Sairat OS - Chudail ki badaulat se - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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simply awesome lakshmi

loved it

akhir sai neh boldiya jho acp sab sunnah chahti hai

singhgad fort is gonna be missed 😆

thanks for tagging me dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

Ohhh 😲 That was so beautiful. I loved how he recalled all the memories and how he apologized for not accepting the truth. Too bad she couldn't hear it.

It was nice to see what he feels for her and how he craves to hear from her that she feels the same for him. The deewana ashiq Veeru is so good to see and read.

Loved the OS. 👏

Thank you 😊

Virat didn't speak that out loud 🤣🤣. He wouldn't open his mouth sometimes 😆.

Yeah, deewana Virat is a treat to watch and we can all enjoy while writing too.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Dee10

This was so beautiful. Please tag me also in your sairat stories. 😊

Sure 😊, Thank you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: SairatLove007

Reading this after holding your hand os by cheeku.

Love it thoroughly.

Last part singhad fort destroyed by baiko itself.

Looking foward to the next os. (tag if possible)

Oh wow, Cheeku's OS are amazing ❤.

Thanks 😊

Sure, will tag you henceforth 😊.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

❤️❤️❤️

Beautiful would be an understatement


Wow

Please do write more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukri

Wow, what an amazing write up on how it could have been! Virat is your story is what I want Virat in show to be. Your OS makes Virat look like an amazing man who reflects and thinks about everything.


Wish show writers had the creativity to show some of this as his though process.


Unfortunately Virat from the show is not this reflective, thoda buddu hain, to even go back so much in past and put everything together 🤣.

Thanks Sukri. I couldn't stop myself from writing an OS this time 🤣🤣.

Very true, Virat has to think a certain things.

He lets certain issues slide when things start to become smooth between him and Sai. Not that it has become alright one should stop addressing the issue. One good thing was he asked Sai why she left to Pulkit's place and what was bothering her. He even apologised to her on his family's behalf but I am not sure if he ever thought that he had let her down by not supporting her or by not agreeing with the truth of Pakhi. When I wrote the first few lines like how he would always protect her, I couldn't help but writing what all he should actually be protecting her from. That is why I added a few lines. Would like him to think these. He does feel happy seeing her love and care for him, but I hope he also realises how much she gets affected by his family's behavior and his relationship with Pakhi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: linakusharberry

simply awesome lakshmi

loved it

akhir sai neh boldiya jho acp sab sunnah chahti hai

singhgad fort is gonna be missed 😆

thanks for tagging me dear

Thanks Lina 😊

Ha ha ha, neend mein hi sahi, bol diya Sai ne jo Viru sunna chahtha tha 🤣

Ha ha the fort has become so famous amongst Ghum FD 🤣.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deevu

❤️❤️❤️

Beautiful would be an understatement


Wow

Please do write more

Sure, thank you 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you for tagging me💕


You write so well….it took me back to the good old days. Please keep writing and tagging me in 🙏🏼

I’m enjoying readers OS’s more than the show sometimes. I can’t believe I’m finding the show stressful🤣

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