RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 73

Poignant, beautiful, emotional and heart wrenching at the same time! ❤️

Loved the way you portrayed how Pallavi was satisfied that she was dying as a married woman to the person who loved her to no extent and made her the bane of his existence.

Pallavi thanking Bappa for saving Raghav and Raghav begging Bappa to save Pallavi was what stole my heart. It describes that how irony their lives are. Both of them want their "life" to be saved.😭

Truly an amazing choice of words.👏

Now comes the theory.😎

So Pallavi envisioned Raghav in her hallucination and knew that he was going to fall into an endless spiral of guilt, so she shouted and stood up minutes after the operation and started advancing towards her "life", only to find him trading his life for his "life". She becomes disheartened ; loosing her will to live and gives up. 😭

Raghav wakes up from his nightmare and hugs P (Patient 19) and the lack of hug from her side makes him think that it is his hallucination (which is not) ; and when A informs the death of the patient, he assumes that it's Pallavi and leaves the hospital at once.

But then, who is Patient 19? What does A mean? He isn't the doctor for sure. She says that she doesn't know what she was doing there but knew Raghav's name. And who was the person that died before Pallavi was operated?

Please don't tell me that this is the last chapter and there is an epilogue coming next.😵

Originally posted by: Joyness

Beautiful....thanks for giving Pallavi's poignant love...heartwrenching emotions...you wrote it so well...l just loved it. Not Going to theorize anything just feel the emotions..

Thnx.. I thought it didn't came up good.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Poignant, beautiful, emotional and heart wrenching at the same time! ❤️

Loved the way you portrayed how Pallavi was satisfied that she was dying as a married woman to the person who loved her to no extent and made her the bane of his existence.

Pallavi thanking Bappa for saving Raghav and Raghav begging Bappa to save Pallavi was what stole my heart. It describes that how irony their lives are. Both of them want their "life" to be saved.😭

Truly an amazing choice of words.👏

Now comes the theory.😎

So Pallavi envisioned Raghav in her hallucination and knew that he was going to fall into an endless spiral of guilt, so she shouted and stood up minutes after the operation and started advancing towards her "life", only to find him trading his life for his "life". She becomes disheartened ; loosing her will to live and gives up. 😭

Raghav wakes up from his nightmare and hugs P (Patient 19) and the lack of hug from her side makes him think that it is his hallucination (which is not) ; and when A informs the death of the patient, he assumes that it's Pallavi and leaves the hospital at once.

But then, who is Patient 19? What does A mean? He isn't the doctor for sure. She says that she doesn't know what she was doing there but knew Raghav's name. And who was the person that died before Pallavi was operated?

Please don't tell me that this is the last chapter and there is an epilogue coming next.😵

Thnx.... although I wasnt that satisfied with the chapter.

A is attendant. And Patient 19 is pallavi.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx.... although I wasnt that satisfied with the chapter.

A is attendant. And Patient 19 is pallavi.

Originally posted by: Trista101

What😲! If patient 19 is Pallavi then why doesn't she know what she was doing there when it was clearly mentioned that she woke up and heard all the things Raghav confessed to Bappa?😵

Not sure if it was a bad writing... but try a read again cuz i cant explain that. it will defeat the whole purpose.

Beautiful piece of writing.❤️. The way both Raghav and Pallavi wanted each other's life at the stake of their own it was very emotional. 😭

Please don't say this is the last chapter🥺

I am so confused at the end , need to read a couple of more times. But your work is really amazing👏.

Loved the fact you gave us Pallavi's POV to clear the confusion about her existence. The way you portrayed Pallavi's emotions and thoughts were heart touching. Every single word you wrote down have the ability to pierce the reader's heart. That's a quality many writers lack. You are a fantastic writer and you proved it again here.

The importance of Pallavi and Raghav in each other's life was clearly shown through Raghav's plea to Bappa and Pallavi's monologue hearing it. The fact that they were ready to sacrifice everything including their life to make other person made it more painful.

"Let our love live but in her.”

“We weren’t able to get the bullet.”

“Save her and take me.”

"You have a ticking bomb in your heart.”

“I will go so far that even if I want, I won’t be able to harm her.”

“We don’t know which second will be your last.”

This was my favourite part of this chapter. The way you connected two contrasting conversation was amazing.

P.S. Is this the last part ??

Originally posted by: Wallflowers

Beautiful piece of writing.❤️. The way both Raghav and Pallavi wanted each other's life at the stake of their own it was very emotional. 😭

Please don't say this is the last chapter🥺

I am so confused at the end , need to read a couple of more times. But your work is really amazing👏.

Thnx... Chapters ended. Epilogue left.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Loved the fact you gave us Pallavi's POV to clear the confusion about her existence. The way you portrayed Pallavi's emotions and thoughts were heart touching. Every single word you wrote down have the ability to pierce the reader's heart. That's a quality many writers lack. You are a fantastic writer and you proved it again here.

The importance of Pallavi and Raghav in each other's life was clearly shown through Raghav's plea to Bappa and Pallavi's monologue hearing it. The fact that they were ready to sacrifice everything including their life to make other person made it more painful.

"Let our love live but in her.”

“We weren’t able to get the bullet.”

“Save her and take me.”

"You have a ticking bomb in your heart.”

“I will go so far that even if I want, I won’t be able to harm her.”

“We don’t know which second will be your last.”

This was my favourite part of this chapter. The way you connected two contrasting conversation was amazing.

P.S. Is this the last part ??

Thnx... I liked that contrast too. Seemed to flow really well. Epilogue is left. No more chapters.

I am 😳 right now. Just one question- who's A