit distracting. Also your Hindi dialogues are sometimes unclear, I had to read the English translation to understand what you were saying. But otherwise your stories and the way you portray it is wonderful.

Maybe you can have someone proof read them before you post them. I'd be happy to do it for you if you'd like.

Hope you will not feel bad with my feedback🤞

Lots of Love Preet ♥️

This was such an emotional TS. You described both of their povs gracefully. And Sabherwals: phew! I already knew they saw him as a charity case. My doubts just got stronger when Shaurya saved Anokhi from rustication and Tej reprimanded him afterwards

He still doesn't know that Aastha was forced to leave Shaan and him. I will imagine he learns it sooner or later. Shastha and Shakhi can make a happy family

wow you potrayed shaurya pain so beautifully and realistically

uff i love these two too much