ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 33

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Posted: 4 years ago

confusion hi confusion ๐Ÿคฃ

loved the update!

hope shiva says that him and rishita got married and dev throws a fit ๐Ÿ˜†

my favorite part was riskhita's realization that dev doesn't do anything ๐Ÿ˜†

update soonish! (your wala soonish not mine ๐Ÿ˜‰)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

confusion hi confusion ๐Ÿคฃ

Solution kuch pata nahin

loved the update!

Thank you MBZ๐ŸŒน

hope shiva says that him and rishita got married and dev throws a fit ๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ‘

my favorite part was riskhita's realization that dev doesn't do anything ๐Ÿ˜†

Kahan phans gayi main wala reaction

update soonish! (your wala soonish not mine ๐Ÿ˜‰)

Mera wala soonish is actually quite soon. Typing is fast๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Omggg!!! I thought only raavi was mad in this story and only she can plan something like that but Shiva toh raavi se bhi char kadam aage nikala๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ


Awesome updateโค๏ธ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

Omggg!!! I thought only raavi was mad in this story and only she can plan something like that but Shiva toh raavi se bhi char kadam aage nikala๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ


Awesome updateโค๏ธ

Thank youu๐Ÿซ๐Ÿซ๐ŸŒน

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Posted: 4 years ago

For dev it was perfect punishment ๐Ÿ˜‚ . whatever rishita was going through janab will experience same.I liked the fact that shiva didn't let anyone to speak anything bad about ravi n he was hell bemt on punishing dev for even thinking about ravi .It's true just because girls knew about dev n shiva , doesn't mean dev is not at fault.He has been indecisive n in result was at the verge of destroying two lives.Ravi knew what she was doing n at the end of the day no one is going to get hurt.Shiva loves her n she will get him even by crook n rishita gets dev but I really feel sorry for her what has she liked in him.Her disappointment wqs genuine.loved the update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hilarious update, Shiva is as mad as Raavi๐Ÿคฃ

Somnath ka Ranjha perfect words by Gaumbi๐Ÿคฃ

Shiva is hell bent on punishing Dev, now Dev will burn๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Rishita's realisation that Dev didn't do anything was hilarious๐Ÿ˜†

Poor Gaumbi, he was so tensed, the youngsters are giving him back to back shocks๐Ÿ˜†

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Shiva is soooo meaan ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

But Damn if Dev doesn't deserve it ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Uuff Krish my little beaan. He needs to learn to summarise his story into points ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

His tales kept going in circles and he kept losing his direction making his brothers so frustrated ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

He has the attention span of a kitten/puppy ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


I see you've released a full on POSSESSIVE Shiva for us. The Man won't even let his little brother jokingly say anything about his Woman ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

And here Dev was about to go and marry HIS Chipkali ? No no no no ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

He can't, won't EVER let that happen. He was about ready to go burn his brother for even thinking about his Raavi ๐Ÿ˜‚


Dev so totally deserves it !! I know his intentions were good, but he kept both parties hanging by a brittle thread ! What was he suppose to expect ? That Rishita STILL texts him on the eve of his wedding ? God damn it, Dev man come on ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Shiva is just... hot ๐Ÿ”ฅ
I just don't have any word to describe how FREAKING happy I am that these two found their way back to each other !

Rishita SAVED !! Wohoooo !!
I love how she immediately fit into the brothers ! The moment she said yes to Shiva's plans, Shiva knew this girl is gonna fit into their family okay ๐Ÿ˜‚
Even Rishita got her chance to take badla on Dev ๐Ÿ˜‚


Becharaa Gaumbhi, ab ghar mein koi shanti nahi milungi ! Stay strong Gaumbhi ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…


Fav line;

"Main aapko pehle hi warn kar raha hoon Gaumbi! Maami ki behen ki beti ki shaadi aapne Dev se karane ki koshish ki to main uske mandap par pahunchne se pehle hi use bhaga ke le jaunga. Aur woh mere saath aa bhi jayegi!"

Because Shiva threatening his older brother for the first time is jussst so damn funny to mee ! Especially when he said Raavi would willingly go with him ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Great jooob โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ab Want to see dev ka reaction.๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ


Sahi bat h , dev ko bhi ehsaas hona chahiye ki uski chuppi ka asar kya hone wala tha ๐Ÿ’ฏ


Sahi plan bnaya shiva ne , ab dev ko samajh aayega .


But I m feeling sympathetic for gaumbi ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Bechare ka ham sath sath hai wala ghar , andaz apna apna ban gya ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ


Raavi shiva krish rishita ๐Ÿ˜ sab ek se badkar ek h


Waiting for next part

Cont soonโค

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

For dev it was perfect punishment ๐Ÿ˜‚ . whatever rishita was going through janab will experience same.I liked the fact that shiva didn't let anyone to speak anything bad about ravi n he was hell bemt on punishing dev for even thinking about ravi .It's true just because girls knew about dev n shiva , doesn't mean dev is not at fault.He has been indecisive n in result was at the verge of destroying two lives.Ravi knew what she was doing n at the end of the day no one is going to get hurt.Shiva loves her n she will get him even by crook n rishita gets dev but I really feel sorry for her what has she liked in him.Her disappointment wqs genuine.loved the update.


Shiva doesnt blame his girl. And even if he does it will be between them. Dev on the other hand...

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