Need better dialogues! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nja91

I mean i think Sairat is still very much watchable n amazing. They make the nok jhok scenes so real and fantastic. They look like a real married couple. But its just frustrating when such good opportunities are not capitalized on by poor writing. It was a good length scene of Sairat alone with no interruptions but they didn't milk the potential, maximize the opportunity like they did with the past few scenes of Sairat. Humne tareef kya kardi, they are back to screwing up from dialogue standpoint again.

They are high headed and honestly they dont really care about anything, till they get a check through TRPs.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

Kya effort daalna hai usko, ye apan ko samajh nahi aata waise...

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Sai Ka ek dialogue viru ke samne hi Bola tha..... Bande Ka dhyaan Nahi tha.... "Taalu dono haat se Banti hai ... Aisa toh Nahi hai ki Aapne yeh rishta sudharne ki koshish ki ho"

Chakrams treat her horrible just for their fun and for Patraleka..... She is not even treated like a human... Let alone bahu... Then sai or anyone will not have the urge to get better equation with them and any further attempt will look suspesious.

At times, I feel some one should remind them that virat is alive cos of KJ and that respect needs to be passed on to sai. That was the primary reason for her also to be stuck up with the chavans/ chakrams.

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

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Sai Ka ek dialogue viru ke samne hi Bola tha..... Bande Ka dhyaan Nahi tha.... "Taalu dono haat se Banti hai ... Aisa toh Nahi hai ki Aapne yeh rishta sudharne ki koshish ki ho"

Chakrams treat her horrible just for their fun and for Patraleka..... She is not even treated like a human... Let alone bahu... Then sai or anyone will not have the urge to get better equation with them and any further attempt will look suspesious.

At times, I feel some one should remind them that virat is alive cos of KJ and that respect needs to be passed on to sai. That was the primary reason for her also to be stuck up with the chavans/ chakrams.

Well Sai is also being too mahaan by wanting them to attend the function...Virat wallows in self pity..Sai wallows in mahaaniyat.. The only good thing is Chavhan family gets intimidated by Sai..

Actually fans are loosing interest because of blind copy pasting which doesn't go with both characters. Today episode is the proof of their sLazy writing .Neil saved it. It was supposed to be comical but it turned out a jigsaw puzzle.

Tomorrow Sai is going to take a stupidest act to make c gang attend the fest. It looks completely unnecessary.

Mahaan word seems too heavy. But i guess she is shown to be too "understanding", "forgiving" and "pure hearted". Because despite how they treat her she keeps trying to move past it, get them to accept her. If it was anyone in Sais shoes they'd be like bhaad mein jao tum sabb and just stuck to minding her own business. But i guess because she really does think of herself as Virats wife they show her making SO much effort to let things go and care too much about CN peeps. At least she still talks to them with sarcasm, swag n attitude and hasnt changed her attitude just to get them to like her. Small mercies.

When a husband and wife are arguing and fighting,there won’t be any flow or connection or order in which they continue their fight. They start with one thing they move on to another and again come back but will jump to a new issue without getting any conclusion for the previous ones. This is the normal way in which couple fights happen. Today’s fight or argument also is conceived keeping in mind the natural way of fighting that couples do on every day basis.

The post Ladak fight is poignant,intense and developed methodically because it mainly dealt with the way the EX lover bullied the wife and the husband has no explanation to give or rather wanted to avoid for timebeing. It was the best of all the confrontation scenes of Sairat.

Today’s fight in comparison not that serious and it touched many issues in a random way without giving any conclusion to them. So this one is more normal and cute that need not be escalated to a higher level.

Writers did the best by showing it that way and I have no problem with it. And not always the best lines can be spoken in heated arguments. Sometimes the couple tend to talk rubbish and then slip of tongue is inevitable in such instances. Virat did the same by saying jab tak tum and he immediately realised also.

Sairat excel in confrontations and they did the same today.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

Well Sai is also being too mahaan by wanting them to attend the function...Virat wallows in self pity..Sai wallows in mahaaniyat.. The only good thing is Chavhan family gets intimidated by Sai..

True...... I had mentioned the same this on another thread..... Sai KO mahan banaya Gaya hai.... 19 year old teen will actually be more Interested in self rather than chakrams.

And ACP, knowing his family should have prepared them better for the bahu instead of the focus of clearing up vaada jaap with his vahini...

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

When a husband and wife are arguing and fighting,there won’t be any flow or connection or order in which they continue their fight. They start with one thing they move on to another and again come back but will jump to a new issue without getting any conclusion for the previous ones. This is the normal way in which couple fights happen. Today’s fight or argument also is conceived keeping in mind the natural way of fighting that couples do on every day basis.

The post Ladak fight is poignant,intense and developed methodically because it mainly dealt with the way the EX lover bullied the wife and the husband has no explanation to give or rather wanted to avoid for timebeing. It was the best of all the confrontation scenes of Sairat.

Today’s fight in comparison not that serious and it touched many issues in a random way without giving any conclusion to them. So this one is more normal and cute that need not be escalated to a higher level.

Writers did the best by showing it that way and I have no problem with it. And not always the best lines can be spoken in heated arguments. Sometimes the couple tend to talk rubbish and then slip of tongue is inevitable in such instances. Virat did the same by saying jab tak tum and he immediately realised also.

Sairat excel in confrontations and they did the same today.

I dont mind that it was all over the place because like I said in my post it made it realistic. Them walking all over the room also as they were fighting was also a good touch.

So my problem is not the tone/expressions/direction but the dialogues.

the dialogues could have been better. Like pp's mention was kinda random unlike in KD where it made sense. Sais justification also could have been better written. Like saying she expected you to gift her so as your wife, I stepped up to the occasion or maybe that kaku is very important to you and so i thought that you would understand why i felt the need to give her the pendant. And Sai should have asked Virat what mire adjusting/apnapan she can show to this family that absolutely hates her in those words. And it'd been nice to see Sai apologize but still go on to justify herself n fight and Virat do the same. He doesn't seem "apologetic" about how Sai is treated by his family. Instead he is giving gyaan on adjustment and not thinking of them as paraya!

Originally posted by: Nja91

I dont mind that it was all over the place because like I said in my post it made it realistic. Them walking all over the room also as they were fighting was also a good touch.

So my problem is not the tone/expressions/direction but the dialogues.

the dialogues could have been better. Like pp's mention was kinda random unlike in KD where it made sense. Sais justification also could have been better written. Like saying she expected you to gift her so as your wife, I stepped up to the occasion or maybe that kaku is very important to you and so i thought that you would understand why i felt the need to give her the pendant. And Sai should have asked Virat what mire adjusting/apnapan she can show to this family that absolutely hates her in those words. And it'd been nice to see Sai apologize but still go on to justify herself n fight and Virat do the same. He doesn't seem "apologetic" about how Sai is treated by his family. Instead he is giving gyaan on adjustment and not thinking of them as paraya!

Regarding her explanation about pendant like I said in my post sometimes words will flow without much thought or choice. This is one such instance for both as they failed to chose the right words.

I would not have minded if Chavans were old-fashioned people who Sai didn't get along well with. She is an orphan and anyone in her position might have made the same efforts to have a family.

But the daily humiliation she goes through, the way they instigate Virat against her, the sadistic pleasure they felt during her ousting, the sheer criminality of their actions in Devyani's case - how can anyone accept that this insaafpasand, fierce, intelligent girl would compromise with her ideals or her pride? Sai is neither meek nor unintelligent - she understands everyone's character and their ill intentions. How can anyone make sense of her wanting to play family with her abusers?

Only explanation I can think of is that Sai is under severe mental strain - and traumatised to the point of Stocholm syndrome. Which makes me so angry and sad.

Or they are in the process of turning Sai into a typical ITV bahu who forgets every injustice done to her and takes it upon himself to win the hearts of her abusers.