Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 28

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Krish and Raavi are the dream team 🤣

omg so funnyyy!!! adorable ❤️

Need more Shivi though!!!!!!

Thinking of writing a ShiVi and ShiVi update😳

Lets see😉

Glad you find this adorable 🤗

Thank you so much ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

Hilarious, Raavi and Krish are so dense sometimes

Loved this part.

Gunda chacha hahah

The goon saluted shiva for keeping up with raavi lol

Dono ka first floors are empty - confirmed by Shiva 🤪

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Glad you loved it 🤗

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

too good. i was so scared while reading about kidnapping but the update was so funny 😆krish and raavi both are enjoying 😆 and their comments were oh gosh🤣

awesome update

Glad you enjoyed their kidnapping 🤪🤣

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Originally posted by: lourel24

Damn it was so hilarious 😂 loved it.

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Originally posted by: Guntaaskaur

Bechare gunday, kabhi kissi ko kidnap nahi karenge ab.

🤣 hai na!!

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I love your os and ts

Waiting to read more of them😍

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Yeh kidnapping ko kya twist diya hai ..bahut achha laga ..it was really hilarious ..Raavi and Krish 👏

Bichara Mohan ..Isske Pati ko ashirvad dena chahiye

Too good

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Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Thank you so much ❤️❤️

Yaar I am waiting for your update.

Love your works😍

On it... maybe today I will update.

OMG. I can't tell you how much I loved this again! Loved this new twist with Kidnapping. It reminded me of Dennis the Menace. Such airheads these two are. And I spilled water just imagining the Leader Gunda posing for the picture with V sign. 😂😂. Lol and how they actually managed to get info of the new Gunda and told them all of their details. I got very concerned with them revealing all of their personal details to Gundas thinking identity theft. 😂😂. But glad he ran away. Loved how Raavi defended Shiva! ❤️

And that last scene was just beautiful. Shiva knew what she really needed and loved how she finally opened up about her feelings and Shiva making light moments out of it. It's so endearing to see them slowly fall in love. Seeing their comfort with each other, who'd ever believe that they weren't in love when they got married. I love these two. Please update the next part soon! ;)

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMG. I can't tell you how much I loved this again! Loved this new twist with Kidnapping. It reminded me of Dennis the Menace. Such airheads these two are. And I spilled water just imagining the Leader Gunda posing for the picture with V sign. 😂😂. Lol and how they actually managed to get info of the new Gunda and told them all of their details. I got very concerned with them revealing all of their personal details to Gundas thinking identity theft. 😂😂. But glad he ran away. Loved how Raavi defended Shiva! ❤️

And that last scene was just beautiful. Shiva knew what she really needed and loved how she finally opened up about her feelings and Shiva making light moments out of it. It's so endearing to see them slowly fall in love. Seeing their comfort with each other, who'd ever believe that they weren't in love when they got married. I love these two. Please update the next part soon! ;)

Was waiting for your comment 😳

So much happy you loved it overall

Thank you so much❤️❤️❤️

Eagerly waiting for your next update ❤️❤️

Its a very beautiful story.Want to know how Shiva and Raavi's relationship will progress further.