Aasman se pare- a Sai Joshi SS chap 15 page 57 - Page 23

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sairat07

Just one word...Beautiful!

Aww that made me so happy.❤️

Ohhh so the things happening r after ten years!!Niiiice😳...I love this way of urs of unfolding layers slowly cheeku👏👍🏼

Thankyou so much. I'm so happy😊

Jeeva-Shiva patch up!!!❤❤

Yes❤️

U play with words yaar my eyes just teared up reading it...Ammmazing!💜

Whenever I read that my story evoked emotions in the reader, it gives me immense joy to read. Thankyou❤️

Continue soon

Happy writing!

thankyou so much for this lovely comment.

I will continue soon🤗

Thankyou❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update.

Virat needs to be sai's voice for some time till she regains it.

The family should pamper and shower her with love after hospital to motivate her and build her confidence again.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Your mind went way beyond my imagination😆

Why didn't I think of it 🤔

Ajeeb Brain thinks ajeeb🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Ajeeb Brain thinks ajeeb🤣

not really. Your brain is not ajeeb. That is actually logical. You know someone else thought the same too😆it just didn't occur to me

I had tagged you in a post here. And I explained what I wanted to show through this scene. You might have missed it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Now that I think about it, it's not that far fetched. I can see where you are coming from.

Actually I was trying to show Virat's beautiful past (dream) merging into his painful reality. Hence the fall and he was back to the pain he was trying to run away from subconsciously, but his own subconscious mind dragged him back.

Just read it😆

Ohhhhhh, I thought maybe he is considering the possibilities of all the trauma which might have occured and bothering her now at once😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Just read it😆

Ohhhhhh, I thought maybe he is considering the possibilities of all the trauma which might have occured and bothering her now at once😃

your brain actually works quite well😎
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Posted: 4 years ago

I think Shristhi and I so very desperately want to see Virat looking after Sai when she in an *ahem* delicate way that our brains straight away jumped there!

😁

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

I think Shristhi and I so very desperately want to see Virat looking after Sai when she in an *ahem* delicate way that our brains straight away jumped there!

😁

I might write an OS to satiate your desire😉

But on second thoughts. No. I won't. I demand it from you.😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oooh I will, HT will tell us.

Did you see that part in my sneak peek? ❤

But I'm greedy! I want your Virat's version too!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Oooh I will, HT will tell us.

Did you see that part in my sneak peek? ❤

But I'm greedy! I want your Virat's version too!!!

Yes. I did.

I'll be waiting.❤️

And I'll do that. But I'm not sure it will be here in this story or as an OS.😆

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