Raghvi OS : Chosen - Page 3

Thank you so much for writing this💚 this is fab 😍

Originally posted by: Prriyam

What do I say?

If there is a way to leave one, with a satisfaction of a feast, and yet feeling hungry, you master that art. 🙇🏻‍♀️

The day after, always is special. ‘Choice’ and thereby the ‘chosen’ is all through this OS; multiple instances, as I see it.

1. He chose to walk towards and make the enquiry.

2. Two of the three chose to leave. With the ‘chosen’ one staying behind to let know of her ‘choice’.

3. He chose to give-in and value the amrut (guava/her) more than the protein-shakes this world offers.

As to the story progress, loved it. The aftermath was shown very beautifully. ❤️

The smile that adorned his face could win any competition without a fight. - if this is what it was, keen to know how you would describe it, when his eyes catch the turned frame? 🤔

I like the word-play or revisiting something that was mentioned before. In first read, its passed without notice, though it sits odd; as it is in mufti, plain-looking. I saw this with ‘he went to his private bar but later ended up in a club’. Though it rang a ‘why’, I just rushed past, only to be answered later. 😀

Thank you for the link to other OSes. Will be reading those!

If I get comments like this after my updates then I am willing to write more. 🤗

I like to leave the end open for my stories, the readers can imagine whatever they want. I'm not limiting that there.

And I didn't describe his eyes when she turned the frame because I didnt think that I could do justice to it so I used my liberty as a writer there.

The bar, club, alcohol, and water... I connected them with Raghav and Pallavi. When I wrote the starting, it did feel odd to me too but then when I wrote last, it fell right into the place so I let it be.

Thanks alot of Prriyam, for the beautiful comments like this. I will be waiting for more. ❤️

Originally posted by: pretty2sunshine

Thank you so much for writing this💚 this is fab 😍

Thank you so much. 💔

Wowwww Keechu!!!

I loved it!! And I must say that I miss your writing too, please do write more stuffs on RaghVi!!!

It's really nice!

Loved it❤️

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Wowwww Keechu!!!

I loved it!! And I must say that I miss your writing too, please do write more stuffs on RaghVi!!!

Thanks alot Dishi 🤗

Yeah, I miss writing on them. Let's see if I post more.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Waiting

done reading.

Loved it, Kee❤️

Thanks for the tag kee 😊

It was lovely, the atmosphere, Raghav's anticipation , the way he reads Pallavi 😍

I would like to read the previous ones too....

The smile that adorned his face could win any competition without a fight.

I have never seen a line so true...❤️

Originally posted by: SRKian

done reading.

Loved it, Kee❤️

Thanks alot Ani. 🤗

Originally posted by: Isamreen

Thanks for the tag kee 😊

It was lovely, the atmosphere, Raghav's anticipation , the way he reads Pallavi 😍

I would like to read the previous ones too....

The smile that adorned his face could win any competition without a fight.

I have never seen a line so true...❤️

🤗

Thanks Sam for reading it.

Please do read the previous ones and let me know how that were.

He does have a beautiful smile. ❤️