Need better dialogues!

So the sur of the squabble was perfect. Sairats tone, expressions were perfect but dialogues needed to be a bit better. And as real as it is that it ended with Sai walking out to go to college without fully resolving it, i wish there had been some "realization" on both ends.

Sai despite Virat telling her what his issue was , she didnt apologize... I wish she had said I'm sorry you were hurt and then justified her actions.

But i didnt appreciate Virats advice to Sai..Virat is still counselling her to "apnaofy" his family. Granted he softened his tone as soon as Sai mentioned "being an orphan". But he is asking her to adjust! Like seriously! How much more can she adjust and he said not think of them as "paraya" but how much more "apnapan" can she show?! Despite how they treat her, every morning she comes back to make a fresh start and every day they insult her again. She has done more than any other "bahu" for this family in the short time she has been here despite not even getting acknowledged as a human being let alone a bahu. She helped shivani, spoke up for mohit which his parents couldn't do, and fixed devis life. And because she thinks of bk gang as apna she gave her pendant away.

I wish Sais dialogues explaining why she gave the pendant away to bk had been better written.

But Sai nicely described that the issue is that they just wont think of her as family, they dont even want to talk to her, have anything to do with her. How pained she looked. My heart broke.

But just like Sai just didn't understand what was bothering Virat, he didnt seem to understand what bothers Sai.

But it was a very realistic squabble. It wasnt really a "fight", just squabbling like married couples. They kept moving around and switching from one topic to another. That's so classic.

As far as Sai mentioning pp goes- in KD, what Sai says is that you cannot by me a gift without gifting pp and family first. Pp is the favorite. And she said if you had gifted pp instead of me, no one would have issues. I wish they had written it that way here. Because thats what Sai meant. This time her reference to pp was not to say that you like her, so you buy her a gift. It was more to say that you can't buy something for me alone without getting something for everyone else. But the Google translate was screwed up this time😂

Virat's jealousy about this new guy in Sais life is cute but kinda silly. Anyone in her place will show annoyance at rokna-tokna for something so normal. But Virat's expressions are too cute.

Iss sab nok jhok mein pendant nahi diya. 😢

And then finally the scene where Sai invites them for college function is just the start of the usual CN drama. Literally they bark at Sai for no reason. Everyday she makes an attempt to bury the hatchet and move on and they attack her with absolutely no reason. Its such terrible behavior.

That dialogue to pulkit was heartbreaking- mera apna parivaar nahi hai, prlarivaar ke naam peh these people only are there. So even if its not permanent parivaar, I want to give them khushi, enjoyment. I wish Virat had heard this. Yeh apnapan nahi hai toh kya hai?

Virat should shut up about consider them your family dialogue. It’s them who I’ll treat her.

Sai should have realised how hurt he was. Before giving her reasons for gifting it. And he even Said it clearly for once about what bothered him.

That Pakhi dialogue was out of the blue. I wish like you mentioned they had written it in a better way or atleast copy paste KD better .

Like you said both Sai and Virat are unable to understand what is hurting the other and eventually end up hurting each other.

Veeru was hurt about the pendant and Sai with the way the family treat her vs P. And yes Sai should have apologized especially since Veeru clearly said he was hurt.

I agree the translation of dialogues was missed today😂. It was indeed meant to be you should have got a gift for P so no one would have complained since their chaheeti bahu is all they care for. Also her clearly telling V , p is mohite Patil and she is an orphan so no one really cares for her or considers her family nor want to talk to her 😢. But V did not really understand what Sai was trying to say and he goes on to say accept his family🤦🤦 phooti kismat. Does he really think his family is good and it's Sai who is not accepting them🤔 or are these misplaced dialogues aswell🙄. Sorry for the harsh word but the c gang literally treat Sai like trash 😢.

My take on this squabble

Virat did not mean what he said - that Sai's should show apnapan with his family members. He has given the same 'advice' (read patriarchal gyaan) to Sai in the past and those times he really meant it. But now he knows that the problem lies with the Chavans. Today's dialogue was him trying to deflect the truth Sai was speaking because he was self-absorbed in his own feelings.

I think Sai did not respond with understanding (when Virat talked about how bad he felt when Sai gave away the necklace) because she was pissed at the way he Virat started the issue - by arguing over nothing and trying to put her down.

Virat was very controlling when he ordered her to not take part in the dancing.

I feel very very bad for Sai trying to gain the approval of Chavans. She should walk out of CN and move to a hostel. She would be much better off there.

Edit : So Chavans are just orthodox, huh? Way to trivialize Sai's trauma. I wish I could show makers the middle finger.

Virat still giving this advice to apna paraya gyan is just too irritating😕 can't get see everything or he can open his mouth in front of Sai only!!😕

KD had much better dialogues than here .

Always. Their dialogues are a huge flop. They use the same words again and again.

They are inching towards suicide track. I can feel it.....

Like you said it was a typical husband wife fight,both are wrong and both are right. It happens that way only switching over from one issue to another.

Seriously how much more Virat want Sai to adjust with his family? He witnessed how scornful and vile they were towards his wife in back to back incidents happened before his eyes. Still he sings the same tune. Typical male mentality and I could identify it with most of the men around including my husband.

People of late tend to say that Sai Joshi is turning mahan like other ITV bahus. I disagree. She is forced to make amends and try again and again to win them over by none other than her husband himself. Sai’s goodness also compels her to try one more time and the result is before our eyes.

Originally posted by: olsen_124

They are inching towards suicide track. I can feel it.....

No! Please please aisa na ho. I really hope they dont show it. They will botch it up royally. 😢

Originally posted by: Nja91

So the sur of the squabble was perfect. Sairats tone, expressions were perfect but dialogues needed to be a bit better. And as real as it is that it ended with Sai walking out to go to college without fully resolving it, i wish there had been some "realization" on both ends.

Sai despite Virat telling her what his issue was , she didnt apologize... I wish she had said I'm sorry you were hurt and then justified her actions.

But i didnt appreciate Virats advice to Sai..Virat is still counselling her to "apnaofy" his family. Granted he softened his tone as soon as Sai mentioned "being an orphan". But he is asking her to adjust! Like seriously! How much more can she adjust and he said not think of them as "paraya" but how much more "apnapan" can she show?! Despite how they treat her, every morning she comes back to make a fresh start and every day they insult her again. She has done more than any other "bahu" for this family in the short time she has been here despite not even getting acknowledged as a human being let alone a bahu. She helped shivani, spoke up for mohit which his parents couldn't do, and fixed devis life. And because she thinks of bk gang as apna she gave her pendant away.

I wish Sais dialogues explaining why she gave the pendant away to bk had been better written.

But Sai nicely described that the issue is that they just wont think of her as family, they dont even want to talk to her, have anything to do with her. How pained she looked. My heart broke.

But just like Sai just didn't understand what was bothering Virat, he didnt seem to understand what bothers Sai.

But it was a very realistic squabble. It wasnt really a "fight", just squabbling like married couples. They kept moving around and switching from one topic to another. That's so classic.

As far as Sai mentioning pp goes- in KD, what Sai says is that you cannot by me a gift without gifting pp and family first. Pp is the favorite. And she said if you had gifted pp instead of me, no one would have issues. I wish they had written it that way here. Because thats what Sai meant. This time her reference to pp was not to say that you like her, so you buy her a gift. It was more to say that you can't buy something for me alone without getting something for everyone else. But the Google translate was screwed up this time😂

Virat's jealousy about this new guy in Sais life is cute but kinda silly. Anyone in her place will show annoyance at rokna-tokna for something so normal. But Virat's expressions are too cute.

Iss sab nok jhok mein pendant nahi diya. 😢

And then finally the scene where Sai invites them for college function is just the start of the usual CN drama. Literally they bark at Sai for no reason. Everyday she makes an attempt to bury the hatchet and move on and they attack her with absolutely no reason. Its such terrible behavior.

That dialogue to pulkit was heartbreaking- mera apna parivaar nahi hai, prlarivaar ke naam peh these people only are there. So even if its not permanent parivaar, I want to give them khushi, enjoyment. I wish Virat had heard this. Yeh apnapan nahi hai toh kya hai?

Are dialogues are copy past . That dialog suits in Bengali because bengali is different languages if we translate word to word in any other languages it will be very odd it happens with any language.

Why can't they writing own script only plot can copy if they don't have creativity but word to word copy is cheating