SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July

BEAUTIFUL!!! Loved it. Especially the parts that you added to the scene that was on the show.

Beautiful 😍. You don’t believe if I say I had a similar idea for OS around these missions on how their relationship will mature over time and how they take these inevItable absences caused by their jobs. And the final separation I planned is just before virat retires as IG of Mumbai at 62 years 😃.

I am glad you have started to write it! I am looking forward to other chapters. The first one is brilliant 👍

Oh wow!!

I look forward to reading yours too! Itna lamba nahi socha hai maine... just 10 years maximum! 😆

And Sai's job related SS likh liya tha, showing how supportive our IPS Chavan is 😳

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Oh wow!!

I look forward to reading yours too! Itna lamba nahi socha hai maine... just 10 years maximum! 😆

And Sai's job related SS likh liya tha, showing how supportive our IPS Chavan is 😳

Yeah I concentrated mostly on the final separation before he retires and Sai’s reflection on her man! They had only daughter who becomes an IPS officer too 🤭 It didn’t turn out very well though so abandoned it.

Awwle!! So beautiful, loved it❤️

Superb... beautiful... ❤

Good read what might have happened before he left for missions

Excited to read further...

Beautiful 😍❤️. Sai's fear regarding Virat's wellbeing knowing about the extra risks involved is being addressed properly. Happy to see d extension of the show's scenes after dat hug ❤️. Excited for the next updates 😊

Beautiful as always Appu.

Once again you brought those moments alive in front of my eyes through your words. I still don't know how you do that. Maybe you have some hidden magical powers😆

So realistic and so heartwarming. Pata hai. When I read your stories na, it feels like Slices of Life. Zindagi ke chhote chhote tukde prism ki tarah. Aur wo prism charon taraf rang birangi roshni bikherta hua lagta hai. Unnatural, artificial light nahi, jaise dhoop ke andar se uski khoobsurati nikaal kar dikha di ho. Indradhanush ki tarah. Theek waise hi. You do have some magical powers❤️

Beautiful chapter 🥰🥰

“Aise kaise? Aapki biwi ke hote hue aap kyu karenge?”

Just loved how Sai claimed her right as his wife here 😘😘

You very beautifully described the concern Sairat have for each other 🤗🤗