Riansh Noori- os collection chapter 4 page 4 complete.

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Hey guys, so here is the first os in the os collection, please do comment, otherwise i won't continue it.


Chapter 1- Loneliness and a ray of hope


For the world there was no other inspiring couple than Vansh and Ragini, they were college sweethearts and they both have been with each other in the tough time, Vansh Raisinghania was a rising name in the business industry, and Ragini was the beautiful, elegant, graceful model, they were a power couple.


But only Vansh knew the reality of their relationship, at first everything was okay, he was the pampering husband and his family doted on her too. But with time, he got busy and wasn't able to give her time and attention.


Things started to change after Ragini became pregnant, he could sense that she didn't want to have a child, but he did the best to take care of her. After the birth of his baby boy, she used to stay as far away as possible from Ansh.


He literally had to beg her sometimes just to give milk to the baby, their relationship had started to crumble, she wouldn't let him touch her, nor did they say anything remotely romantic to each other. Both were busy in their life, Vansh in taking care of the family and Ansh, while Ragini in modeling.


Dadi had sensed the change in relationship between them, so she made sure to give them some alone time, not knowing that Vansh will soon find out a bitter truth she had been hiding. He had came back early from office wanting to take her to dinner date.


He had just reached home when he heard voices from his room, confused that only Ragini should be have been in the house, he tiptoed and reached his room only to find Ragini in the arms of another man, laughing and smiling and also naked.


Since that he had shifted to another room and even if the family members were concerned they didn't say or ask anything, the only reason he agreed to live in farce of a marriage was because of Ansh and his family's reputation.


His life was nothing but darkness, no amount of love from Ansh and his family could heal his broken heart, but in this time of loneliness came a ray of hope in the form of Riddhima. She was poti of his Dadi's best friend.


At first he too judged and categorized as someone who liked to live in huge mansion and enjoyed money, but he was wrong, when ever she was not in college or busy she would help Dadi in the kitchen, she had become best friends with Sia and Ishani which was a big task in itself, being friends with Ishani was a no mean feat. And even Ansh adored her and that was totally surprising because he is usually shy around other people.


But what he secretly liked was the care she showed towards him, it was like a balm to his paining heart, she would take care of all the little things when it was related to him, like his morning coffee already reaches his room before he would even wake up.


Or that all his files and papers were neatly arranged, his lunch too was prepared by the time he had to go to the office. Or that sometimes she would waiting for him at the dining table, and the excuses would be the most hilarious ones.


Unknown to him, he was starting to fall for her, for him she was beautiful not only physically but she was beautiful inside out, the only thing stopping him was his farce of a marriage.


Ps- Hey guys so this is the first os in this collection, hope you like, i won't update everyday since i have two stories to finish. Also do tell what other things you would like to see in this os collection.


Chapter 1- page 1

Chapter 2- page 2

Chapter 3- page 3

Chapter 4- page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautifully written ❣️

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Wow..

Such ana amzing update.

Ragini toh hai hi manhoos kahiki.

Awww.. Ridz can sense his needs even before he voices it out.

Wow...

Continue soooonish

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Do give me ideas what wanna see, except pregnancy related, i have gotten that request.

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Please do continue this os and end it in a happy way

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Amazing loved it.

Continue soon.

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Originally posted by: NirupamaRoy

Please do continue this os and end it in a happy way

I have already written the whole story, called Noori. This is just few os based on it. Here read it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishq-mein-marjawan-2/5221326/riansh-ss-noori-complete-note-page-26

And then you can tell me what else you wanted to see in this.

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Chapter 2


So, in this os i am writing with everyone's point of view, how they felt when Riddhima was living with them.


Ishani and Sia

Ishani was exactly the copy of her brother, atleast in temperament, she would not easily make friends and if you are her friend then she will be always by your side. For her the happiness of her brothers was always important.


She didn't know why but she never liked Ragini in the first place, she had that glint in her eyes which all the girls tend to have when they see money. But still Vansh bhai was happy with her, so won't say anything. The only good thing Ragini did was giving birth to Ansh, he is the apple of Raisinghania family.


Riddhima was all together different person, for her self respect and independence was most important, she would always help Dadi, in the kitchen, or would help Ansh in doing his homework.


She was exactly what she wished her Bhabhi would behave like. But alas, she would have to make do with Ragini. Sia on the other hand, would make friends easily, and since Riddhima was in her age group it was more easy for them to be friends.


Aryan


He had two sisters, but Riddhima too was like a sister to him, even though the people of this house interacted with each other, it was Riddhima that brought them more closer and spread a warmth in the house.


He truly wished that Vansh, would be able to move on from Ragini, yes he knew about Ragini's affair, but Vansh made him promise not to tell anyone. Maybe just maybe Riddhima might be his true love.


Ragini

She hated Riddhima, she is behaving like she is the bahu of the house. She has seen the way Vansh looks at her, and she is little scared if he falls in love with her, then her luxurious life would be taken away from her she cannot let that happen.


Dadi


She had always liked Riddhima, there was a time when she actually considered her for Vansh but she was too small at the time and he already loved Ragini, so she didn't say anything, but she knows Riddhima is like a good luck to this family.


Ansh


He didn't like new people, he only stayed close to his Dad, but this girl was slowly becoming his best friend, she would play pranks with him. And would even bake his chocolate cake for him as well.


He always felt afraid of Ragini, she would always hit him when he did something wrong unknowingly or when he did something naughty, Riddhima would always make him understand things, also he has seen how his father is also a little more happy with Riddhima around.


Ps- Hey guys, i know it is short but since i didn't include the family's point of view much in the main story, hope you like it here and that it is not too cliche.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Note- Hey guys please send me some ideas for Noori story os collection. Otherwise i will write two more chapter and finish it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You can write an OS specific for a ritual day in their wedding haldi day or mehndi with Riansh moments❤️

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