ShaKhi OS ~ Pseudo-cliché ~

Wow...oh my goodness ...wow...i am spellbound...my heart is still pounding....the emotions were so real...so passionate...i was at the edge of my seat anxiously wondering what was coming up & you didnt fail...absolutely loved reading this💖🌹

btw i feel age is nothing as long as the people involved dont care about it...are consenting adults who are not manipulating or taking advantage of the other...

Wowww......

Why did it end? I was totally engrossed in this story. This is such a beautiful, heart warming, feel good type of work. I loved every line of it.It took me full hour to read it properly, can't imagine how much efforts and time it would have taken you to write this.

Finally she got over her assumptions and fright over the numbers and found her love.😍

Going to re-read it. Thank you for this beautiful story on Shakhi. You write amazingly.

wow..this has been the most intense story I have read in a while..it was like watching a movie..so amazing and beautifully written! Kudos to you..you are an awesome writer!!

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Wow...oh my goodness ...wow...i am spellbound...my heart is still pounding....the emotions were so real...so passionate...i was at the edge of my seat anxiously wondering what was coming up & you didnt fail...absolutely loved reading this💖🌹

btw i feel age is nothing as long as the people involved dont care about it...are consenting adults who are not manipulating or taking advantage of the other...

Thankyou so much.I am glad you loved it. It really means a lot.❤

True , Love is towards each other and not by knowing age.I hope I was able to justify it in tje story.

Hey, last night I read this on Wattpad & was waiting for you to post this here. Finally it's here & I can say everything that came to my mind 😆😆

So.. This concept is so fresh, so interesting & kept me on the edge of my seat. Shaurya & Anokhi in an age reversal with a sophisticated touch in both their lives. That got me hooked to the plot!

How they met eo, Shaurya showed genuine interest in talking to her, how Anokhi tried not to melt at his words & moves were bliss. The introduction was so good. Then ofc revelation of who he is & I really liked how she checked him out 😄

Moving on.. The way they found comfort with eo, watched movies together, had food, walked along paths was so cute. Then Shagun happened & I really liked how Ahir was being the understanding friend for Anokhi. Goals!

Anyway misunderstandings & hearts filled with unanswered questions was painful ofc. That function actually triggered Anokhi, which was necessary I feel. Neither him nor her were open about their feelings & Shaurya's behaviour came as off putting.

How she decided to apologise was sweet 💛 She couldn't take it anymore but I felt some jhol had to be there & the girl inside his house had to be his friends girl 🤣 That last convo was adorbs with frustration coming through, it was needed & OMG, the ending 🤪🤗

Refreshing, hatke, interesting, mind boggling. You can add more adjectives 😁😁😁

Made me so happy honestly & gurl, you gotta write something similar. Maybe a story with them in different professions, with Shaurya fighting his feelings for a younger Anokhi. Ofc we have that paradigm but in a different situation, place yk? Could you consider this as a request? 🤗❤️

Great work with this, nailed the story! 🤗💜

You uploaded it here too ❤

Maine to wattpad par spam kar diya comment karte karte (Anastasia mahi is my name there on wp). Itna accha story. Itna intensity tha story mei. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🥰🥰😍😍❤

You definitely have got some majesticall skills on writing gurl. 😍

Amazing writing ......loved it....❤️

I was fascinated by the title and read this yesterday.

Dear length doesn’t matter when something written is so nature and artistic:

I just loved this Os the title suits so apt to what have u written

It is written with lots of passion

Keep writing more

Love

Jen

Wooooowwwww awesome read. I'm speechless.

Wonderful, just Wonderful. I was so hooked. You are such a wonderful writer ❤

I enjoyed reading it so much.

Superb👌👌

Love Preet ❤