Shivi FF: Broken (Part 12, Pg.31) (finished) - Page 10

woman I love you and I love that you're giving us such quick updates but can you please go study 😆

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I don't understand why useless Dev thought it was necessary to visit her hasn't she endured enough? all that progress down the drain

I'm so glad that she had promised to never hurt herself again - that second time was even more emotional than the first :(

Shiva taking time off from the dukkan is the sweetest thing ever and it goes to show how invested he is in her wellbeing

they are developing a beautiful relationship and I can't wait to see where it leads to

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

woman I love you and I love that you're giving us such quick updates but can you please go study 😆

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I don't understand why useless Dev thought it was necessary to visit her hasn't she endured enough? all that progress down the drain

I'm so glad that she had promised to never hurt herself again - that second time was even more emotional than the first :(

Shiva taking time off from the dukkan is the sweetest thing ever and it goes to show how invested he is in her wellbeing

they are developing a beautiful relationship and I can't wait to see where it leads to

I should really go and study. Okay I’ll start tomorrow🤣

Originally posted by: ananya269

Yes, you can call me that 😊❤️

Thank you!! I keep writing in between studying. That’s my secret 😆

Actually, looking at the speed of the updates, its more like you are studying in between the updating work😆

Originally posted by: Swathu

Actually, looking at the speed of the updates, its more like you are studying in between the updating work😆

That is true 🤣

OMG so emotional.

Raavi tried to take her life again, why couldn’t Dev ask before coming to see her🤔

Shiva is so cute... Mama ne meri duty tujh pe laga di hai

So Raavi will look for a new Aim in Life❤️

Amazing update 👏❤

Ye dev ko kyu aana tha samne 😶

Raavi attempts suicide again 🙀

Accha huaa sabko time pe ptaa chal gyaa

Thank god she promised 😢

All are so happy seeing that changes in her ❤

Cont soon 🤗

To good Ananya!!
Love this journey so far 💕

I’m so exited about Raavi her road to happiness. The things she will discover about herself, like her dreams, what she wants is her life and of course her relationship with Shiva. 💕

Study procrastination? 😂

Good luck with your study🤗

Argh Dev! Why oh why? He should have at least asked Shiva before coming to apologize. It was absolutely 💔💔to see her try to take her life again. Glad they called him in time to make her understand. Special mention to how you're showing Shiva taking care of Raavi. For research, I was looking into how to behave with someone in similar situations, and many things I read from those who are depressed is to never tell them constantly about how they should feel and to think of others. They're already taking this kind of step because they feel worthless and burden. If we tell them to think of others, they are given more examples that solidify their believes. Instead, show them how much they're loved, remind them of things they loved to do, their memory where there was so much fun, and of all the things that are left in their bucket list. And Shiva seems to be doing that as he helps her handle those urges and tried to help her return to previous normalcy and I just want to thank you for writing that.

I look forward to what's next and how Shiva will help her find a new purpose in life.

I normally don’t comment on fan fictions, but I had to post a comment to say that this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. You are doing a great job with the writing-please do keep it up!

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

I normally don’t comment on fan fictions, but I had to post a comment to say that this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. You are doing a great job with the writing-please do keep it up!

I think this is meant for Ananya