Riansh os- Love, Fate and Tears chapter 4 page 4 complete

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Hey guys another request by Ana-twilight, the poolside confrontation and Riddhima being pregnant with few changes. Hope to see your comments


Chapter 1 - Breaking Trust



Vansh was moving around the room and cooing to the little bundle of joy in his hands. Riansh was born just two weeks back, and though he should be happy, Vansh was not happy.


Riddhima was in coma from the last two weeks, she had brain tumor which he knew nothing about, or maybe she didn't want to tell him because of the way he was behaving with her.


He didn't know whether he will ever be able to take care of Riansh properly. He was for the first time in his life scared. He tried to do everything he wouldn't even let his own family members near his child, Riansh was his and Riddhima's child and he would not share him with anyone.


He so wishes Riddhima was here with him, he so wishes that he had stopped playing and hurting her. He wished she had told him about the tumor. He had wished for so many things but nothing in his life happened according to the way he wanted.


He laid on the bed, and kept Riansh close to him. Riansh was more Riddhima than him, same chubbiness and same smile and same naughty behavior. One of Riddhima's dupatta was in his hand, so that he doesn't forget her smell. He couldn't help but cry thinking how this was all his fault.


The next morning, the doctor had called him and told him Riddhima was awake, he was so happy and excited, he made sure Riansh was fed and cleaned, he even changed his diapers. Sia was looking after him till he takes a bath and gets changed.


He got ready, and taking Riansh with him he went to the hospital, he went straight to her, where Riddhima was awake and looking around confused, the doctor looked at him with a grave face,

R- Doctor, i really don't remember anything. I was going to meet someone, and then i don't remember anything.

V- Riddhima? Do you know who i am?

R- No, it is the first time i am meeting you. Can someone please tell me what is going on?

D- You rest miss Riddhima, i will tell everything later.


Vansh and the doctor left the room, he couldn't believe that she has forgotten everything, he looked at the doctor with a furious look,

V- What is happening? Doctor. 😡😡

D- Mr Raisinghania, i had already warned your wife ki unka tumor ussi jagah hain jahan humari memories stored hoti hain. It is miracle ki unhe kuch bhi yaad hain.

V- But will the memories ever come back?

D- I am afraid i can't say anything about it. It may or maynot return. But we should move on with assumption that it won't.

D- And it is very important that you don't force her to remember anything.


The doctor left them, Riansh started crying probably hungry. He fed him the bottle milk, Vansh was looking at the sleeping figure of Riddhima, how will he handle everything, and how will he even tell her the truth, that not only she was married but she had a child as well.


After sometime he again went inside, Riddhima was feeling guilty and sad, the doctor had told her about her memory and that the man standing in front of him is important to her, what was the relationship he didn't tell her.


Vansh came and stood near Riddhima, Riansh was fussing a lot, it would seem that he sensed his mother was near him, he started crying loudly,

R- Can i hold him? Maybe i can calm him down.

R- What is his name?


Vansh was in a dilemma whether he should tell her the truth, the doctor had already told her not to give any stress so he told her,

V- His name is Ansh.

R- He is so cute. She poked his chubby cheeks and Riddhima smiled. She didn't know why but she felt content hugging the little child like he is a part of her.

R- Mr.Raisinghania, i am sorry.

V- Kis baat ke liye?

R- That i don't remember you or this little guy.

V- It is okay, don't stress yourself. You take rest i will get your discharge papers and then we will go home.

R- Home? You mean hostel na.

V- No, Riddhima you stay with me. You work as my sister's physiotherapist.

R- I am a doctor?

V- Like i said, don't stress i will tell you everything slowly.


Vansh went to take Riansh from Riddhima but he started crying loudly and started fidgeting. Vansh looked awkwardly at Riddhima but then smiled when she said,

R- Let him stay with me. Once he falls asleep maybe then you can take him.

V- okay.


He went outside, called Angre and updated the situation, he asked him to warn the family not to say anything untoward to Riddhima and also to make the guest room ready. He went to thr reception to get the discharge papers ready, all the while thinking how everything changed because of his decision.


Flashback


It was week since Riddhima and Vansh had confessed their feelings for each other. But Riddhima was still restless like it was a calm before the storm. She knew Vansh doesn't forgive easily, yet he wanting to start afresh with her didn't sit well with her.


Combined with this stress was Ahana trying to manipulate her saying that Vansh wanted to kill her. And the incidents that kept happening like her getting locked in the car with a firework inside.


Or someone making it look like she wanted to commit suicide, along with it Vansh's strange aloofness, one minute he was loving and romantic, and the next the same mysterious vibe. She had decided to clear her doubts once and for all, she cannot go on like that.


The next day was Kabir and Ahana's engagement, she was trying to find Vansh every where but she was nowhere to be seen, and then when she found him and wanted to talk to him everyone was stopping her.Then she got a note it said-

'Meet me where we saw the beautiful moon together '.


She understood Vansh was calling her to the pool side, she went there but Vansh was nowhere to be seen, she called out,

R- Vansh, where are you? I need to talk to you but you won't even pick my calls. Where are you?

V- I am right here. I know you are restless to talk to me.

R- Yes, i have a lot of questions but promise me. You will tell the truth.

V- I promise whatever you ask i will tell you the truth.

R- You said Ahana saved you, but on 12 Nov she was in Delhi, so did you lie

V- Yes.

R- Did you bring her here for a mission?

V- Yes.

R- That girl tried to kill me so many times,..but it wasn't her it was you who wanted to kill me?

V- Yes.


Riddhima was stunned, everything Ahana told her was the truth, she was angry that he was playing with her,

R- IF YOU WANTED TO KILL ME, WHY DID YOU SAVE ME ALWAYS. TELL ME.

R- Tell me do you even love me, all the moments we spend in the glasshouse was a lie.? You were playing with me like you did as Vihaan?

R- TELL ME!!!

V(grips her arms)- Bas, bahut bol liya tumne, ab i will ask the question and you will answer, Yes or No.

V- Did you marry me because you loved me?

R- No

V- Was i just a task for you?

R- Yes

V- Did you marry me to destroy me, to find evidence against me, you always believed i killed Ragini?

R- Yes.

V- You were betraying me from the moment you kept your first steps in my house. You have betrayed me in the name of love, and relationship.

R- Vansh, i know i have betrayed you but it was all in the beginning of the relationship, after that i had tried so many times to tell you the truth, but you always stopped me. I even wrote a letter to you in the glasshouse telling you everything.

V- Jhoot, mujhe koi letter nahi mila.

Vansh pulled out a knife and kept at Riddhima's throat,

V- When i woke up alive even after jumping from the cliff, my first thought was why? Then i realized i still need to make you suffer for what you did to me.

V- You trust me now, and look what i have done. This is the true meaning of Dhoka.


Ps- What will happen next? Will Riddhima find out she is married to Vansh and that Riansh is her child. Hope you like the twist i put in it. Next chapter too will have a twist.


Chapter 1- page 1

Chapter 2- page 2

Chapter 3- page 3

Chapter 4- page 4

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Amazing ❤

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Amazing start Raveena

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Amazing 😍 Loved it👏

You are getting better and better well done👏

Pls let her feel motherly connection with riansh ,like every time he cries in hunger make her restless

that would be so beautiful aur vansh k sath kya karna hai you decide😊

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Thanks for writing down my request raveena!!! 🤗😍

The start is super amazing and i am loving this!!!💕💕

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Jaldi thomo next chapter..

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Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Jaldi thomo next chapter..

Cant wait to read it..

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Haven't thought of the next chapter 😂😂

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Chapter 2- New Beginning and A task to prove your love.


Flashback


Vansh was brimming with anger and hate for Riddhima, he kept the knife at her neck and asked,

V- I can kill you in a minute. I can destroy your life, your relations, love, happiness and memories in a minute and say sorry will that work.

V- Does saying sorry takes away the pain?


Riddhima looked into his pain filled eyes, she remembered all their precious moments, she was still looking at him not able to believe he could something like this.

V- How are feeling Riddhima? Dard, chuban, thakleef hui na. When the person you trusted betrayed you. I am going through that since i came back. Whenever i see your face i get reminded of your betrayal.


He pushed away, turned he didn't want to show how weak he was infront of her, even now hurting her meant hurting himself.

V- When someone stabs you in the back, rather than the injury, the betrayal hurts more. With your betrayal you have snatched away my love, my trust and my identity.

V- I gave you everything my love, care, respect and trust. I gave you a family. What did you give me only betrayal.

R- Vansh🥺🥺

V- Chup, whatever you say cannot undo your past.

He grabs her face in a broken voice says,

V- I am broken, TOTALLY BROKEN. You broke me so bad that now i can be whole again.

R- Vansh please,

V- SHUT UP


He was standing near the pool when Riddhima saw, the candle going to burn his kurta,

R- Vansh move. She pushed him aside.

R- Pyar kurbaani mangta hain Vansh, i paid it every single time. I tried to tell you my truth so many time, but you stopped me. I know i betrayed you but that was my past.

My Past and My Present is very different, yes my past actions are punishable, but today if you say that i don't love or trust you. That will be the biggest punishment of my life.

R- I love you so much Vansh please believe me. She hugs him, but he pushes her away.

V- You love me? Then prove it to me.

R- I will do anything you, aapni jaan de dungi.

V- Shh, to prove your love you don't have to kill yourself, but you have to kill someone. And that person is Kabir. And that Riddhima is the test of your love.


Riddhima stood stunned and paralyzed for moment and then she said,

R- Vansh how can i kill someone.?

V- No, you don't have a choice, to prove that you love me, trust me. This is the only option you have. It is upto you whether you want to do this. What better way there, the person who manipulated you, who made you my enemy, you will kill him yourself.

V- You once crossed all limits in love for him once, now for me you have to cross limits again. Mere pyaar aur vishwas pana will not be easy for you.

V- Your actions will decide whether you will have a future with me or without me.


He told that her tomorrow there will be a kuldevi's pooja and that killing Kabir will be the ultimate sacrifice needed for this pooja, he left from there, tired and exhausted Riddhima falls down to her knees, thinking how to fulfill the test for her love.


Riddhima came back to her room, she went towards the wedding photo frame, she took it and hugged it tightly, crying silently remembering their percious memories,

R- You taught me how to love Vansh, and now i have to prove my love to you? And that too by killing someone. When will you understand Vansh that i love you so much.


Suddenly she felt dizzy and she felt something trickling down her nose, she wiped her nose and it was blood, she went into bathroom panicking, she washed her face and put an ice pack on her nose, it stopped. She didn't know why this happened but she was more afraid of the killing someone to prove her love.


They were doing the pooja, and Riddhima's hand were smeared with sindoor, Vansh looked at them and said,

V- I hope jis tarah tumhare haath sindoor se laal hain, waise hi kuch der baad woh Kabir ke khoon se lade hue hongaye.

V- You have 15 minutes to prove your love, your devotion, and that you can cross any limits for me. He gives her a gun, I hope this will make things easier for you.


During the pooja, Kabir went to take an important phone call, Vansh nodded towards him and Riddhima followed him, she saw him talking on the phone, she aimed the gun towards him and Kabir turned,

K- Hehe, Riddhima you really think you can kill me. Tumhe saach mein lagta hain Vansh will forgive you. I know you are weak Riddhima.

R- I am not the same Riddhima, the Riddhima who was your pawn died when she married Vansh. And i will do anything for him even it means destroying myself.


She shot him point blank, his blood smeared all over her face, exhausted and weak she fainted there. Everyone inside was shocked hearing the sound, they came outside only to see Riddhima fainted with blood all over her face,

D- Riddhima kya hua isse? Yeh khoon? Vansh andar le ja isse.

V- Angre call the doctor.


The doctor came and examined Riddhima, he gave the family the happy news that she was pregnant, on one hand Vansh was still angry with her, yet he was happy that she chose him and his love, and that nuisance Kabir is finally out of their life.


Present

Riddhima, Vansh, and baby ansh came back home, everyone was confused as to how to behave with Riddhima, Dadi too was getting irritated that Vansh was so focused on his child and wife, that his business was starting to go down hill.


He took her to the guest room, Riddhima felt like she was here before, before he could leave, Riddhima asked about Sia,

R- Mr Raisinghania can i meet Sia? I mean woh agar mujhe apne past ke baare mein batati hain, toh i can easily remember things.

V- She is asleep now, kal baat kar sakti ho tum okay.


Vansh placed sleeping Ansh in the cradle he took a bath and came outside, the food was kept on the bed. He eat remembering how Riddhima would sometimes force him to eat when he forgot.


Vansh was in deep sleep, when Ansh started crying loudly, he tried everything but he was not stopping, he was starting to feel guilty like he couldn't take care of his own son. Riddhima tossed and turned listening to Ansh's cries, she didn't know why but whenever he cried it felt like someone was tearing her heart out.


Following the cries, she saw Vansh trying to calm him down, Knocking on the door, she entered and extended her hands, Vansh let Riddhima hold Ansh, and instantly his cries stopped, she also told him that he needed a diaper change.


After sometime he feel asleep again and Riddhima went back to her room, but she could feel something was wrong with her, her b^easts were starting to pain, and every time she was near Ansh why did it feel like she should b^east feed. How can she feel like that when she hasn't been with someone let alone get pregnant.


Ps- How is it guys? So this will be a four shot and next chapter will show, depression, tumor and pregnancy. And in the present she gets to know that she had just delivered a baby.


And Riddhima killed Kabir here, even in show i wanted that, but for this story it is important.

Edited by raveena0605 - 4 years ago
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Awesome... Both the parts were amazing... Superb shots..

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This was amazinggg..❤❤

Kabir is gone... thank you for showing that!!

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