Riansh ss - our family. Epilogue page 16 complete

Hey, so this is another request by @ Varshababy, but i am making a few changes,

- Dadi and Sia are positive, i still can't get over their 360 degree change.

- This is starting from when Vansh brought Riddhima back home.

- No electrocution scene, Kabir only threatened her, deep down he is a nice guy, still cares for Riddhima

Chapter 1

Everyone had apologized for their behavior and though Riddhima forgave them, she didn't forget anything, she had promised herself she will never allow herself to used by others.

Everyone did the pooja, and went to have lunch, everyone was laughing and talking to each other, when Riddhima saw Kabir sitting in the living room all alone, she knew that he was sad that Anupriya left, and he was lashing out because of it, she went to talk to him,

R- Can i sit here?

K- Yeh tumhara bhi ghar hain, why asking permission?

R- Kabir i am not sorry about the way i handled things. You have second chance, this family will accept you more sooner than they ever accepted me.

K- Yeah, it will take time to be a part of this big family.

R- Can i ask you something?

K- Sure.

R- Why didn't Anupriya ever tried to find out about you? I mean i am sure Vansh's dad had considerable resources, he could have found out about you.

K- I don't know, she never told me much about, her past. And i was too blinded by hatred to see anything else. I didn't even know that she killed Uma Raisinghania.

R- Maybe it's time to find out more about her. What she had hidden, among other things.

K- Sometimes i feel you should be a real detective rather than a physiotherapist. Jassosi chodna nahi hain.

V- Riddhima come here i need to speak to you.

K- Jao, Mr.VR jealous ho rahe hain🤭🤭😏

R- Shut up.😡

Ishani was boiling from inside, she couldn't digest the fact that, Vansh Raisinghania is so happy after destroying her life, and her mom's, yes Anupriya Raisinghania is her real mother, they had to work hard to be where they are now.

And this Kabir, was just a pawn in a bigger, when he comes to know his own reality he will wish that, he can die. But right now, her focus is on destroying her sweet 😡🤮 Vansh bhai's relationship. And she knows the perfect secret to destroy it.

She went to her and dialed a number, she ordered that person to send the parcel, and to make sure that only Riddhima gets the package,

I(thinks)- Now lets see how your Ishq or your marriage stays afloat through this storm. You put my mother in jail na, now you suffocate every day in this VR mansion.

Vansh had beautifully decorated the room, and made dinner for her, with some help from Sia, and even made her favourite blueberry muffins, he had changed into his famous black tux and was waiting for Riddhima.

Riddhima had changed into a gorgeous peach colored net saree with heavy embroidery border and near backless blouse, Vansh was literally speechless, she looked so beautiful,

R- How am i looking?

V- Hmph, he sat on the sofa looking some where else.

R- Aww, my big grumpy baby. You don't have to be jealous of Kabir. I told na ki i love you.

V- But why does he has to stay here now?

R- Vansh, he is part of our family, i know it is difficult but i am sure you can win his loyalty, it is upto you, if it is by money or care.

V- I am so sorry i gave you such a hard time.

R- No, today it is all about new beginnings.

They had dinner, and were just dancing on slow song, when the servant came and called Riddhima downstairs, she collected the package and went back to her room,

V- What is it?

R- Oh, i think Warden mam ne mera saman bheja hain.

The box contained books, her small knickknacks, a drawing book, but it was the last thing that scared Vansh to the core, the Om pendant he never wanted to see again in his life, the secret which could destroy them.

R- Pata hain when i was small, i used to wear this all the time because, i felt connected to my parents.

R- I wish i could know more about them.

A man with binoculars was looking at the VR mansion, especially Ishani's room, his little doll has grown up so much, he hates Anupriya and he hates that Kabir, unn dono ki wajah se i wasn't able to love my little princess, but don't worry soon everything will be out in the open and he was sure Ishani will consider him her father.

Ps- Hey, so this is a new story where Kabir is actually Vansh's real brother, and Ishani is Anupriya's daughter. Hope you guys like it. Please give me suggestions on how to continue it.

Chapter 1- page 1

Chapter 2- page 2

Chapter 3- page 3

Chapter 4- page 4

Chapter 5- page 5

Chapter 6- page 6

Chapter 7- page 6

Chapter 8- page 7

Chapter 9- page 8

Chapter 10- page 9

Chapter 11- page 10

Chapter 12- page 10

Chapter 13- page 11

Chapter 14- page 12

Chapter 15- page 12

Chapter 16- page 13

Chapter 17- page 14

Chapter 18- page 15

Epilogue - page 16

Nice idea...

Written beautifully 💓💓💓

Hey, so fast in writing it. It requires so much time and effort to think, write and check coherence. It is unbelievable you did it in less than 24 hours and without any flows.

Just loved it. I take at least 10 minutes to even frame a mail draft or reply to comments.

Story ideas:

1. Before dying, Uma came to know Kabir is her real son and Ishani is Anupriya daughter. Uma has recorded their crime in some Pendrive which is stored somewhere secretively. Ishani dad can be someone very close to the Vansh family. Maybe you can put the angle of Vyom that's why Ishani is hell bound to see Siya and Vyom together so that all the property will be of hers and Aunpriya.

2. Ishani deliberately married Aangre so that she can retrieve all information about Vansh business. It was her plan (Sunny missing).

3. Maybe Kabir and Vansh/Riddhima will listen to some conversation of Ishani and Anupriya and they will become doubtful and will engrave the truth in two different directions and ultimately bumping in each other and knowing their past and then making a plan to expose and give them hard time.

4. Or Siya/Vansh met with an accident and Kabir bone marrow/blood matches which again put doubt on their mind.

Just some ideas. See if it goes with your imagination.

Thank you so much.

Wow...

Its gonna be interesting..

Originally posted by: varshababy

Hey, so fast in writing it. It requires so much time and effort to think, write and check coherence. It is unbelievable you did it in less than 24 hours and without any flows.

Just loved it. I take at least 10 minutes to even frame a mail draft or reply to comments.

Story ideas:

1. Before dying, Uma came to know Kabir is her real son and Ishani is Anupriya daughter. Uma has recorded their crime in some Pendrive which is stored somewhere secretively. Ishani dad can be someone very close to the Vansh family. Maybe you can put the angle of Vyom that's why Ishani is hell bound to see Siya and Vyom together so that all the property will be of hers and Aunpriya.

2. Ishani deliberately married Aangre so that she can retrieve all information about Vansh business. It was her plan (Sunny missing).

3. Maybe Kabir and Vansh/Riddhima will listen to some conversation of Ishani and Anupriya and they will become doubtful and will engrave the truth in two different directions and ultimately bumping in each other and knowing their past and then making a plan to expose and give them hard time.

4. Or Siya/Vansh met with an accident and Kabir bone marrow/blood matches which again put doubt on their mind.

Just some ideas. See if it goes with your imagination.

Thank you so much.

Thank you for the ideas let me see what i can do. I am not leaning on putting Sia and Vyom together. 3 and 4 idea will be much better, like Kabir trying to find more about Anupriya and her life, and why she left him in the orphanage,

Hey guys give me some ideas about how to interlink, Riddhima's parents death raaz and Kabir truth/Ishani's truth.

It's so good to read a new version of the storyline first may riddhima parents had a friendly relationship with uma so she trust them so she give them the proof of Anupriya to keep them safe after uma death Anupriya came to know their crime had recorded and be safe in the hands of riddhima parents. They also came to know the Anupriya motive so they kept chip inside a pendant wore that to their child it's contains two pieces if they connect it they get a chip inside it about the child switch between Ishani and kabir truth also recorded in it Anupriya told the real reason for the death of riddhima parents to her it's really done by Anupriya but it's frame that vansh done by mistake in his childhood

Brilliant ☺ Do continue soon 😊

Amazing update.. 😍😍😍

Such a nice change 😍😍😍😍

Kabir trying to find out more about his past and gets and see a photo of small ishaani in orphanage and same pic at vr mansion.

And maybe anupriya wants money so he killed uma and married ajay and then she blackmailed ajay that his family will get to know that he is mafia and so she adopted ishaani..

She never loved ajay and uma kids.

May be ishaani father is on ridhu side or ridhu gets to know about ishani father and help her to patch up and then her transformation

Chapter 2 - Deepak, Kabir and Vansh's flashback.

Deepak Mishra Flashback

Deepak and Anupriya were college sweethearts, he belonged to rich class but he wanted to be independent of his family. Anupriya was mostly with him because of his money. And though his parents did not like the alliance they were ready to accept her.

Deepak loved Anupriya very much, so he told her before hand about his impotence and that he had very less chance of becoming a father, though Anupriya supported him, deep down he knew she will leave him one day.

He had many deals with a businessman named Ajay Raisinghania, and he could see that he was physically attracted towards Anupriya and she was too, there were times he had caught them together but didn't say anything.

Soon Anupriya was pregnant and they came to know it was a girl, and though the baby wasn't his, he promised himself to give her all the love he can. It was nearing the end of her pregnancy that he heard a conversation between Ajay and Anupriya that shocked him,

An- If you will not accept this child, then i will tell everyone the truth. Meri reputation toh jayegi hi but you will not be spared.

A- I can't Uma is pregnant too, how will i explain this to her.

An- Then how about a trade, my baby girl for your baby boy. I promise i will love him as my own if you accept my baby girl.

A- Fine. Let me see what i can do.

Deepak was beyond angry, how dare she destroy two innocent lives, he had recorded the conversation, and then he went missing, but he was trying to collect information against both of them.

He was able to collect everything about their affairs and how the babies were exchange, and he had given all this information to Uma Raisinghania. But to his bad luck she died, before everyone can know the truth.

And he was left all alone in the world, Anupriya married Ajay, and dumped Kabir in the orphanage, and he knew that he was wrong in not taking care of him, but maybe this time he can help in righting the wrong.

Right now, he is looking at Riddhima Raisinghania, he has heard a lot about her particularly her knack of investigating things, he would always like clockwork make sure to roam around the VR mansion so that she could see him. And soon she will come to talk to him.

Kabir's pov

Whatever Riddhima said yesterday was still in his mind, he too sometimes questioned why didn't Anupriya ever told anyone about him, why she told he was kidnapped, when she was the one who kept him in a orphanage.

No matter how much he hated Vansh, he saw how much he loved his siblings especially Sia who is not even his own sister, then why couldn't he become a part of this family after Ajay married his mother.

As much as he didn't want to think, a thought was developing in his mind, about whether she really cared about him or not. Even when he came here, she was more focused on Vansh than her own son. He decided to know more about himself and Anupriya as well.

He went to visit the orphanage he lived most of his life, the warden was excited to see him, he was one of the most brilliant students in the orphanage. When he started to ask about his childhood the warden smiled,

K- Kya hua Mam, aap smile kyun kar rahi ho.?

War- You are the second person to come here to know about your past.

K- What do you mean?

War- I think it was your father.

K- What, but i thought he had left us.

War- No, listen i know you respect your mother a lot, but at the time you were born, there was a rumor going around that your mom was having an affair with Ajay Raisinghania.

K- WHAT?

War- Yes, but the matter was closed, fairly quickly. Anyway i have something for you. She gives him a box, - this has all the letters, gifts you never opened, maybe it will help you find your identity.

K- Thank you.

After he left, a man entered the Warden's cabin,

D- Thank you for helping me.

War- I did it for him, his life was nearly destroyed by that vile woman. Is he really a Raisinghania?

D- Yes, he is.

War- I am not a big fan of you, but you need to be careful, secrets have a way of destroying everything.

D- I will.

Vansh's pov

Why is it that every time he wants to move on his life, the past drags him back. The locked was the most inauspicious thing in his life, it was connected to worst part of his life. The part that made him cold, ruthless, the part that made him understand that there is always a status quo in life.

That children will suffer because of the deeds of their fathers or their family. He knew if the truth came out Riddhima will definitely leave him and he cannot let that, he just got her back and now when he knows that she also loves him, he will not let his destiny ruin anything.

Suddenly he felt something on his lap, it was Riddhima, he realized that he was daydreaming in his study,

R- Dekha Angre, i told you he was dreaming. Waise Jaan i thought daydreaming was my forte.

V- Nothing, just like that. Deal ke baare mein soch raha tha.

R- Okay. I think you are busy. I will see you later. She kissed him on his cheek and left from there.

She had just returned to her room, when she found a letter on the dressing table, it wrote

You think you know your family, but everyone has secrets, even your husband, and it is connected to your parents.

Riddhima was confused, how and why would Vansh and his family know anything about her parents, she didn't pay much attention to it, maybe it is just a prank by someone, she knows many of family members are not happy with her coming back.

She won't play stupid anymore and hurt Vansh in the process. She was sure that if Vansh knew anything about her parents he would have told her.

Ps- Here you guys, let me know if liked all the point of view, and what do you think will happen next?I hope Deepak ka character is not too ajeeb.