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The most painful part about today's episode was that both of them failed to understand each other...

Originally posted by: SonuRani

Are dialogues are copy past . That dialog suits in Bengali because bengali is different languages if we translate word to word in any other languages it will be very odd it happens with any language.

Why can't they writing own script only plot can copy if they don't have creativity but word to word copy is cheating

Ya the makers are so inconsistent and lazy AF. They are capable of good dialogues, original scenes when they want. But these guys screw up when they just mindlessly translate. Sometimes things are lost in translation. Somedays they add unecessary dialogues just coz they were in original like Sai's promise to give up claim on virat and some days they delete good dialogues. In KD, Sai cuts off Virat when he talks about her adjusting and says but what about their adjustment. Its not only my adjustment. And she clearly states what the CN peeps problem is and reinforces how their actions were deliberate and she was merely respecting/honoring the age/status of his kaku by giving the pendant away. She also points out the difference in how they treat her n pp and says its not like I'm abnormal, so only reason they dont like me is that they wanted someone like pp to be your wife and they will never accept me..But here the dialogues were messed up a bit.

Originally posted by: Nja91

Ya the makers are so inconsistent and lazy AF. They are capable of good dialogues, original scenes when they want. But these guys screw up when they just mindlessly translate. Sometimes things are lost in translation. Somedays they add unecessary dialogues just coz they were in original like Sai's promise to give up claim on virat and some days they delete good dialogues. In KD, Sai cuts off Virat when he talks about her adjusting and says but what about their adjustment. Its not only my adjustment. And she clearly states what the CN peeps problem is and reinforces how their actions were deliberate and she was merely respecting/honoring the age/status of his kaku by giving the pendant away. She also points out the difference in how they treat her n pp and says its not like I'm abnormal, so only reason they dont like me is that they wanted someone like pp to be your wife and they will never accept me..But here the dialogues were messed up a bit.

The dialogues in the original made much more sense. When they need to copy, they don't. I was kinda expecting Sai to say the same thing...but she didn't. Why the hell did they cut this powerful statement?!?! I don't understand their rationale. Unless they want to show, in typical ITV morals, that it is the sole responsibility of the dil to win the hearts of her in-laws, no mater how cruel they are. 😡

Better dialogues! Better scenes! Better progression of the story! Better everything! Virat realized he was in love with Sai months ago. Why has there been no progress to that? When Sai was gone he was adamant that Pakhi steer clear of him and his room. Why is he now not being firm with her, when Sai is here to see it? Why have they still not had a conversation about what Sai may have overheard during Harini’s bd party? Round and round in circles we go, in the crazy Chavan house, where we’ll stop nobody knows. This show had potential, but what has happened to it now is beyond me. They were flying high some time back and now they’ve fallen flat again. What a disappointment. I don’t even feel like better dialogues could help them at this point.

Today i really felt bad for Sai when she mentioned they considered her as bahu . They doesn't behave properly with her bcoz she don't have parents. I don't have family. Sai is really feeling alone in this mad house .

These Ghum makers and CVs take the audience for granted, they hardly put in any effort to polish their work be it editing or dialogues.. it’s sad Sitara is ok with running a show that’s so shoddy! Other shows at the most are well edited and the actors have reasonably decent costumes! This show runs only on the sairat fan following and absolutely nothing else.. I’m quite sure as they progress this show is bound to lose audience and trp it’s just a matter of time..

also even if you are a low budget show I’m sure If u love your work and are grateful the end product will definitely not be so pathetic! Forget the story atleast the execution should be good, it’s a prime time show for heavens sake!

He was upset that she gave away the pendant, simple thing could have been to have confessed his feelings and conveying his hurt rather than trying to beat around the bush.

His insensitive word didn’t go well with Sai. That is why, she became upset and angry. She explained why she gave it away to Kaku, rather than him appreciating her gesture or being happy with what she did, he kept staying upset which didn’t let her to apologise to him. What happens sometimes is that a spouse would want us to understand, Virat wanted her to understand he was hurt, Sai wanted him to understand that she did the right thing and also appreciate her. Appreciation was too far, he called her insensitive and at the end Sai went into her usual Sai Joshi mode.

I think below is what she would be thinking

“Inhe kya lagta hai mujhe woh Pendant pasand nahi aaya, mein nahi rakhna chahthi thi, main nahi jaanthi thi ki woh mere liye itne pyaar se laaye the. Maine toh inki galti sudhari thi. Sab inko suna rahe the galat samajh rahe the, taana maar rahe the. Yeh khud bhool gaye ki Kaku me inse maanga toh aur jab maine sab theek kiya, mujhe tareef karne ki jagah yeh toh mujhe hi suna rahe hain”

That’s all, even if she would wanted to feel bad or apologise to him, she would have kept quiet being hurt and angry.

I can understand Virat too, he was trying his best to convey that he was hurt even though he had initially used the word insensitive. I think that word came out of his mouth since he got irked due to her conversation with her yaar.

I won’t talk about jealousy track now. Even if it sounds ridiculous that he is getting jealous over her talking to a classmate, these are emotions one have no control over. He wants her attention, has feelings for her and his insecurity isn’t helping him.

About Sai bringing up Pakhi, she brought Pakhi up only because she is affected so much with whatever is happening in the house. The family not able to accept her, their double standards, acting partial towards Pakhi is all bothering her a lot. It is not jealousy that family loves Pakhi and not her, it is just that even though she is right and Pakhi is wrong, even though Pakhi starts all the issues, she gets blamed at the end and Pakhi gets all the support.

Virat should have listened to her more seriously. He has neglected her problems yet another time sadly. He said that if you accept them as your family, things will be alright due to his own insecurity. Her saying that she would leave the house is making him think that she is not trying to get attached to the family. Sadly, he is failing to look at her actions. He himself told Pakhi that Sai acted so matured even if she is younger than Pakhi by ensuring she has her food. I guess Virat’s insecurity has what has made him tell that to Sai today. If only he sees her efforts, realises it. Her hurt was so visible today when she started to ask if it is because she has no parents. She is also very clear and true when she said that she is not Patralekha Mohit Patel. She knew from day 1 as how status of a person has been important to Kaku and his family. She is right in thinking why she is not accepted as the bahu of the house. I wish Virat starts to pay more attention to her woes in these matters. Sai is too preoccupied with all the drama that keeps happening in the house that she is not able to think anything else at the moment, like about herself and Virat.

What bothered me the most was Jab tak tum is ghar mein ho. Virat has himself spoilt what they were sharing by making it look to Sai that she isn’t going to be in the house forever. He told that because that is what she thinks or says always but what he spoke has undone many things. Even though Sai said that was the only right thing he said, she got too hurt. Doesn’t make sense even if he is upset to speak that when he was about to confess his feelings and kiss her a few days back. She is already in the “I will leave the house” mode and it is as if him agreeing with her that she isn’t here forever.

Originally posted by: laksh

He was upset that she gave away the pendant, simple thing could have been to have confessed his feelings and conveying his hurt rather than trying to beat around the bush.

His insensitive word didn’t go well with Sai. That is why, she became upset and angry. She explained why she gave it away to Kaku, rather than him appreciating her gesture or being happy with what she did, he kept staying upset which didn’t let her to apologise to him. What happens sometimes is that a spouse would want us to understand, Virat wanted her to understand he was hurt, Sai wanted him to understand that she did the right thing and also appreciate her. Appreciation was too far, he called her insensitive and at the end Sai went into her usual Sai Joshi mode.

I think below is what she would be thinking

“Inhe kya lagta hai mujhe woh Pendant pasand nahi aaya, mein nahi rakhna chahthi thi, main nahi jaanthi thi ki woh mere liye itne pyaar se laaye the. Maine toh inki galti sudhari thi. Sab inko suna rahe the galat samajh rahe the, taana maar rahe the. Yeh khud bhool gaye ki Kaku me inse maanga toh aur jab maine sab theek kiya, mujhe tareef karne ki jagah yeh toh mujhe hi suna rahe hain”

That’s all, even if she would wanted to feel bad or apologise to him, she would have kept quiet being hurt and angry.

I can understand Virat too, he was trying his best to convey that he was hurt even though he had initially used the word insensitive. I think that word came out of his mouth since he got irked due to her conversation with her yaar.

I won’t talk about jealousy track now. Even if it sounds ridiculous that he is getting jealous over her talking to a classmate, these are emotions one have no control over. He wants her attention, has feelings for her and his insecurity isn’t helping him.

About Sai bringing up Pakhi, she brought Pakhi up only because she is affected so much with whatever is happening in the house. The family not able to accept her, their double standards, acting partial towards Pakhi is all bothering her a lot. It is not jealousy that family loves Pakhi and not her, it is just that even though she is right and Pakhi is wrong, even though Pakhi starts all the issues, she gets blamed at the end and Pakhi gets all the support.

Virat should have listened to her more seriously. He has neglected her problems yet another time sadly. He said that if you accept them as your family, things will be alright due to his own insecurity. Her saying that she would leave the house is making him think that she is not trying to get attached to the family. Sadly, he is failing to look at her actions. He himself told Pakhi that Sai acted so matured even if she is younger than Pakhi by ensuring she has her food. I guess Virat’s insecurity has what has made him tell that to Sai today. If only he sees her efforts, realises it. Her hurt was so visible today when she started to ask if it is because she has no parents. She is also very clear and true when she said that she is not Patralekha Mohit Patel. She knew from day 1 as how status of a person has been important to Kaku and his family. She is right in thinking why she is not accepted as the bahu of the house. I wish Virat starts to pay more attention to her woes in these matters. Sai is too preoccupied with all the drama that keeps happening in the house that she is not able to think anything else at the moment, like about herself and Virat.

What bothered me the most was Jab tak tum is ghar mein ho. Virat has himself spoilt what they were sharing by making it look to Sai that she isn’t going to be in the house forever. He told that because that is what she thinks or says always but what he spoke has undone many things. Even though Sai said that was the only right thing he said, she got too hurt. Doesn’t make sense even if he is upset to speak that when he was about to confess his feelings and kiss her a few days back. She is already in the “I will leave the house” mode and it is as if him agreeing with her that she isn’t here forever.

You stated exact points virat is elder than sai but he is expecting she should understand him first and he is not able to understand her. Today as compared to sai virat is more fault.

Originally posted by: SonuRani

You stated exact points virat is elder than sai but he is expecting she should understand him first and he is not able to understand her. Today as compared to sai virat is more fault.

Both are tube lights .There was no harm saying sorry. 🤢

Saving grace was Neil's reaction as he was trying to make it comical.

How the hell it's got to do with Pakhi.

When Sai told what bothers her without paying heed he literally brushed it off saying its Sasural 🤢.

I guess he was sunk into thought about ajinkya 😆

So he won't put it back on that pendent on Sai 😭

Now from tomorrow the most silliest act by Sai. 🤢