"You Are My Hell" part 4 (Final) page 15 - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

153

Views

8.9k

Users

15

Likes

237

Frequent Posters

Shristhi2002 thumbnail
Sparkler Thumbnail 5th Anniversary Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Ruby was a joke😆

Option 3: Forum Nikala😆

Bye 👋😆

Na na, we need you in forum

Try my zeher, chipkali special 🤣

Asur thumbnail
Monsoon Magic MF Contest Participant Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Na na, we need you in forum

Try my zeher, chipkali special 🤣

Chipkali

Yuck🤣

I'm okay with electric shock then🤣

fatssrilanka thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

Although I wasn't happy with the ending, but still loved it, since it was different from your other stories. Would have been happy if Virat had reached before Sai's death.

Asur thumbnail
Monsoon Magic MF Contest Participant Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Although I wasn't happy with the ending, but still loved it, since it was different from your other stories. Would have been happy if Virat had reached before Sai's death.

Thankyou❤️

But

Did it really come out like she was dead😳

Omg. I guess everyone would've thought she died. Deepika thought the same and you too😆

She didn't die. He was just torturing her.

But I guess, her death makes up for a better ending 🤔

AnjuRish thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

It's true har Galti ki maafi Nahi Hoti ...this is something I advocate personally

It's a diff take and quite a interesting one

Sometimes we get a chance to learn from our mistakes sometimes from others mistakes

Life has to go on

1205956 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

I'll be honest😆

I didn't like the story itself matlab Sai EMA I can't imagine, never, but ignoring that I'm a big thriller fan and you're writing omg is fab yaar!!!!! Where do u get so much creativity from! Despite not liking the idea, I loved reading it, idk how to explain (I think if it weren't our original Sai nd Virat I'd have loved this with my whole heart but because of my emotional attachment with them there was some reluctance to enjoy it to the fullest depsite it being sooooo wonderful written) but especially the last chapter!!!!! I really loved the ending, smth different 😆

Edited by KJSairat - 4 years ago
Saichintalli thumbnail
Rocker Thumbnail 5th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Sorry😒

But kya karun? Main ek hi type ki stories se bore ho jati hu😳

Mujhe kuch different chahiye hota hai.

Isliye kuch different kar diya.

are you serious cheeku, even virat smirked with satisfaction... Yeh aap ne Kya Kiya..yara.😭😭even my heart shattered into million pieces😭 ... I am ok if virat don't forgive her for cheating and sairat separation but plz don't make virat get satisfaction from sai pain... Sad ending chelega but plz make virat save her then sairat separated...plz plz... I can't see this ending😭😭
Saichintalli thumbnail
Rocker Thumbnail 5th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Chipkali

Yuck🤣

I'm okay with electric shock then🤣

I have better idea , tie cheeku hands and cheeku to chair and play all Didi scenes with full volume
Wildreaper thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

Read all the parts in a go

I am staggered

Absolutely speechless

😧😧😧😧😧

Asur thumbnail
Monsoon Magic MF Contest Participant Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

It's true har Galti ki maafi Nahi Hoti ...this is something I advocate personally

It's a diff take and quite a interesting one

Sometimes we get a chance to learn from our mistakes sometimes from others mistakes

Life has to go on

Yes. That's so true.

And it's a different take because I didn't think of them as Sai and Virat and different characters😆

Bold: sometimes, all learning comes to naught and nothing is in our hands, except our reactions.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".