24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 26

Heartouching story❤️

The way Samrat said "Bharat Ma" touch my heart❤️

Ha can do anything for his motherland👍🏼

Samrat is very strong.

Beautifully written dear i love it❤❤❤

It is awesome dear!!!

So I think he might have suffered from any terrorist threat or likewise!!!

That's why ge must be saying dhokha nahiii....

It is more and more interesting... Please continue soon💜... Waiting for the reason behind his mental state to come out 😥😥

Very nice.....👌

Now everything is making sense....his behaviour... his dokha word.....

In all this one best thing happened is that.... chavan's got to know about their childre's suffering because of comparison and mainly pakhi moved on from Virat.....

Eagerly waiting for next update.... please give soon....

Loved it !

It was the best from all parts

Do continue !

Jai Hind!! ❤️❤️

finally you have revealed the reason for samrat’s behaviour.so the tortures he has endured has disturbed his mind. looking forward to see how vineet will help samrat .❤️❤️❤️❤️

Bahut dino baad chaand nikal aaya🤣

Sry I didn't mean to taunt u but to express my joy after seeing that this story has been updated

Loved the update!!

The way u solved the questions arising in reader's mind by each updating part..lovvved it sooo much👍🏼

Amazing!!!👍

Hoping to read the epilogue soon💜 Samrat get well soon...This was beautiful.. And glad to read such a beautiful piece of art...❤

It's just superb yaar

Hats off !!

How can you write so well 🥺

Loved it ❤️

Ps : I remembered this story I think you forgot ( just kidding 😅)

Originally posted by: sairat07

Bahut dino baad chaand nikal aaya🤣

Sry I didn't mean to taunt u but to express my joy after seeing that this story has been updated

Loved the update!!

The way u solved the questions arising in reader's mind by each updating part..lovvved it sooo much👍🏼

Amazing!!!👍

Hoping to read the epilogue soon💜 Samrat get well soon...This was beautiful.. And glad to read such a beautiful piece of art...❤

Bold: thankyou so much❤️❤️

Italics: OMG.⭐️ That made me so happy ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Will update the epilogue soon.🤗

Originally posted by: ishika_692

It's just superb yaar

Hats off !!

How can you write so well 🥺

Loved it ❤️

Ps : I remembered this story I think you forgot ( just kidding 😅)

Na, Na. I didn't forget it😆. Because it is close to my heart. Due to something personal, I abandoned it. But now got back to it.