MG:FF- LOVE..REVENGE.......REGRET!!! Part 5 PG 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Wonderful update dear

I think maan cheated the girl lil sister

And now feeling guilty

Is she geet Or someone else

Watting for update dear

Pls update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Y maan in guilty and whom maan loved and left

Girl praying fr her little sister is this is same girl whom maan is missing and having tear fr her

Annie saw him putting box in cupboard and want to know the reason

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

thanks for the pm and update

hope you are well


Part 2

splendid update... brilliantly written

what was Maan searching for?

of cos Annie was shocked seeing Maan smiling

was Maan thinking about Geet?

but from the character sketch Maan and Sameera are together

how did Maan and Geet meet?

adore the past moments

seems like he did not love Geet

he realises now....

eager to know his past

well Maan did not forget Annie's bday

wonderful moments between them

liked how he assures her

I think that the girl doing prayers is Naintara

the baba tells her she cannot save Geet from what is meant to happen

Naintara is determined to save her

did Maan hurt Geet?

where is Geet now?

Maan kisses the pendant and says sorry and is in tears

Annie's curiosity is understandable

she wants to know who changed Maan

hope she finds Geet

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Intriguing precap

please update asap

thanks

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Part 2


Curious Update


There has been a girl with Maan that spoke about love

as if she was in love with Maan and also felt that he too loved her

but seems like he had no feelings of love

than there is a girl probably the elder sister praying for the safety of her younger sister

are the girls Sameera and Geet ?

and who is the person that Maan holds a pendent and he also kissed it

as if he misses that person and loves that person

I'm so confused

Annie's birthday is the same day of her parents death anniversary

however Maan showed her some affection but now she wants to find out

what happened to him and what is he hiding

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

hi....hope you are well?

will you be posting Part 3?

thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Thank you everyone for ur likes and lovly comments.

Hope i will get same response of my ff because it motivated me to write.


Hope i get more good response in my this part .

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Part 3




Some where in London


In a tall building.., a tall ,fair, n handsome man with lil bread in his face standing in front of a big window of his room with his hand in pocket.


He look outside till his eyes reach.Now ur count down start Mr. Khurana . He said clenching his fist.


He went outside n stand near a wall where a big potrate of his family, where the whole family smiling with full heart. Seeing the potrate ,He lost in his thought to destroy his unknown enemy . He don't know much about him but he know one thing ,he have to snatch his happiness , his most loveable thing.


The way he snatch his family happiness , smile on there face.


Sir dinner is ready a servant come to call him for dinner


Hmm.. is dad come he ask his maid .


Yes sir.. servant rply looking his boss


N gudia... he ask with a smile looking a pic of a girl with a bright smile.


No sir... he look at his maid with big eyes . Maid look down n slowly mumble she is not opening her room door sir.


He rub his temple n left toward gudia’s room followed my maid


He knock the door


Man: Gudia open the door bacha he said lovingly


He try two three time but gudia is not ready to open the door


No… I will not I’m angry with u n yes I will not eat... a girl said twisting his nose in side the room


Hmmm…. Ok then I will delete ur angry bird pic he said naughty but some where he is angry.


Angry because the sole person who destroy their happiness is the sole reason for his gudia happiness.


The girl eyes become wide hearing man’s word she instantly open her room door


The man was shock seeing her room condition


What is this all.. gudia.?? “Did u hurt urself??” He ask her in consult n start checking her hand n leg


No.. she push him lil n sit on bed angrily folding his hand near her chest.


N don’t talk to me I’m dame angry on u she said looking other side rather then him


Ohh.. can I know y my gudia is so angry that she broke every things in her room he ask her taking his sit beside the girl.


U promise me u will give me angry bird. But u forgot ur promise she said with big tear in her eyes.


Yes Baba I will give u ur angry bird just give me some time na bacha he said softly making her understand but his gudia is not ready to listen him she just snatch his mobile from his hand n throw it


U lier I now u r lying…she hit his chest with her soft hand he hold his both hand n try to cool her down but she is going out of control again she start throwing everything whatever she get in her hand .. I want my angry bird…she said throwing flower vase


It’s is hard for him to control her


Rosy….rosy… he shouted for his maid which come there without waisting any time


Omg…she said in shock looking girl room… what happen to gudia sir she ask in concern looking girl who is becoming wild


The man’s dad come running hearing his son loud voice


Gudia...!!! he run toward the girl n ask his son “what happen to her??”

Now what u did to her that she is again going wild his dad ask the man with blood shouted eyes..


I want angry bird the girl said try to get out from man n his dad grip


Man’s dad look at his son angrily


Rosy.. give me a injection a man ask his maid helplessly he has no other option to inject her


The girl calm down n slowly her eyes dropping


The man took her n make her sleep on bed . Both man sit beside the girl n one is creasing her head n other was looking his both kids with painful eyes..



In Delhi


A girl came out from the airport. She look breath taking in her black knees length skirt with a white tank top. Everyone is drooling looking her beauty.


She took a deep breath n smrik I'm coming Mr. Khurana...


The game will start again where u left it a girl said between her teeth and making a fist in his hand


She close her eyes tightly remembering each and everything.




Precap: who is the girl in airport..??



Sorry for the mistake do like n comments


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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

It was a sad part, why is Geet behaving like that, has she lost her mental balance??

I think it's Sameera, who is here to take revenge.

Waiting for past to unveil, please do continue.

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