CHILDHOOD FRIENDS (DMG) Part 3 pg 6+imp note Pg 8

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CHILDHOOD FRIENDS

PART 1

We see a girl sleeping in a neat and tidy room.Every thing on its place just then a lady screams

Lady : Riddhima beta utho aj school ka phela din hai. Late hona hai

Riddhima: ( yawning ) ha ma uth rahi hu . muje pata hai ke school mai mera phela din hai . Mai bahut nervous hu

Ma : Kyu?

Riddhima: Ma muje darr lag raha hai . yaha mumbai mai mera koi dost nahi hai . mai delhi ko bahut miss kar rahi hu.

Ma: Muje pata hai . Lekin ab hum mumbai mai rehege.

Riddhima : Muje pata hai . Papa kaha hai ?

Ma: Wo nahane gaye hai .

Riddhima: oh theek hai mai bhi naha ke aati hu .

CHARACTER SKETCH

Riddhima Mehta: She is very sweet ,innocent girl . She is 14 years old and has just shifted from Delhi to Mumbai because her dad was getting a better job in mumbai

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JUST OPPOSITE RIDDHIMA'S HOUSE

We see a boy with a really messy room . He is sleeping peacefully just then his alarm rings

Boy: Kya mast sapna tha. Yeh alarm hamesha wrong time pe bajta hai . Any ways uth gata hu varna mom yaha ajaye gi aur agar uh hone mera room dekh liya toh mai mara.

A lady shouts

Lady : Armaan tu uth gaya hai toh apna room jaldi se saaf kar muje pata hai tera room kabad khane ki tarah hoga.

Armaan: Mom apko kaise pata ki mera room mess mai hai.

He cleaned his room came down and sat on the dinning table.

Mom: Beta mai teri ma hu . muje pata chal jata hai .

Armaan : Waise dad kaha hai ?

Mom : wo jog karne gaye hai .

Armaan: Oh ha mai kaise bhul sakta hu . mom time kya hua hai

Mom : 7:30am

Armaan : mai nahane jata hu varna school ke liye late ho jaoga

Mom : Theek hai jaldi ja

CHARACTER SKETCH

Armaan Mallik : He is a cute, handsome boy . He is 14 years old. He wants to be a doctor . All girls in his class are after him .

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Back to Riddhima's house

A man is reading a paper .

Man : Padma chai lana

Padma(riddhima's mom ) : Ha shashak la rahi hu . do minute ruko

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Padma Mehta: She is Riddhima's mom . A loving mom , a sweet wife .

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Shashank : jaldi lao muje riddhima ko school drop karna hai aur office jana hai .

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Shashank Mehta : He is Riddhima's dad . A caring father, a sweet husband .

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Padma : lo agayi tumhari garma garma chai .

Riddhima ne kaha ke wo bahut nervous hai .

Shashank : Don't worry wo dost chutki mai bana legi . Bas usse Delhi ki yaaf a rehi hogi .

Padma: ha woh vahi bata rahi thi

Riddhima comes

Riddhima: hi papa . good morning . Ap kaise ho?

Shashank : good morning beta. mai theek hu. ready aoni nayi school jane ke liye

Riddhima: ha papa . Thodi si nervous hu . Muje Delhi ki bahut yaad arahi hai . Lekin it's ok

Shashank : beta tum bahar jao mai abhi ata hu.

Riddhima : Theek hai papa

She goes out the house

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Armaan's house

Armaan: mom i am ready.Dad kaha hai .mai late ho jaoga.

Dad : mai yaha hu . tu bahar ja mai ata hu

Armaan: jaldi aana

He goes out of the house .

He is walking on the road and he crashes with Riddhima. Riddhima is about to fall when Armaan catches her. They stare each other. And after a minute they come back to their senses

Armaan: I am so sorry . meri galti thi

Riddhima : Nahi . It was my fault. Sorry

Armaan :Its ok

Shashank : Beta apna bag toh le lo

Riddhima : hah papa le rahi hu .

She goes

Armaan's dad comes

Dad : chale beta

Armaan : ha dad chalo

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Riddima: Chalo na papa . school mai late ho jaogi .

Shashank: Ha beta chalo

END OF PART 1

Imp Note:The 1st 3 parts are written by me that's karanrox and the rest will be written by cute_trish.

THANK YOU!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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so, here is chhotu armaan...!
heyy, nice effort...continue soon...am waiting..! 😉



*cud u plz resize the font size..?? i mean make it a lil bit small, its a bit difficult to read.**
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey this part was nice it was a good intro nice attempt
cont... sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
great ff
plz pm me wen u update 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow what an start clashinggggggggggggghmm excitingggggggggggggggggggggggggg
do update it sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 post 👏 , only 14 and already a flirt? 😉 do update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 really great and amazing it was awesome yaar too good please keep up plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon i love it please plz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start
lkin it already
updte soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice ff.the starting was great
there is no doubt that you should continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sea_nyx

gr8 post 👏 , only 14 and already a flirt? 😉 do update soon

hey he is not a flirt 😉 in ma .ff

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