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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm loving it 😍😍😍😍

I am loving it, toh theek hain but kuch ideas bhi de do😂😂

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I am loving it, toh theek hain but kuch ideas bhi de do😂😂

Let me think.... Raat tak deti Hun....😘😘😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Guys, please let me know if are liking the story, and if you have some ideas on how to continue it do tell. Otherwise i will try to finish it off.

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Chapter 5


Riddhima's head was starting to pain with all the information she had found out from Warden Mam, the man who was following around was Deepak Mishra and he was Kabir's father, yet he was not ready to acknowledge him. And the thing about being smiliar too Nandini..ugh what is happening around her.


She had reached home and was going inside when she heard a noise from the backyard, thinking it was Vansh she followed the sound, but then hid herself when she saw Vansh standing near the ambassador car,

R(thinking)- What the hell, ambassador car? Is it the same car that killed my parents? And what is Vansh doing there?


Before she could think anything else she saw Vansh screaming and hitting the car, he also injured his hand, scared by his anger she went inside and here Angre came and stopped Vansh,

An- Boss please calm down, aapka relationship itna kamzor nahi hain ki ek secret usse destroy kar de.

V- Nahi Angre, i have to destroy this car.

An- Theek hain but phele bandage karwa li jaye.


Riddhima was going back to her when she heard Chachi talking about a ambassador car

I- I had told Vansh bhai so many times to destroy that car, but still he had kept it there.

C- Woh car bas manhoosiyat phela deti hain.


She couldn't take it anymore, tired, scared and weirded out she went back to her room only to slip on some blood,

R- Why is there blood on the floor? Vansh? What happened? Tum yeh chot kaise lagi.

R- Jab dekho sab ke baare mein sochte ho, apne bare mein bhi soch liya karo. Kaise hua yeh?

V- Woh wine bottle ki toot gayi thi, so i was cleaning it.

R- Vansh, ghar mein servants hain, mein thi bula toh lete.

V- You were not in the house, where did you go?

R- Woh orphanage gayi thi, kuch pata karna tha warden mam se.


Vansh was actually shocked Riddhima had told him the truth, she bandaged his hand, told him to rest as she will bring Haldi doodh for him. She was going downstairs, still thinking about what happened in the backyard and everything else, when her leg twisted,

R- Ouch..

K- Careful, sorry didn't mean to hold your hand.

R- It's okay, thank you.

K- Waise i wanted to show you something. They went towards the kitchen. And Kabir showed her the will.

R- Wow, Kabir this is ..

K- I know.

R- Kabir i saw this man yesterday, when i confronted him he told me that, he didn't have a son, he had a daughter.

K- What?

R- Yes, was something mentioned in the letters.

K- No, nothing

R- Waise, i will need your help with something. There is a ambassador car in the backyard, i need to check it, will you be able to distract Vansh for sometime.

K- Riddhima, he will eat me alive, if i go near him. How about i check it? And tell you what i found?

R- No, wait if we check together we can search faster. Just let give this Haldi doodh to Vansh and then i will meet you in the backyard.


Ishani had heard everything, all her planning was working perfectly, now she needs to play as a concerned sister, and herVansh bhai will fall for it, she went to his room,

I- Bhai, why have you not destroyed that car. It will always hurt you. Why do you keep hurting yourself, we have lost almost everything due to this car. Just destroy it.

V- You are right Ishani, i should destroy the car.


Vansh leaves the room and goes to the kitchen to get some kerosene oil, Ishani was gleeful her plan was working, whereas Riddhima and Kabir were searching the car, they were looking everywhere, in the boot of the car Riddhima found a some papers and cds.


Kabir had just turned around and left to take a call, when Riddhima saw Vansh coming towards the car, she quickly hid in the backseat but it was what happened the next second scared her, he was pouring gasoline on the car, without knowing she was inside.


Ps- Hey guys please send me ideas on what to do next. And did you like ki Riddhima didn't lie to Vansh and told him where she went? And should Vansh join Kabir and Riddhima in their investigation?


Ps- Also, i feel bad that even though some episodes are still left, the forum has become so quite.😭😭




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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome 😘😘😘😘


Vansh should join them in the investigation....🙂🙂🙂🙂


They should find the whole truth.... You are already showing better communication between Riansh.... Continue that....

They both hide things to protect each other but that way too they hurt each other..... This should not be happening when they have already gone through so much because of their non-communication.....

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Chapter 5


Riddhima's head was starting to pain with all the information she had found out from Warden Mam, the man who was following around was Deepak Mishra and he was Kabir's father, yet he was not ready to acknowledge him. And the thing about being smiliar too Nandini..ugh what is happening around her.


She had reached home and was going inside when she heard a noise from the backyard, thinking it was Vansh she followed the sound, but then hid herself when she saw Vansh standing near the ambassador car,

R(thinking)- What the hell, ambassador car? Is it the same car that killed my parents? And what is Vansh doing there?


Before she could think anything else she saw Vansh screaming and hitting the car, he also injured his hand, scared by his anger she went inside and here Angre came and stopped Vansh,

An- Boss please calm down, aapka relationship itna kamzor nahi hain ki ek secret usse destroy kar de.

V- Nahi Angre, i have to destroy this car.

An- Theek hain but phele bandage karwa li jaye.


Riddhima was going back to her when she heard Chachi talking about a ambassador car

I- I had told Vansh bhai so many times to destroy that car, but still he had kept it there.

C- Woh car bas manhoosiyat phela deti hain.


She couldn't take it anymore, tired, scared and weirded out she went back to her room only to slip on some blood,

R- Why is there blood on the floor? Vansh? What happened? Tum yeh chot kaise lagi.

R- Jab dekho sab ke baare mein sochte ho, apne bare mein bhi soch liya karo. Kaise hua yeh?

V- Woh wine bottle ki toot gayi thi, so i was cleaning it.

R- Vansh, ghar mein servants hain, mein thi bula toh lete.

V- You were not in the house, where did you go?

R- Woh orphanage gayi thi, kuch pata karna tha warden mam se.


Vansh was actually shocked Riddhima had told him the truth, she bandaged his hand, told him to rest as she will bring Haldi doodh for him. She was going downstairs, still thinking about what happened in the backyard and everything else, when her leg twisted,

R- Ouch..

K- Careful, sorry didn't mean to hold your hand.

R- It's okay, thank you.

K- Waise i wanted to show you something. They went towards the kitchen. And Kabir showed her the will.

R- Wow, Kabir this is ..

K- I know.

R- Kabir i saw this man yesterday, when i confronted him he told me that, he didn't have a son, he had a daughter.

K- What?

R- Yes, was something mentioned in the letters.

K- No, nothing

R- Waise, i will need your help with something. There is a ambassador car in the backyard, i need to check it, will you be able to distract Vansh for sometime.

K- Riddhima, he will eat me alive, if i go near him. How about i check it? And tell you what i found?

R- No, wait if we check together we can search faster. Just let give this Haldi doodh to Vansh and then i will meet you in the backyard.


Ishani had heard everything, all her planning was working perfectly, now she needs to play as a concerned sister, and herVansh bhai will fall for it, she went to his room,

I- Bhai, why have you not destroyed that car. It will always hurt you. Why do you keep hurting yourself, we have lost almost everything due to this car. Just destroy it.

V- You are right Ishani, i should destroy the car.


Vansh leaves the room and goes to the kitchen to get some kerosene oil, Ishani was gleeful her plan was working, whereas Riddhima and Kabir were searching the car, they were looking everywhere, in the boot of the car Riddhima found a some papers and cds.


Kabir had just turned around and left to take a call, when Riddhima saw Vansh coming towards the car, she quickly hid in the backseat but it was what happened the next second scared her, he was pouring gasoline on the car, without knowing she was inside.


Ps- Hey guys please send me ideas on what to do next. And did you like ki Riddhima didn't lie to Vansh and told him where she went? And should Vansh join Kabir and Riddhima in their investigation?


Ps- Also, i feel bad that even though some episodes are still left, the forum has become so quite.😭😭




Very nice update. I really liked Riddhima told the truth to Vansh. Yes I want all three together and investigating. Here car should be related to Sia, Uma and Riddhima parents death. That’s why Vansh is guilty. Somehow Chachi/Aryan will help trio by manipulating Ishani and she will think she is winning the game. Also Chachi/Aryan will distract Ishani so Trio reach to truth. Ishani can also be responsible for Chacha death. In the end just make Ishani suffer a lot; in show she is very cruel and pscopath lady. Thanks
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshababy

Very nice update.I really liked Riddhima told the truth to Vansh. Yes I want all three together and investigating.Here car should be related to Sia, Uma and Riddhima parents death. That’s why Vansh is guilty. Somehow Chachi/Aryan will help trio by manipulating Ishani and she will think she is winning the game. Also Chachi/Aryan will distract Ishani so Trio reach to truth. Ishani can also be responsible for Chacha death.In the end just make Ishani suffer a lot; in show she is very cruel and pscopath lady. Thanks

I like it......

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Chapter 6


Riddhima was trapped inside the burning car, Vansh had left and Kabir had came back finishing the call, he quickly try to put the flames with an old blanket, he quickly opened the car door and pulled her out. She had some tapes in her hands which he put into his jacket and then scooped her up and took her inside, since she had fainted,

K- VANSH

S- Bhabhi, Kabir kya hua inhe.

V- Riddhima? What did you do Kabir?

K- Apni bakwass band karo aur doctor ko call karo.


Everyone was waiting anxiously for the doctor to come, only one was praying that Riddhima dies,

C- Yeh ladki ko koi na koi drama zaaror karna hain.

K- Aap please chup rahiye, when you don't know anything.

A- Ishani, tumhe nahi lagata hain Kabir kuch zayada hain Riddhima ki side le raha hain.

I- I know. Kuch chal toh nahi raha inke beech mein, after all they are former lovers

V- Bas bahut ho gaya sab ki bakwass.


The doctor came and told that Riddhima fainted due to smoke inhalation, Vansh was shocked and he looked towards Kabir, something else was happening here. The doctor advised Vansh to not let Riddhima roam here and there and to lessen her stress. Everyone went away to their rooms except Kabir,

V- What happened Kabir? I need the truth.

K- She was in the car which you were trying to burn.

V- But why?

K- This, you have to ask her, but my advice whatever you are trying to hide, tell her the truth, if she finds from someone else she will be broken. Besides we both know ki jab she wants to find something she will do everything to know the truth.


Ishani was furious, her plan was being destroyed by this Kabir, she needs to do something about him, this is not the first time, she had bloodied her hands, for money she will be ready to kill anyone. This Kabir will soon breathe his last.


Kabir looked down at the cds and tapes which Riddhima had found, he needs to find out what is in it. He had already send the car's number to Mishra, he needs to know more about that car, one thing he has understood Riddhima's parents death and his case is somewhat linked otherwise everything will not be connected in a way.


He also needs to visit his grandparents house, if what Riddhima said was true then what is his real identity, who is he really? A Raisinghania? Or A Mishra? But he needs Riddhima's help as well.


Riddhima groaned, her head was paining, the last thing she remembers was fainting in the car, she woke up suddenly,

V- Easy, utkae bhagane mat jao.

R- Vansh, why were you burning the car?

V- And tum kya kar rahi hain uss car ke pass?

R- Woh, Warden Mam ne bola tha ki mere parents ka accident ek ambassador car se hua, so i was just trying to find some clue regarding that.

R- But why were you burning the car?

V- Riddhima, that car is related to my horrible past, if i want to destroy it what is wrong?

R- Usse mein koi problem nahi hai, but tell me one thing, is that car somehow related to the death of my parents.


Vansh looked away, he was torn on one hand he wanted to keep this a secret, but here Riddhima was actually asking her straightforwardly, but he didn't want to lose her.

V- I am sorry Riddhima, i cannot tell you the truth.

R- Alright, but then you don't have the right to stop me to know the truth.


Vansh went away angry and sad he was trying to find a way to distract Riddhima, the next day, Riddhima and Kabir had left the house, she was interested to know more about Kabir's grandparents, what they didn't know was how their lives were gonna change in few hours.


Ps- Ridbhir's accident, Vansh giving blood to Kabir. Do tell what else you wanna see.

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Both parts were awesome

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Chapter 7



The Atmosphere at the dining table was awkward, Vansh was trying to look at Riddhima but she was ignoring him, he felt bad and hurt, couldn't she understand that he is afraid of losing, what if after knowing the truth she will leave, she is the only person in his life who cared about him, who loved him, losing her was not an option.


He needs to find a way to stop her from finding the truth about her parents, after breakfast he went to his study, and was discussing with Angre what to do next,

A- Boss, i think you should tell her the truth. I am sure she will understand. Waise bhi hum sab jante hain ki how much Bhabhi loves you.

V- I just want her to see me as a strong person and not some weak person, and that secret makes me very weak. I will have do something.


Kabir was in two minds, after what happened yesterday is it okay to ask Riddhima to help him in finding more about his family, and he still hasn't heard anything about the car, or the tapes he sent to Mishra,

R- Kabir kya hua? Where are you lost?

K- Woh actually i was thinking of going to visit my grandparents, do you maybe wanna join me?

R- Sure i would like that. Warden Mam ne kaha tha, ki Nandini Mishra is just like me, maybe i would get some clues from their house. Just let me inform Vansh.

K- Sure, i will meet at the car.


She went to study, and saw Angre and Vansh discussing something, she didn't want to disturb them but it was important,

R- Vansh?

V- Yes, Riddhima

R- Woh, actually i am going out with Kabir, i just wanted you to know that.

V- Do as you wish, waise bhi meri feelings ki kaadar tumhe thi nahi.


Riddhima felt sad and furious, she went away knowing she would end up saying something rude to him, Kabir and her left, what they didn't know was Ishani was keeping an eye on them, she called someone and ordered them to kill both of them.


The house was quite big, you could see that it had seen some good times, now it was broken and raided, most of things like furniture, glass, all had looted. They were looking through the rooms but didn't find much.


Then they found a locked room, Riddhima quickly picked the lock. The room was well maintained in comparison to other, it was a girl's room maybe Nandini. They searched everywhere, nothing important, then they looked into the cupboard it had many albums in it, opening one by they checked all the pictures,

K- This is the family photo. Mom's photo are very less in it.

R- Kabir look, it's Uma Aunty, Vansh's mother with Nandini.

K- Riddhima look at the picture below it.

R- Nandini and Riddhima. She is my mother?

K- I am your brother?

R- Good thing we didn't work out.

K- Look, Dad, Anupriya and Ajay Raisinghania. Seems like everyone knew each other.

R- Kabir, there is no photo of you...What if Deepak told the truth, what if you are not his son.

K- Then who am i? I don't understand a single thing. It feels like i am a pawn in Anupriya's game.

R- Is there any birth certificate? Any record of where you were born? Maybe that way we can clear the confusion.

K- Holy Trinity hospital. We can go there now.

R- Alright let's go.


They went back to the car, and were now going towards the hospital, Vansh was in his room feeling restless, he didn't mean to be rude to Riddhima, suddenly their wedding photo falls down and glass breaks for the first time in his life Vansh is scared.


He tried to call Riddhima, at first she didn't pick up but seeing as he was calling her again and again she picked it up,

R- Vansh? Kya hua? Is everything alright.

V- Riddhima are you okay? Kahan ho and kab tak aaogi?

R- Vansh i am ,KABIR!!


All Vansh heard was Riddhima's scream and sound of a crash, he kept calling and screaming her name, begging her to say that she is okay but nothing. As Kabir was driving to the hospital, a truck rammed into them for the other side.


The car rolled out a few times before stopping, both Riddhima and Kabir were injured badly, both them remembering all their beautiful memories, especially Riddhima who wished to see Vansh on last time before dying.


Ps- Here you go guys, hope you like this chapter, i am going to put this story on hold, i still don't know what else to add in this.

Also, do you want me to show a second wedding in this, and Vansh's Juvenile centre secret in it.?

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